Beautiful brevity. I love your words ๐ I too have learned more about myself (and the world) by writing poems over the last nine months, than a life-time of self-help books or therapy visits could deliver. ๐
Wow. I don’t think I’ve ever had such a short poem affect me so deeply. This is everything and truly beautiful! I hear visually and immediately got an image of You with Your shadow being all the wonderful words You’ve written….truly lovely. Sending huge hugs Your way!!! Thank You! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
My absolute pleasure, Yassy! Thank You for the warm hugs, laughter and smiles! I say YES please!; see You those and raise You one hilarious moment during the weekend that makes You laugh so hard tears of hilarity stream down Your lovely face! ๐คโค๏ธ๐ ๐๐
This is so beautiful Yassy.๐๐๐
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Thank you my good friend, Michy., how you doin?
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Been trying to make the most out of the current pandemic Yassy…how are you in there?
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Hanging in there. We will survive this one too. You take care.
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Brief, but so beautiful …
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Thank you very much , Carolyn ๐
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You’re welcome!
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๐
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The depth of feelings in the right way… Beautiful!
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Thank you ๐
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Wow, beautifully penned and heartfelt. Loving this one. โค It is very emotional and evocative. Excellent piece!
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Thank you, Lucy. Thank you very much โค๏ธbless you.
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Beautiful writing!โค๏ธ
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Thank you ๐คโค๏ธ
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Lovely, Yassy. I am glad you are using this time to find meaning in your life.
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Yissss indeed ๐thank you , Robbie. Are the boys writing?
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Greg and I are going to record another story reading tomorrow and Michael and I are making vanilla biscuits this afternoon.
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Awesome ๐
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This is so you, Yasmin! Beautifully penned! โค
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Thank you, Brad. Happy safe weekend ๐
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You are certainly a natural! xoxo
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Thank you, Jason. Take care. Happy and safe weekend to you.
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With
Eleven words
Three lines and
Four seconds
You told a whole life’s story.
Good one, Yassy.
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A wonderfully insightful comment from you.
Thank you
Stay safe. Bless you bless you ..
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… and isnโt that a good feeling!
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It certainly is ๐thank you.
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AYE-YAH! ๐
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Aye ๐
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Yes!!!! ๐
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Yesssss!!!! ๐
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Yes you have. .
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Lovely โฃ๏ธ
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Thank you ๐๐
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You’re welcome โฃ๏ธ๐ค
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Beautiful brevity. I love your words ๐ I too have learned more about myself (and the world) by writing poems over the last nine months, than a life-time of self-help books or therapy visits could deliver. ๐
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Perfectly right. I love the wisdom in your words. Thank you , Michele.
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Short and sweet – like you!
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Thank you, Christy. Stay safe. Be well.
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No no! We don’t want more of you Please be someone else, someone less mean.
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You really said that , Sudanshu????
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Well, someone had to say the truth, Yasmin.
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Peace โฎ๏ธ
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of cake.
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You can have your peace of cake and eat it too, Chopra.., more like a cake walk for you.
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And for you it would be more like a Yas-moon walk.
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Sudan shoe
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Yeah I am aware of ladies’ obsession with shoes.
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Boo to you , Chopra ! Shoe bites .
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Bites, hickeys…whatever floats the boat.
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Yes, Captain ๐จโโ๏ธ Chopra ๐
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Me too – it strips the layers – some are uncomfortably painful to remove. Poetry does so with grace. Love this โค๏ธ
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Thank you ๐๐ผ๐ค
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Oooh, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!! โค
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Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuโค๏ธ๐ค
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You’re most welcome, dear heart โค
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๐ค hugs.
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I love this!!!
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Thank you ๐
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Wonderful! ๐
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Oh my! Nice!!!
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Thank you.
You okay , nah
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Yup! You?
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I am good , kunalji lol ๐
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….perfect….
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Thank you.
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Very cool way to describe yourself, fellow poet.
Art
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Thank you, Lou. Take care my good friend..
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Stunning and the meaning is breathtaking. ๐ Yassy. I love this so much. ๐
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Thanks, Charlie. I go hop over to decipher yours now.
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You are welcome Yassy. ๐
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Authenticity at it’s finest. Hope you are keeping safe and well. Peace and blessings ๐
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You are your poetry and your poetry is you.
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And I like the poetry in your comment
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Wonderful Words.I have Nominated you dear for the Vincent Ehindero Award.Do check it out by clicking on the link below:
https://perseveroflife.wordpress.com/2020/04/21/vincent-ehindero-award/
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Amazing, short, and sweet!
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Thank you, Eugenia ๐ค
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i’m also on my way to be me.
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Awesome ๐..thank you.
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Take care ๐ค
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Wow. I don’t think I’ve ever had such a short poem affect me so deeply. This is everything and truly beautiful! I hear visually and immediately got an image of You with Your shadow being all the wonderful words You’ve written….truly lovely. Sending huge hugs Your way!!! Thank You! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Thank you sweet Kate.
Sending you warm warm hugs and lots of laughter and smiles. Take good care ๐ค.
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My absolute pleasure, Yassy! Thank You for the warm hugs, laughter and smiles! I say YES please!; see You those and raise You one hilarious moment during the weekend that makes You laugh so hard tears of hilarity stream down Your lovely face! ๐คโค๏ธ๐ ๐๐
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How lovely to talk to you here, Kate. Thank you sooooooo much. Thank you my gorgeous friend. ๐
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My pleasure all-ways!!! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Every which way is poetry a la WP.
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Love it! ๐
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Thank you my sweetest โค๏ธ
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Absolutely!!! ๐คโค๏ธ๐๐ธ๐
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Thank you ๐
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thanks for the food for thought ๐
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You are welcome, Tania.
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You have a wonderful way with words. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you, Anand.
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Perfect!
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Beautiful. Brief, succinct, to the point. Love it. ๐
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Thank you, Phil ๐
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Thank you for saying something so substantive with so few words. You have demonstrated the beauty and power of poetry.
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Thank you very much , Jill. Stay safe my dear.
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Like Eliot – ‘I have measured my life in coffee spoons’ – only poems are definitely better. Especially when they are your poems. Keep safe.
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Thank you, V. Stay safe. Thank you again.
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Prufrock measured his ” with coffee spoons,”
Have a nice day
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Yup ๐ and I think of is poetry ๐๐๐ผ
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๐น๐น๐น๐น๐น
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Wow. Yes and yes again ๐
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Yesssssss ๐
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