my song....a whisper of a savoir-faire delight.I catch moments gone astray as the ache of memoirs refrain comes up with the treasure of an old melody.. the strings of guitar scatter harmonious.. breathing tender winds In the turquoise blue of sky, sunbeams melt like dewdrops sparkling fluorescent..exploding heat..the sun's incarnations..a continued omnipresence... for eternity.. trees glitter in gold as sun renews its promise of warmth I submit to the trance of music, fling my emotions to the sky.I feel my vision blur, the crush of tears in my eyes heart lacquers my cheek... like a requiem I inhabit this space called earth.. vibrant sensations notes break like interlude, a rendezvous of synopsis, I waltz into a love anthem. I glide into an awakening of dulcet stave.. I walk the cliffs of Dover with a song in my head... #Haibun
This is a wonderful post!
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Thank you, Devraj.
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Your song is melodious….
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Thank s
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Lovely poem, lovely ending, Lady Yasmin
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Thank you, lord Zoolon.
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The melody your words weave amidst nature, so pure, so inviting , leaves me in a trance. Each prose and the poetry brilliantly blend in, Yasmin dear. Simply outstanding work. Take a bow ❤ !
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Thank you very much, Radha. Your thoughts mean a lot to me. ❤️❤️😘
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Your song..ahhhh its pure solitude yassy..
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Yes, you took the words out of my mouth. Thank you, Michnavs.
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beautiful, peaceful, calming as always dear Yassy. Thank you 🙂
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With people like you around , I come up with this. I have to thank you sweets
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I needed it today dear one. There is a cloud over me that wants to drown out the sweet blessings of the day. So, thank you for making it brighter 🙂
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Am always here for you dear saster , let the cloud burst on you, and let it cleanse your uneasiness, this too shall pass. Am ever hopeful, that may be my biggest problem, I don’t know sweetie pie. You take care
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I feel much better sweet soul sister. Your words are comforting, and I thank God for your hopefulness 🙂 I had an appointment with Bright and now things are bright 🙂
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Am so happy. Be well 😘😘
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Lovely lovely piece. 💛
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Thank you , Imel!💐
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I honestly don’t know how you do it. Your words are magic 🙂
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And your Comment is magic. 😊
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The bluebirds are flying tonight with this wonderful haibun yassy. I love how you have broken the words and lines to keep the rhythm of the piece. e.e. cummings would be proud.
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I am so happy you liked this, Davy. Thank you, my friend.
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🙂
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😊
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This is outstanding, Yassy. I would love to hear it set to music.
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Many many thanks for your generous appreciation, Robbie. Well, poetry is music.
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That is true, but I could see this piece set to music – just lovely!
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🤗🤗🤗😘
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A great haibun poem
Also, these are my favorite lines:
“I submit to the trance of music, fling my emotions to the sky.I feel my vision
blur, the crush of tears in my eyes heart lacquers my cheek…”
I relate to this very much…and I picture you reciting this poem on a YouTube video.
Have you considered making a YouTube video? You should…I feel the passion in your work and how much soul you put into your craft.
Yassy…you are beautiful and lovely. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie !🙂 maybe I will think about what you said.
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Awesome! If you do…let me know and I’ll check out the video. 🙂
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Yeah 🙂
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I’ll most definitely be checking that video out, go on, you nou know you want too” 🙂
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I’ve sailed from, flown over
Those white cliffs of Dover
Memories invoked by your
Haibun its dulcet rousing
Thought provoking charm
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I would love to walk there.
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Many cliffs I have assailed
Walked their tops, such views
An experience I’ll never have
Walking those white Dover cliffs
Alone or err alone with you
Dreams permitting, fantasies,
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Awesome 👏🏻
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What can I say
Thanks wont suffice
Wishes too me thinks
To write a verse
One you can save
Keep in your purse
I have to compose
Words in form
That of you are worthy
My muse you are
Inspirational goddesses
I have sought
On WordPress
Many I have found
But one that sits
On my shoulder
Is indeed you
Yasmin Khan
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You honor me so, Mick my precious buddy !
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Your precious to all around you
Precious Lady I’m glad I found you!
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Likewise, my bestie !
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🙂
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Yasmin,
Please note I am not on my PC, mine was hacked, long story:(
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I am sorry , you be careful.
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Thank you Precious.
Shutting down now,) (Till later, byeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Bye. Hugs
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Fortunately it wasn’t a hack, it was a script error, but it took the other PC and a smart phone to clear it. So I am back on mine now, yay!
Lucky I had my radar on
An saw them coming in
I stood there, caught them
Now my face is all a grin
Thank you…
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I am so relieved.
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So am I, history now, onwards we go.
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Yup
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Oh yes. Any thoughts on the collaboration I mentioned?
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Awesome
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I take that as a Y E S, so be looking out for a pingback, thank you, and I hope you like it 🙂
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Oh yeah yay yippeeee
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Thanks, the pingback should be with you now?
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Pure music to the heart Yassy, a marvelous rendezvous for the mind. What a melodious escape for the reader, this was wonderful!! 🌹🌹
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Thank you, Freezer😂
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You’re welcome Sunshine😁
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I can see the ice cube melt.
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You can make even the coldest of nights warm with your heart warming words Yass.😊
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Nice one
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Thank you.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you , Dwight.
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Amazing poetry. I enjoyed the words and places shared.
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Thank you, John.
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You are welcome Yassy.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome Yassy.
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