Lived a man named Humpty Dumpty
He had two left feet, he was so clumsy.
One day he fell asleep on his couch
Slipped down like an eel, hurt himself ‘ouch’
But then he picked himself up
Sleep walked into the bath tub .
He did not drown, the tub was empty
As the water was out doin a tsunami.
😂 Brilliant, Yas, brilliant. At least Humpty Dumpty hadn’t fallen and couldn’t get up.
I like this version better. Much more imminent for him.
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Awww eeeee thanks so much , Lu ❤️
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Hahahaaaaa loved this thoroughly, such a puppety cutie happyty poem 🤗
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Hahaha 🤪 thanks , G. ❤️🤗
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Mwaaaaah 🤗
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Muah 😘🙏🏼
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He must have been a fresh egg as they sink to the bottom, hence the tsunami, Yasmin. I like the idea ~ George
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lol 😂 yes, thank you , George ., fresh egg scrambling to the top 🔝
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Brilliant Yassy! 😁😁 I love the Humpty rework! 😛😛 Bravo! 👏👏
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Awwww thank you , Ken. 🙏🏼😂
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Wow! The creativity 🤩🤩🤣🥰😇im amazed
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Thank you very much ❤️🙏🏼
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Your welcome 🙂
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🙏🏼🤗
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Humpty Dumpty 2.o 😂😂
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😜
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aura washed around
ya hero
that clown
sleep
in the chair
and got up
but forgot to where
he wanted to go
you know?
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Too sleepy
This humpty
Went down under
Thankfully there was no water
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there is no water coming down from the sky here Yassy. no tears of allah.
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It’s raining 🌧 here monsoon time John
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yes i know as well documented by Malaika and her muses!
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Who is Malaika?
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a fellow blogger from iNDIA.
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Okay 👍
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so button on your nehru jacket Yassy!
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Lol 😂
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Your interpretation is better, brilliant twist.
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Thank you, Carter.
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Loved this! 🥚
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Thank you, Holly ❤️
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You are so welcome! ❤️
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🙏🏼🤗❤️
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Wonderful. So many things and images I did not expect.
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Thank you so much, Erica.
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🙂
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🙃
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I absolutely, whole heartedly adore this!
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Thank you so much, Ish 🙏🏼🤗
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Yassy girl that’s so crazily good ….love this humpty dumpty
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Awwwwwww thank you love ❤️
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Wowww that last line!!!
Your poetry so brilliant, powerful and beautiful!
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Thank you, Pragalbha 🤗
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Another needed smile today. Many thanx. Yasmin.
Art
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Thank you, Loujen. Much appreciated!
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Dunno if i should smile bcs of this or feel sad for his situation 🥺😭 but really a great piece ~💚❤
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Thank you, Yiena❤️🤗
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Always welcome dear~💚❤
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❤️
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Beautiful version..
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Thank you ☺️
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Thank you for the reblog 🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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I like it. Keep going dear.😊😊😊😊🙂🙂🙂
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Thank you so much 🤗
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My pleasure
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This was hilarious 😂 So ingenious! Making a tsunami lol. Humpty Dumpty is never lucky, is he? 😜
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Yup 😛
Thank you , S 🤗
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I really embrace reading from you!
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So kind of you. I am honoured.
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