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My Swan-song

Gold sun rising 
Echo of warmth 
On the wings of birds
Drawing the deepest breaths
Fragrant harmony plush
In the pulse of blooms 

I see the sunflowers turn to the ultramarine 
Creaming the air
A coagulation of hues
As flowers burn hot on the horizon 
Whisper of petals reveal the rapture of forgotten fantasies 
Rolling into the heartbeat of time 

Rain forged clouds stir the ether 
Smelling like sanctity 
The mystics of sensitive wisdom 

I fall in love with the universe again 

Its like seeing the inside of a raindrop 

My swan song is a whimsy wanderlust

Blue ~ my ink
I daydream into my page.

144 thoughts on “My Swan-song”

  6. So many beautifully crafted lines pertaining to nature that it just takes my mind to another place while my soul relates and reads.🌹. To see inside of a raindrop would be a lovely miracle as a raindrop is a thing of beauty to sing on its own. Yassy, you are amazing!🌹♥️

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    1. Thank you, Roy. Beautifully crafted comment as always you shine when you comment. Lovely beautiful thoughts .. thank you .
      It’s been ages since I read you. Heading your way now. 🤗🙏🏼

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  12. I awake from a long sleep to find myself still filled with jealousy with the masterful workings of your mind. Goodness me how the colors of your poetry lends such literal color to this. Beautiful!

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  20. I’m happy to see you post something and I’m liking it already. I’ve only read 2 or 3 times so far. The flow, the choice of words, interesting combinations. I fall in love with the universe – an excellent daily practice. Inside a raindrop. Thanks for sharing this. Wonderful.

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    1. Thank you my dear friend. I think your constant support and appreciation has helped in ways that I can’t even begin to explain. I have my own battles like everybody else and I am truly grateful to you for the kindness you always show me.
      Take good care of yourself.

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  29. Hey, Yassy. What joy to read this. ‘My Swan Song’ I love the universe and its many facets and features. Cannot get enough of it. But you express it much better than I ever could.
    I especially loved:
    “Rolling into the heartbeat of time“ and,
    “Its like seeing the inside of a raindrop“

    Aww. Brilliant. Thanks for sharing. I’m honored.

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    1. I am so honoured that my work is read and appreciated..

      Very very happy , Selma. Thank you so much. Means the world to me .. keeps me going. Your generous appreciation gives me the impetus that fires my inspiration. I am truly grateful.. 🙏🏼🤗

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  38. I fall in love with the universe again – my favourite line as I fall in love with your poetry again! Glad to read your poetry again Hope you are keeping well and safe. Peace and blessings 😊🙏🏻

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      1. I am well, have been busy with studies, just finished last month. Thanks for asking, glad to have a bit of free time. How are you? Hope you have been keeping well. Peace and blessings, hugs and love also

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      1. I’m so glad you’re well!
        It’s been quite the year, but I’m okay, and very grateful for that. Very sad that Australia has turned into a police state for no good reason. It’s outrageous. Am in shock about that. Strange times indeed.
        I’m glad I have a little time to get back on WP now Darrin is a lot better. It’s so great to read you again. 💚

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  41. Swan song? Are you going somewhere? Well so, the general metaphor, I suppose. Enjoyed this and I saw: Flapping birds sound the warmth echo of a flap slap at the sky, riding on a feather to inhale the fragrance on a plush dream pillow when blooms stretch in animated time sounding out a heart throb lub-dub blues beat, music of the soul dream, teardrops for the clouds to weep and nourish the soil of love again.

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  48. Mesmerising as always Yassy full of incredible imagery! 👏👏😁😁 Wondering could you follow me on my new blog over on kenhume31.wordpress.com as I’ll be deleting this one tomorrow night and greatly appreciate your support and feedback?! 😁 Long story except to say it’s for personal reasons.

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