Virgin shrouds Mourning wombs Innocence cut short Parents' lap Empty broken Shoulders weary Eyes weighed Bullets strayed Nameless assail Hopes frail. When bombs fly And sirens cry Children cannot defy They wonder if they Will live to see Another dawn Play and run all day long And they wonder What the fighting is all about?
So sad…so true… This poem hurt ,Yassy, thanks, awesome. I dont like pain,but… i like every word.
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Thank you, Lubomir for your time .. I so appreciate..
War is tragic and sad. It’s death and pain and loss. I guess it’s all human to do that now.
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So true!!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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ego
obey
cos
them that has
that last say
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The powerful
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perhaps. might not be as you assume tho.
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Eggxactly
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was hanging on this artemis person. how gauche eh?
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Yup 👍
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in that jingoist mood. tis j p sous fa me. oh gosh oh gee.
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Pour quoi?
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to keep my mood up. jr s hockey team s getting beat bad and he will be in a nasty ugly mood.
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Chill buddy
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not a chance. just john.
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Give yourself a break , John.
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not to happen as long as he s around yassy, if you have kinder you know what i mean. if you dont then well gosh have a happy sunday. the one day. lmao
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Break a leg ..
Every day is the same , John. It’s lockdown time ..
Happy Sunday anyhoo
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no everyday is not the same. you might need a little more of the girl who once went with lance armstrong. cheryl wass her name.
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Oh okay. Tell me more
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So sad
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Yess
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Sad story Yassy. But we need drama in poetry so well done! Poignant!
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Yeah thank you for your insight , Poetpas!
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Welcome 🙏
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Heart piercing lines!!
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Thank you, Salman 🙏🏼
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Heart-wrenching words. 🖤
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Thank you, Carter. ❣️
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And the culprits never pay. Your powerful poem paints a dark picture that has to be seen to be believed, Yasmin ~ George
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Seeing only on the web. It’s terribly tragic.
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This is so moving Yassy. Our hearts break for the innocent !❤️
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Thank you, Holly 🙏🏼🤗
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🌸🙏
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🤗
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A powerful poem. Yassy, thanks for sharing this poem. ❤️
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Thank you, Qudsiaa ♥️❣️
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you, Ned.
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😔 You nailed it, Yassy 😔
-David
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Thank you, David 🙏🏼
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Powerful and tragic Yassy! 😊👍No need to ask who or what you’re writing about here!
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Thank you, Ken.
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Poignant. Sad. True.
My post of today was partly due to the sadness of the suffering in Palestine
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Okay. Will check yours. Thanks for writin in
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It is the children who suffer most when words fail and violence proliferates. This is a powerful verse that stirs the heart of all who read it. Well done, Yasmin!
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For children everywhere I hope we have peace .
Thank you 🙏🏼
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Innocence cut short indeed
Thanks for this insightful share
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Deep, moving and heartfelt
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome 😊
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🙂
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So sad poem
Awesome showing pain
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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😢💯
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🥺
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Wonder what the fighting is all about…
So true, how can innocence make sense of any of this?
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Yes, well said. Thank you, Pragalbha!
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At first I thought this poem was about loss as a result of the Covid outbreak, but I see it is due to war. Very tragic.
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🙏🏼❤️
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That’s touching 🌸🥺 you may see this https://naturethebestcure.wordpress.com/2021/05/24/nature-the-best-physician-nature-the-best-cure/
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Thank you 🙏🏼
Will check it out.
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Thank you 🙏🏼 hugs 🤗
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So painful. NOBODY deserves to live under circumstances as harsh as those, Especially children as they’re yet to sprout into what they will be. They’re the future-makers and it’s imperative that they live their lives to the fullest now, blooming into how they wish to be. Children living in war zones deserve life. This poem has said what the world really needs to hear right now. Thank you!
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Thank you 🙏🏼♥️
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Incredible, so heartfelt and so sad that this is reality💙💙💙
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Thank you ❤️
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Have the same question —
What is fighting all about?
