deep
inside
the essence
of my conscience
a bright burning flame warming my being
the radiance of soul’s enlightenment
a fulfilment
of my dreams
brought to
life
deep
inside
the essence
of my conscience
a bright burning flame warming my being
the radiance of soul’s enlightenment
a fulfilment
of my dreams
brought to
life
Simply beautiful Yassy!
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Thank you Wendell.
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How beautiful is that! To begin with, your titling is very wise. And your words about the radiance of a (albeit not necessarily enlightened) soul brightening up one’s entire being is spot on. Your concrete form is commendable too. Great job, Yasmin!
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Thank you very much. Tell me more about you ‘two’. I love the way you analyze my work. It’s very encouraging and inspiring. Learning is continuity of ones aspirations. That is poetry.
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You are welcome. We love poetry so much that besides writing, we love dissecting a poem 😀, with the intent of getting as much as possible from the piece that has touched us. Honestly, he’s better at it than me, analysing I mean. We have been reading your work and we think you are really good. As far as learning goes, you are right. It’s a continuous process. Your Poetry evolves when you evolve and vice versa.
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I am glad I met you both here
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We are happy to have met you, too, Yasmin!
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I three: I felt not a whit of ill intruding as it were on this so joyous thread. I liked the dissertation differently but as much as the offering, and particularly enjoyed seeing the visual form, one which evoked in my a nostalgia both a part of and apart from your work. Thanks, Yassy! And Thank you, emotional spaces. I will take home your words as well as I mix rye and whole wheat with other flours and form on my favorite board some edible poetry for Christmas morning after a long winter’s ferment.
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You are a good man
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Power and confidence poem. The layout on the page artistic and a perfect picture frame for the words.
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Thanks George.
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How is The Kite Runner?
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Awesome. Can’t keep the book down.
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Brilliant. It is a very special story. There was a film of it I’ve not seen so far.
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We should see the movie
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We should.
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Beautiful. What form is this?
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Tetracyt
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Loved the title and I always love how you say so much in so few words. Lovely!
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Thank you .
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You are quite welcome
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https://tigre23.wordpress.com/2016/12/18/three-day-quote-challenge/
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Beautiful words!
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Thank you Nic!
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Great one! So eloquent and smooth, it flows like spring water!
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Thank you Pure
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Love the conscious you write with Yass, this is eye candy.
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Aw thanks saucer
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;o)
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Brilliant and beautiful yassy.
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Thank you David
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I don’t know which greek muse you abducted to be able to spew such beautiful and intricate words in a brief and concise albeit magnificent manner, all I can say is I always look forward to your posts and They inspire me
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Adonis !
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Well now the entire greek pantheon will be after you
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Oh I really hope so. How exciting is that. And so much poetry lol
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Thanks. Am delighted n honoured
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