Quicksilver Drifting

Quicksilver drifting ~~
Moonbeams drip
The gloaming:
From somewhere...
Sounds of birds
Flying home,
In the scent of a star
The fading copper shadowsβ€”-

Dreaming on a starburst
I defy my mind to write a poem ..

64 thoughts on “Quicksilver Drifting

  1. Amazing… every line. But the “scent of a star” really carried my fancy away. And I love the ending. Beautiful, Yassy. πŸ’—πŸŒŸπŸ’«βœοΈ

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  2. What can I say that hasn’t been said before about this poem here? It’s so beautiful. It is immersive with rich and intricate detail in cosmic imagery with defiant revelations! πŸ˜‰

    The final three lines are my favorite. They are amazing and I can just delve into those words and resonate with them. It’s like a slow meteorite to ride on and picture; the imagery just grabs you.

    Amazing writing yet again. You are a talented wordsmith.

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    1. You wrote a very poetic comment. I keep coming back to read your beautifully eloquent thoughts on my work and I feel so happy. My mind has shut down and I hope by reading your words of appreciation I will be able to write again.
      Thank you dear Lucy. You have done a lot for me with your kindness. Thank you nag take care.

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