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Thank you..🙏🏼
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Beautiful but sad. And what do you tell the children…
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Yes, terribly tragic .
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Really well done Yassy. “and they wonder what all the fighing is about”.
How could they every know, when we can’t even figure it out!!💖🤗😞
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Yes , exactly.. well said, Cindy. Thank you ❤️
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You’re so welcome Yassy❣️❣️
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♥️😘
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😘
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🥰
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Thank you for the reblog ♥️
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So senseless– all this fighting. And for so many not being able to enjoy most of their lifetime.
Art
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Exactly.. thank you for your awesome comment.
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Amazing.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Most welcome🌷
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Dear Yassy, The elegy is so beautiful.
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Terribly sad way to live one’s childhood.
Art
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Yesss
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Reblogged this on Pdlyons's Explorations.
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Thank you for the reblog 🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on Commentary, Outrages, Prose and Poetry and commented:
Lady Yassy asks an important question with a terrible answer hidden in this heart-wrenching poem: the fight always is about money – and the power money buys, some think and the cost is inconsequential so long as it hits not their own home and hearth…and for some of the most twisted even there the price is paid. But refusal to allow a child to be educated because of a genetic difficulty – the child is female! – that, too, is a crime about which a fight well may have worth.
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Thank you for your awesome 🤩 comment, Lord Rich.
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You provided a well-built platform Lady Yassy. Thank you most kindly.
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Beautiful Poem !!
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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This is so poignant. Just wonderful 🤍✨
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Thank you.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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I miss your poetry. Hope you’re inspired to write more soon.
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Yup 👍thank you for the encouragement.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you 🙏🏼, your Highness 😊
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MY HEINIENESS=???????
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lol 😂
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😀
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and they call humanity civilized?
Your poem is more than something to think about.
It is something to feel deep inside.
hugs, Eddie
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Thank you so very much for your insightful comment..
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Thank you, Eddie.
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Thank you for crafting this! It’s so important to have and hold this in one’s heart!
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Thank you so very much ❤️
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Many metaphors here around the deflowering of the virgin as a symbol for the corruption of the world. Children are born innocent but can soon be taught fear and anger unbalanced by an insufficient love in the world where there is no womb of safety to be found and unleashed bullets have no parents where mere play becomes seriously deranged.
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Yesss 👍
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One of the saddest parts of having served my country in the defense of my country was the stark waking up in the realization that while I did what I did in the service with a sense of duty to protect and defend those I loved… but… that when my unit was called to do so, several someones elsewhere were living without their son, their father, their brother, their loved one(s). And the ones who suffer(ed) the most are the children of the fallen on all sides. This is very touching poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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This is so sad and so true. Cuts deep inside, it is so very powerful. Amazing words! Perhaps you would like to put in your heart-touching words on my blog? No pressure but my first Blogversary is coming up on 18th Dec and what I have decided to do is weave up a poem from any line submitted by anyone. I will be mentioning the blog when I write the anniversary post. You just have to fill in a short form to put in your entry. If you feel like it, you can check out more about it here : https://thebluediary6.wordpress.com/2021/12/07/announcement/
Thanks! Keep spreading the power of your words!
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This is so heartrending yassy. So well written
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Thank you, Lorraine ❤️
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Dear Yassy, still and always you write agony with such a beautiful power of words. How can we not be moved deeply, to our marrow?
AND, I must thank you for being a New Year’s gift to me–thank you for visiting my latest blog–yes, I’m back, who knows how long…but it’s always great to reconnect with you! I’ve no idea what name I was using last we spoke, but I imagine you’ll catch who I am! Many blessings to you in this New Year–may we choose HOPE and Be Strong and Courageous. Love, Z
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Love and blessings and hugs .. be well. Keep writing ❤️
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All the same to you, my dear ❤
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The imaging is haunting, in so few words! Well done!
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*imagery
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Welcome! 🌹
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beautifully written… and touching…
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Thanks ☺️
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