Quicksilver drifting ~~
Moonbeams drip
The gloaming:
From somewhere...
Sounds of birds
Flying home,
In the scent of a star
The fading copper shadows—-
Alone;
Dreaming on a starburst
I defy my mind to write a poem ..
Quicksilver drifting ~~
Moonbeams drip
The gloaming:
From somewhere...
Sounds of birds
Flying home,
In the scent of a star
The fading copper shadows—-
Alone;
Dreaming on a starburst
I defy my mind to write a poem ..
yaskhan 
That final line is wonderful 😊
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Oh , thank you , Nick.
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I love the imagery used here. Your words created a sense of wonder and hopeful expectation. Well written!
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Thank you very much, Brad .. 😊
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Absolutely beautiful! 🙌 I love it when poems tell a story and create a vivid image ✨💕
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Thank you, Elsie. I am delighted with your comment. Thank you 🙏🏼
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I was blown away! Wow💖🌹
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Thank you, sweet , kind one ! I am honoured 🙏🏼
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It is my utmost pleasure😘😘
Have a nice day🌸🌸
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You have a nice week what’s left of it. Stay safe. Be well
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You too😘❤
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‘I defy my mind to write a poem’……awesome 🤗🤗
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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I agree with Nick’s comment. You last sentence made the already great poem a reality, Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, George .
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another gift, just shared. 🙂
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/26/quicksilver-drifting-yassy-yas-khan/
Thanks for posting.
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Am pleased as punch .,thanks 😊
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Great, just please don’t punch! Not the face, anyway.. 😉 Have a great one.
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Lol I would never 😌
Thanks anyway.. you have a good one too .
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How beautiful and the end stole the show.
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Thank you, Shantanu .
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My pleasure. Thank you for correcting it
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Of course , S . No worries.
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🌸😊
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I meant show. Please correct it for me.
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👍
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Loved the imagery in this! My favourites were “scent of a star” and “fading copper shadows”.
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Yesssssss thank you 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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😊
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Ah, this is my beautiful and my unbelievable talented Yassy.
Alone;
Dreaming on a starburst
I defy my mind to write a poem ..
and
Alone;
Dreaming on a starburst
I pay tribute to your poetry
xoxoxoxo
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You are a wonderfully generous girl .. you say the most fabulously awesome compliments..
Thank you , G. Bless you , my High Priestess of Poetry.
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I say then because you deserve them and you have a special place in my heart.
xoxoxo
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Gaby 🤗🙏🏼
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🌹💕
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💖🌺🎉🧜🏻♀️💫
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Simply amazing! Felt this
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Thank you kindly 🙏🏼
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The first poem that I’ve read in a while. As always, lovely and inspiring. A great beginning as I return to the WordPress world 🙂
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Thank you, Fall.. lovely to see you back.
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🙂
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😊
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A beautiful poem, Yassy.
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Thank you, Robbie .
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The words fell like stardust. Loved the poem. 💕
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Thank you, Sumi 💖🙏🏼
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We are glad that you are so defiant.😉
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More like ‘rebel’ lol 😝
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“In the scent of a star
The fading copper shadows—-” OH WOWZA, GOOD!!!
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Thank you, wise one 💖
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You craft words perfectly, I love your blog!
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Thank you 😊
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Magical and beautiful. 💕😊😊
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Thank you, Sparkling Freeze.
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Amazing… every line. But the “scent of a star” really carried my fancy away. And I love the ending. Beautiful, Yassy. 💗🌟💫✍️
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Thank you so much, Lia. 💕
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What can I say that hasn’t been said before about this poem here? It’s so beautiful. It is immersive with rich and intricate detail in cosmic imagery with defiant revelations! 😉
The final three lines are my favorite. They are amazing and I can just delve into those words and resonate with them. It’s like a slow meteorite to ride on and picture; the imagery just grabs you.
Amazing writing yet again. You are a talented wordsmith.
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You wrote a very poetic comment. I keep coming back to read your beautifully eloquent thoughts on my work and I feel so happy. My mind has shut down and I hope by reading your words of appreciation I will be able to write again.
Thank you dear Lucy. You have done a lot for me with your kindness. Thank you nag take care.
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Love the last line…
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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My pleasure 💐
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😊
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Incredible. 👏
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Thank you 😊
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