A clever juxtaposition of our usual sensory connections to the rain. I felt distantly numb reading this, like a transient observer of rain molding itself to the shape of my outstretched hand while I myself faded away into the white noise.
If I’ve said it once, I’ve said it again – I adore the enigmatic tones of a short form piece.
They cannot be that difficult. I pull them from the tip of my tongue every day. But to make them delicious – ah, there is the difficulty. Rest assured, your work is most provocative.
I have unfounded – but never fear, I see funding on the rise for mask returns and internet-by-library murder – hopes to get caught up before parts of The World Out Here find out I have slipped inside and maskless and shotless be in some small way cognizant at virus’ diameter is less than 100 nanometers while a surgical mask of highest order allows lots more width and height for such to pass unmolested….oops, got too close to blind-folded dame with sword and scales. Again.
Lovely, Yassy π
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Thank you dear Robby ππ
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Beautifully said Yassy, as natureβs liquid takes all forms.πΉ
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Thank you, Roy π€
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So welcome Yassy dearβ₯οΈ
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The touch of emotion this conveys is so beautiful π
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Thank you, Pragalbha π€
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Beautiful Yassy!
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A clever juxtaposition of our usual sensory connections to the rain. I felt distantly numb reading this, like a transient observer of rain molding itself to the shape of my outstretched hand while I myself faded away into the white noise.
If I’ve said it once, I’ve said it again – I adore the enigmatic tones of a short form piece.
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Thank you, Masa.
Short poems are hard to write. Itβs sensory like you said..
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They cannot be that difficult. I pull them from the tip of my tongue every day. But to make them delicious – ah, there is the difficulty. Rest assured, your work is most provocative.
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Thank you again. Bless you ππΌπ€
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raining pheromones,
patterning a veil of silk
into a parasol ; )
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I sip the rain
Like an aphrodisiac
Wrapping into
A Crystal parasol
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The Crystal beads
wiggling ball bearings
pooling lucid sheen
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Translucent crystalline
The dew on my skin makes it mine
Shining beautiful
Ball bearings
Luminescent bountiful
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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Brilliantly scenic words. π€
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Thank you, Carter ππΌπ€
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It touched emotion. π
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Thank you, Pratik.
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Beautifully expressed, Yas! β€ β€
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Thank you so much , Luπππ€
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This is breathtaking. I miss our conversations.
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I miss you D .
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Ah… Splendid. You are my Queen of Poetry.
xoxo
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Thank you, G ππ
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My pleasure π₯°πΉβ€οΈ
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beautiful Yassy!π
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Thank you, Cindy πππΌ
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You’re so welcome Yassyπ
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Reblogged this on Commentary, Outrages, Prose and Poetry and commented:
Been too long, Lady Yasmin. This one I must send to our pal Bruce Jewett.
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Good to have you back. Hope you are well and safe.
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I have unfounded – but never fear, I see funding on the rise for mask returns and internet-by-library murder – hopes to get caught up before parts of The World Out Here find out I have slipped inside and maskless and shotless be in some small way cognizant at virus’ diameter is less than 100 nanometers while a surgical mask of highest order allows lots more width and height for such to pass unmolested….oops, got too close to blind-folded dame with sword and scales. Again.
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Subtle beauty powerful
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Thank you dear Daninmaya π€
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Your poems lately seem shorter, more tangible, tasteable – is that a word? I like them and I touch them as they do me.
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Tasteable is definitely a Daninmaya word. Love it.
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πππΉthank you
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