An alien came knocking on earth's door. Or so she thought. Mother Earth thought not to open...Earth was closed to strangers now. Not only strangers but strange and foreign things only withstanding Kubrick's Doctor Strangelove.There had been enough contamination and pollution of all natural resourses. Purity was depleted on all levels. And earth definitely could not take another beating.
Earth needed a breather......
The knocking continued. Mother Earth decided to open the door. But her sense of foreboding forbade her from doing so and she decided to see who it was who had come calling. She never liked turning anyone away but times were so bad now, she'd rather see her visitor before letting them in. She put her eye to the peephole in earth's door, she could see no one..she started to turn away when there was another knock. She took a peek again, still no sight of anything or anyone, just miles and miles of space...
And then she saw a spark that faded gradually, it was a shooting star......catching her breath quickly, she made a wish...she made a wish for her earthlings...that the planet would become clean and green again. She wished for peace and prosperity ...for all posterity.
Hoping that we as a human race would last that long...
April night--
Somewhere in the darkness
A shooting star falls;
Cereus blooms become
Syllables in the night's silence:
The sepia of free falling metaphors..
The horizon becomes my Milky Way...
I finally feel like the poet in poetry....
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Yassy, first let me say, don’t ever doubt yourself, you are a poet.
With your writing talent and creativity, there are infinite possibilities where your poetry can go. To the Milky Way and beyond.
Beautiful piece.
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Ah ! Drew , that is so sweet of you. Thank you ..
thank you from the Milky Way. May the stars light your way.
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If there is any star that could light the way, it o doubt is you.
Have a beautiful day. LIght the way with your brilliance.
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I am a fan of your work , Drew.
You have a wonderful, beautiful day too. Yoohoo, me is overwhelmed geeeeeee
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I second that.
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Thank you, Pranab.
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You are welcome Yas.
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Your writing is gorgeous
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thank you sweet sweet girl π€
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Awww you are welcome! Lots of love from here β€οΈ
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This is great, Yassy. You should feel like the poet in poetry.
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Thank you , Robbie. I guess I needed validation from wonderful poets writers on WP.
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Well, you have it from me. Hugs.
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Hugs back .. your the best , Robbie.
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This is so beautifully unique and uplifting . I love to read your writing Yassy. It makes my day! π€πΊ
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Thank you, Holly. What a wonderful uplifting comment. You made not my day but my entire week.
Take care ππ€
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Ahhh! I wish I could but have a wonderful week Yassy. β€οΈ
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You take good care , Holly. π€
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thank you Yassy, I will, you too by all means π€
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Excellent, as always!
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Thank you, Luisa β€οΈ
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So poetic! This was wonderful….and you are a brilliant poetβ€πΈπΈπΉ
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Thank you, Ishππ€πΈπΊ
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My pleasureπΉ
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Do not let the common doubts we have as writers make you question your talent, skill, and beauty with the written word. You are an exceptional poet! More importantly you are a generous, genuine, and caring person. I loved this poem, but I have yet to find something you have written that I don’t enjoy. Take care and stay safe! β€
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You are very good with the written word , Brad. I admire your work immensely. Everybody I follow here inspires me in some way.
Thank you very much for your warm gesture of encouragement and appreciation..
you stay safe and take good care of yourself.
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‘Green and clean again’ like the whole poem, I liked that a lot, Lady Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, Lord Zoolon.
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Just beautiful. Enchanted. Poet no doubt.
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Excellent
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Sorry! I meant “you’re welcome”! π
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The poet in all of us is the poets we are in the infinite stars. I love it, Yassy. π
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YOWSA!
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Wowzer thanks π
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What a wonderful piece, I’m glad to have someone like you as a mentorπ
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I’m afraid I’ll sink,
So I always dread swimming,
But I yearn to feel the waves brushing against my face,
The feeling of ecstasy as the tides carry me along,
I know I’ll gasp for breath at a point,
My arms will get tired of stroking the water,
I’ll be cut by unknown objects in the sea,
But this yearningΒ
grows on regardless,
Maybe I’m not meant to swim,
Maybe I’m not meant to endure these pains,
Maybe I’m not meant to get tired whiles struggling,
Maybe I’m meant to walk proudly on the sea,
To triumph once and for all,
And not after several desperate tries,
Maybe I’m meant to be the phoenix that never dies,
The one that lives in the perpetual glory of immortality,
The phoenix that was always risen.
Kindly check it out for me
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This is awesome π
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Thank you so much. This means soo much to me
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Very nice, Yassy. π
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Thanks, Syd.
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WOW WOW WOW!! The poet in the poetry, you’re Brilliant!!!
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Thank you, Avia. π
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Most welcome!
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This is so beautiful Yassy
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Thank you, Judei.
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My pleasure
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You are a remarkable poet and your writing has that magic in it which draws people in. I love your work. Stay safe dear and keep shining the light of love. β€οΈπ
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Thank you so much , Sona. The best to you with your book. You take good care of yourself.. stay safe.
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. This is absolutely poignant and visceral. Your words are entwined with such stunning imagery of the cosmos. Just wow! Another amazing piece. π
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Thank you, dear friend from across the universe. You are the star βοΈ in the cosmos.
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π thanks , Grant.
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YVW!
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Truly brilliant writing! I had to share! I think these are words we all can feel.
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Thank you π
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Gosh, Yassy. I love this so very much! This is one of the truly sweetest poems ever. Read it a couple of times. My heart is smiling so big. I’m so happy You feel like the poet in poetry again! I didn’t realize that had escaped You for a bit….I never would have known….You and poetry seem as one beautiful fibre to me in this crazy/wonderful tapestry of life. Sending HUGE hugs Your way! Thank You!!! π€β€οΈπ
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Thank you so very much for your heart warming thoughts , Kate. Sending warm warm hugs and lots of smiles and laughter. Thank you for cheering me up. Bless you bless you β€οΈπ€
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My absolute pleasure, Yassy! Thank YOU for cheering ME up!!! A cheer circle! Sending You the hugest hugs….π€ππΌππ¦π
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Cheers to you too , Katey .. cheers and hugs π€ , sending you heartfelt hugs.
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Heartfelt hugs coming right back at You!!! I think we are all sending so many HUGE hugs round the world that the airplanes are going to have a very tough time landing!!! π π€π€π€β€οΈ!
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You should write a verse after this epic , heart warming comment that spilled from your generous heart.
Sending a plane βοΈ load of hugs. Knock knock, courier on the way .. just for you my sweet kind one.
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Ah! MOST wonderful! I excitedly wait its arrival! We cleared a tiny landing strip in the meadow behind our house…..πThanks for starting my day so joyfully, Beautiful Yassy!!! π€β€οΈπ
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Subhanallah! Well done, Y!
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Shukran habibi π
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Yassi, thats really cool !!!! take care, all the best, JΓΌrgen
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Thank you, Juerg.. you take care too.
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Stunning Yassy. You are the poet in poetry.
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Thanks, Kate ππΌπ
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Beautiful words of Poetry. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you !
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Yassy, Yassy, Yassy π
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That was nice to read! Thanks for sharing! π
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Thank you ππΌ
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