Yeah , I kept the punctuations out on purpose. I want it to lead the mind into different perceptions.. the reader should always have the freedom to think .. I don’t like things that are cut and dried. Freedom of thought is important. Let the mind and heart roam free
Thank you for your comment. Your connect sets me thinking … again.
It’s hard to be brave when the sloganeers have sent you into battle too many times with a cardboard sword, and an admonition to be brave, but you keep returning wounded by a steel sword. It might be best to avoid the final admonition to die for a lost cause. A different way?
Being born into this habitat is like being sent into a war zone .. destiny keeps admonishing saying life is not a lost cause ., is there ever a different way .. we always think there may be a different way but we are all just vulnerable somehow no matter what sword you carry !!
yaskhan 
I feel enraged.
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Yeah I hear you, I hear you 🤗
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🥲🥹
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🤗
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The ambiguities and double meanings here are what make it so great. Just shows how punctuation (or the lack of it) can make a poem! Love this one!
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Yeah , I kept the punctuations out on purpose. I want it to lead the mind into different perceptions.. the reader should always have the freedom to think .. I don’t like things that are cut and dried. Freedom of thought is important. Let the mind and heart roam free
Thank you for your comment. Your connect sets me thinking … again.
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You’ve captured so much with such grace and style, Yassy. I know just this feeling. Perfect
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You are too kind, Ryan. Thank you for such a beautifully thoughtful comment.
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Not kind, just honest. It’s stunning 🙂
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🙂
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It’s hard to be brave when the sloganeers have sent you into battle too many times with a cardboard sword, and an admonition to be brave, but you keep returning wounded by a steel sword. It might be best to avoid the final admonition to die for a lost cause. A different way?
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Being born into this habitat is like being sent into a war zone .. destiny keeps admonishing saying life is not a lost cause ., is there ever a different way .. we always think there may be a different way but we are all just vulnerable somehow no matter what sword you carry !!
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I eclipse / The shadow I cast / Noon of night
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In the shadow I bask
Wrapped in night
Lap of the moon
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In shadow
Night’s lap-dancing moon
I eclipse
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Eclipsed
Within the darkness
I wait for the light
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You’re the light
In a veil’s shadow
Uneclipsed
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Shadowed
I make light
Of the dark
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Is it less brave or wiser?
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More wiser !
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First time I have actually seen that video… always liked the song. It is hard to be brave with every escalating newscast.
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Yes, Leigh !
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Me either. 🍀
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Thank you 💃
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All my pleasure.
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Mine too 🙋🏻♀️
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#love
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#gratitude
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Trying to be hopeful, but “the rain it raineth every day” as the Bard put it.
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Well said. Thank you.
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Yeah.absolutely true.I am feeling as you.💕💕💕💕💕
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As Pablo Picasso said-Every destruction is the art of new creation.But I am most hurting in myself.😥
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Don’t be sad 🤗
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🍁🤗🍁
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