A face pressed against a window
A tumbledown shack
Grimy fingers scratch the mud away
Huge black eyes, terror stricken eyes..
There was a deathlike stillness after the explosion.
They had all gone
would they ever return
And if they did
would they come back, scarred and amputated
some reported missing..
why should there be so much hope
in the midst of death
circumstances..
maneouvred by man..
my mind forever shadowed
As I lay prostrate
I could not give Homer or Milton their due
would the war ever end
would my beloveds get a decent burial?
what would life be in the aftermath?
This was not renaisance
This was not metamorphosis
would we ever be whole again?
You have painted an amazingly poignant picture in your very moving, provocative poem… Very, very well-done! Very well-penned, indeed!
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Thank you Jonathan! Your appreciation has made my day.
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As ever, you are most certainly welcome!
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😊!
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This was such an emotional piece. War is never good and you have captured this thought so powerfully in your words.
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I cry and die with each piece that I write. It’s all so heartfelt. I am so happy you understand the gist of my thoughts. It is actually emotionally draining. But I am like that.
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You are a wonderful person yassy that’s why whatever you feel reflects in your writing. Stay blessed!
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Ditto. You stay safe and blessed too.
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This is very moving, Yassy. I can just see those large, dark eyes.
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Yes, I wrote this and now those large dark grief stricken eyes haunt me. Have yourself a wonderful week Robbie. Do you do tv? You remind me of Nigella Lawson.
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Not in the context of recipes. I do TV for my day job from time to time. Thank you, I take that as a great compliment. Enjoy the day.
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Can I see it on you tube. Send me a link.
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Here is my latest interview, Yassy. https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.enca.com_media_video_how-2Dsa-2Dcan-2Dattract-2Dforeign-2Dinvestors&d=DwMFaQ&c=0TzQCy9lgR5hSW-bDg5HA76y7nf4lvOzvVop5GM3Y80&r=gF9wEzwsLlD8vREAiLZxTuSPyzwrs4TMFJzFg38Ro0A&m=fXH2ihAmLMWzl_Ap66mavvnDWL4V4vX7lR2uPMYjTpY&s=qq9Z4MHoVkP6LDMVtG1Wzt-igMEwrHsAW8VlpUAVpbI&e=
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Didn’t open
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Post it on twitter maybe it will open there. I am so disappointed
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What a great poetry Yassy, what people are missing is that what they resists persists. Anti-war will bring about more war. Instead they should be pro-peace, by focusing on peace, like will attract like and that’s law of attraction in action; the powerful secret of the universe.
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you are right Ajibola,,wish everyone thought the same..
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I don’t know what to say…
❤
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❤😘
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This tears the heart yassy. As I read this the news on the radio is about the chemical weapon bomb in Syria. Will certain parts of the human race ever learn.
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Tragic. Sad. Don’t know what’s happening anymore. I don’t want to hear the news , it’s too disturbing and I feel helpless.
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😦
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am delighted to meet a great poet today…
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Am honored
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I loved this…the imagery is so powerful.
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Thank you Red.
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