each night you leave me
and go to the other
side of the world
to make their day bright.
in the darkness of the night
the moon comforts me
she sheaths me in her
silver shining light
the stars dazzle me
with their twinkling brilliance
as slumber overtakes me
I sleep the night away
waking up to find you
all around me
engulfing me with your warmth
I like it !!!
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Thank you kind Sir.
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You have great work! Thanks for checking out my blog (: hope you find some stuff good enough to share
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I love the title as well as the poem and it’s sentiment… yup… me too … that’s ‘my kinda sun’ (though on my side of the world this morn a different kind of sun rules… an invisible one!!)
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It’s cloudy here too. Monsoon time.
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I like the lines:
“she sheaths me in her
silver shining light”
I’m the fan of the moon and those lines capture its beauty and mystery.
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Thank you Iphios
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This is beautiful …
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Simple.. Short. Beautiful
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Thank you TM
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Ahh.. TM.. Now there’s something that’ll confuse my mom *scratches head* uhm.. Ure welcome..
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Yup Treason , that better?
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Ummm.. Why don’t you call me Timi.. I’m Nigerian.. We like first name relationships.. 😂😁😁
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Timi,,it is. Bye Timi.
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Yea.. Ok😊.. G’nite
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What’s with the name, if you don’t mind me asking. You don’t have to answer. If you don’t want to.
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Darkness hangs over
Horizons close to me
I see only stars
And wonder where you might be
Somewhere and circling
A light for darkened ness
Please do return
Its time to rise and blaze this mess
I picture your warmth
In the back of my eyes
A fire in the sky
The light of all life
And only…and only
When clouds hang over
And dull your happiness
A million lights
Couldnt bring me back from distress
Wish youd return
My burning satellite
I need you now
Warm me up forever…make it bright
I picture your rays
Through tightly shut eyes
A fire inside
The proof im alive
And only…and only
Im turning my my gaze
Up into the air
No fluro or neon
Can ever compare
And only…and only
Wait…
I see a light
I see your shine
Radiating out from out in space
This…
Could just enlight
All of the grey
A rainbow of colours to replace
All of the dullness
All of thats been done
Theres only one
My kinda sun…
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Whao. Wow. You wrote an epic piece. Brilliant. Fantastic. Poet par excellence.
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It’s your poem, post it on your blog , everyone should read thus wonderful piece.
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Inspired by your words…
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You have it in you .
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Thanks yassy
Maybe i will post it.
Have a shot that would go well together.
But have to rewrite it all…
Kind of embarrassed about poetry and that sort of thing..
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Yeah. You do that , it’s great poetry. Amazing. Am so delighted. Real talent like this shouldn’t be hidden. You got the gift of writing. You are a natural.
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Thanks yassy.
Can say all the same for you too…
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Nice poem, see mine 😊😄
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Yeah!
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♥️
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😇
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Why the anonymity ?
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Beautiful Yassy
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Thank you so much , Katey ❤️
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🤗💕
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🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Beautiful.
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Derek .. thank you 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome
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Day and night, sun and moon, light and dark. The beauty is in a contrast where the two sides compliment each other.
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Your comment compliments my verse in a beautifully artistic way. Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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Oooooh, this SO nice, Yassy…very soothing, pretty imagery. I LOVE it!! Hope you’re well, I’ve been missing you lately ❤
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Thank you , Z. Oh ! I miss myself too. Feel lost without writing. Good to see you here.. feeling comforted. You should be rocking well you rockstar buddy of mine. 💕
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Oh my, you are just the sweetest thing–I’m blessed every time you visit me!! “Rockstar buddies”–I love it–YES!!!🍬🍬🍬💖💖💖💖
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You are super sweet .. z💕
We are ‘rockstar buddies’ super duper awesome.. good to have you as my dear friend.. thank you..
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You’re so welcome!💖
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❤️
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Beautiful.. Warm.. Soul soothing.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Yess .. exactly the way you say it. And I love the way you say it. I appreciate.
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Lovely tribute to nature’s light givers!!!!
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Thank you, Dee Min.
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Love the perfect night scene……
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Gratitude 🙏🏼.. thank you for reading.
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That is some kinda wonderful indeed. Love this. Good to know we can count on somethings that are so wonderful. Thanks for sharing. xoxo
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Thank you for a wonderful comment .. it’s good to know we can count on nature if nothing else.
Be well.
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A beautiful tribute to our loving sun. Well written, Yassy. Really loved this!
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Thanks, Brad.
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Beautiful!
The sun and the moon almost play a game. Hide and seek. They interact well. Both are precious and light up the atmosphere. Well written!
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Thank you , Poetpas.
Sun and the moon play a game of peek a boo 👻.. well, I guess their interaction gives us day n night .
Thanks 🙏🏼
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Welcome 🤗
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🤗
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☺️
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🆒
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Beautiful 💖🌺
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Thank you 🤗
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This is beautiful and so soothing!
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Thank you , Jay !
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Beautiful expression of Love for Sun and starry night.❤️yeah.we all want warmth of your kinda Sunny days and coolness of starry nights.very well written, dear yassy!!✨🌞xxxxxxx
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So beautiful
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Love this so much ☀️
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Thank you 🙏🏼 🤗
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Love this and also the sun and golden warmth on my skin too! We are missing the sun here in the southern hemisphere – it has been months of rain! Looking forward to when the storms pass and the sun shines again!
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You stay warm , T. Missed you .. good to hear from you. Thank you my dear friend for stopping by. 💕
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Thanks, will do. I have been a bit busy but good busy. Hope you are keeping well. Take care 💖
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I am well, thank you. You take good care of yourself ❤️
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Great expression in this fine piece. 🖤
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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So dazzling !!!
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Thank you 💕
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All pleasures are mine !
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This really touched me Yassy ❤️
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Thank you so much , Lorraine ❤️
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love the serenity in your words Yassy! 💖
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Thank you, Cindy 🥰
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Always Yassy! 💖
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🤗
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🤗💖
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💕
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Almost a sonnet – and it reminds me in a way of Shakespeare’s sonnet “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” Your Sun could be a lover too.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45108/sonnet-130-my-mistress-eyes-are-nothing-like-the-sun
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Wow 🤩 that’s interesting!!!
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Beautiful poem!
Thank you for liking my post!
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Thank you 🙏🏼 and very welcome .
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