So natural, this sense of belonging
An embodiment grounded in earth,
Made from the tangibility of soil.
O people made from clay, people of the soil
Love this earth which gives so much.
The power of ownership of universe
Should have imbibed heart with wisdom
For the veneration of nature and all its goodness
An instinctive sense of ecclesiastical
tending to the soul’s essence, perceiving its immortalness.
A fusion of realism and surrealism
An omnipotent sign warming quintessence
To give an analysis to a sacrament
In ultimate humanity
Faith, the infinitesmal point in the human intellect
As the substanstiability of the spirit
Believes in the purity of that Higher Power
A mortal inspired by His virtue
The devil himself believes in God, but his end will come.
The incorporeal soul and the psyche believes
In the promise of heaven
A heart hopeful of a world with one protocol
The credence that truth will prevail.
This is a very beautiful work. Thanks so much. I have tried to convey in my poems sometimes, the sense of wonder, magic, that is there when I slow the mind to get a peek at what is beyond.. ‘An instinctive sense of ecclesiastical… tending to the soul’s essence…. ‘
But I have never achieved this clarity of expression. Respect! Tony 🙂
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Oh my. Am honoured with this appreciation. Thank you dear poet dear writer.
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beautiful poem
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Thank you Olde
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Absolutely stunning… profound in its depth … moving, thought-provoking and inspirational! A magnificent achievement in poetic prowess!
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Thank you Noble . Your generosity Is much appreciated. Appreciation of one’s work is inspiration to write.
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There is a feel to this that goes beyond your words …
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Ah! You are a true poet. A kindred spirit
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Wonderful! I love this.
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Thank you Nico
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This makes me feel a kindred spiritship also !
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Welcome.
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Absolutely soul-lifting. Your words shine with the beauty of your mind.
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Wow, this one is GOOD! It mirrors the profound intellectual surrealism of Kubrick’s 2001: Space Odyssey (1968).
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Haven’t seen the movie. But he is a film maker I admire
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Of all his films, I like Barry Lyndon, which he shot with only natural and candle light, the best.
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Wow. Really. Have you checked Jim jarmusch
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Not yet, but I just googled him and I think I’ll look up his Coffee and Cigarettes.
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You should see Johnny dep p starter Dead man
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Looks interesting, I’ll check it out.
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Bye Pure.
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Looking forward to your next hymn!
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That will be Coldplay
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Stanley made a movie with Kidman n cruise, you seen that ?
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I’ve heard about it but I haven’t seen it. In general, I like period or retro future films.
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So beautiful! I enjoyed reading a lot.
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Thank you .
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What a beautiful poem ! Lovely !
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Thanks.
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A wonderful, enjoying write. I particularly loved:
“An instinctive sense of ecclesiastical
tending to the soul’s essence, perceiving its immortalness”
Write on!
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Thank you Rob
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Great poem. I believe it is important to recognize the love of God in our life!
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Yes.
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Big words.I love it.
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Thanks
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An achievement of poetic thought-provoking. I love your poem. Heart and soul. 🙂
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Thank you Charles. You have been busy?
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Yes, I’ve been very busy writing and coming up with the next new genre in poetry. I’m always trying to create something new for myself and for all readers. 🙂
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That is what makes it so exciting. New is refreshing. Go for it!!
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🙂 🙂 Always am, and Always will. 🙂
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OMG, you are super fantastic with Words. Compared to my simpleton poems, you are A Star. Your vocabulary is so high, WOW !!
I run to the Dictionary everytime.
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Thank you Cattie. I am deeply honoured with your appreciation. Poetry is always a heartfelt thing , I am impressed with your work.
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Thanks Yaskhan
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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What you been up to? Looking at the stars and the moon and writing their fate, I am sure.
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Powerful!
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Wow! Yasmin! I’m really impressed! ❤
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Thank you Sailaja.
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You are welcome! 😙
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Bye. Have to go. Thank you for talking.
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So in one word. You believe in Climate change and you’re a Theist.
😁 😀
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I believe in all good things and I believe that all good things will come to pass.
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I believe entirely in the opposite. Besides there’s no universal idea of good and evil. Nice poem though. Glad to see you write something long.
😁 😀
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Timi , I agree with you , it’s all in the experience. Goodbye .
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Goodbye. Yasmin. 😆😆😆
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😏🙋🏻
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Don’t make faces at me
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Okay. I won’t
😆😆😅😆😅😆😅
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I have a bone to pick with you, you always agree to disagree with me, for arguments sake, lol 😰
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Of course. It’s the best fun there is on WordPress
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Oh yeah ! REALLy
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I feel the spirit of the poem. Awesome!
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Thank you Maryam
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Cheers!
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What a nice subject you chose. Loved:
“Faith, the infinitesmal point in the human intellect”
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‘A heart hopeful of a world with one protocol
The credence that truth will prevail.’
Beautiful! Namaste 🙂
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🙋🏻💃🏿
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Every word found it’s way to my core. So beautifully written! 😊
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Thank you Nomvelo
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Amazing and I agree.
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Thank you K
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Beautiful poem! It’s wonderful to see a person connected in such a way.
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Many thanks for the appreciation Lois.
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you.
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