I open my window letting in the moonlight
I see an owl on a moonbeam flight
The moon makes silver on my pillow
Runes scatter on the weeping willow
My window dusted with dreams open
Night blooms hold my words, unspoken
Calligraphy of the cosmos in the skies
Changes the color in my eyes
Only the November wind between me and the sky
And all the nature I can descry.
This is so beautiful, Yassy.
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Thanks so much, Robbie 🙏🏼🤗
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*applause*
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Hey, thanks ☺️
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Love this.♥
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Awwwwwweee thanks ☺️ 🙏🏼
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Moonlight magic – beautiful Yassy
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The Duff
Effect
Thank you , Kate.
~Yasmin ~
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Incredible imagery Yasmin, just beautiful!! 😁❤️ Ethereal & hypnotic! 👏👏
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Your ethereal comment gives me hypnotic delight 😁, Ken. Thank you friend.
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Glad to be a source of hypnotic delight my dear! 😉😁
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🙊
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This is a gorgeous beautiful poem Yassy – each and every line!
My window dusted with dreams open – this felt so amazing to me, and then everything that followed stayed amazing.
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Your comment is like stardust sprinkled on my page. Your thoughts sparkle and soak into my brain. The purity of your heart lives on in the comment you portray here. Thank you, you truly are an amazing person.
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My pleasure if I could do any of that, you gave me such amazing smiles :)))
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🤗🤗
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So worth the “Ah” moment.
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A wow comment from you, Latham. My breath went Ahhhh!!! Thank you .. good to see your smiling face here. Brightened up my page no end.
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A beautiful ethereal poem Yassy, love every line.
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Thank you so much, Holly. 🤗
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You are so welcome, your poetry is beautiful!
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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I love this, Yassy.
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Thanks , Sarah 🙏🏼🤗
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Beautiful and enchanting! Well written, Yassy!
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Thank you, Brad.
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Excellent and imaginative.
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Beautiful and creatively productive
Your comment inspires
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Dear yassy!! I had commented on your post,do know whatever i write in comment because I was in sleepy mood yesterday.sorry plz.and try to reply,my dear!!
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I always make it a point to reply to everybody who leaves a comment. But I did not get any from you. I do check my spam for comments too.
So there was no comment from you sorry .. maybe it went into your spam yikes 😬
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Oh.so sorry dear.!! I check it.
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Love the feeling and flow in this verse, nicely done!
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Thank you, Jay.
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Love :))
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Correction duly noted
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Most lovely poem,my dearll coloured in silver cloloured shining covering all things.Weldone,dear!!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Most welcome,my dear!!🌹
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Delightful couplets. Couplets are easy to do, but not easy to do well. Usually they are shallow and trite. Yours are superb.
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Thank you very much , Roger. Nicest thing I heard about my poetry ..so genuine and nice.. gratitude 🙏🏼
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Your lines are so lyrically delivered Yassy!! 💖💖
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Thank you, Cindy 🤗
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pleasure Yassy!💖
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❤️
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grand imagery!
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Thank you, Pat.
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I feel like the effort you put in writing poems deserves to be appreciated.
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Yes, I do put in a lot of effort to perfect my writing. I am honoured and delighted that you understand that. Nobody has told me that before .. made my weekend brighter , Maria. Thank you so much.
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You’re always welcome ✨
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Simply beautiful! A very sensitive description of nature and its relation with the human psyche! Kudos to you!
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Thank you so very much, Arun. Delighted with your comment 🙏🏼
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So very well written. I want to take advantage of this prompt too but it seems a little bit hard
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Thank you, Larry.
Looking forward to reading you .
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Thank you
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Welcome
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Nice Yassy, very nice.
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Thank you 😊
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful, Yassy!
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Thank you, Shreya.
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Where is your next post,my dear yassy!! I was most busy in some important issues.so,I was not on blog.tonight i have seen my blog and your.how are you?my dear angel !! Hope you are fine.bless you.if you like,plz reply me.xxxxxx
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“Calligraphy of the cosmos in the skies…” Absolutely amazing piece.
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Thank you ☺️
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It’s nice to find people who still write poetry that rhymes 🙂 I enjoy your vivid imagery. Be well.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Lovely.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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It even makes my hair silver 😁
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Silver Crown Jewels 🤭
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😊🤭
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