a breath of love wraps me in its embrace... as i lie dreaming under scarlet and violet hues of subtle odors lingering in the satiny air.. i lie dreaming in the embrace of my reveries i dream as moonbeams fall on midnight dew brushing somnolent blooms glazing sleeping wings moonbeams glitter on a breath of love as it wraps me in its embrace like nuptials of a new day day and night twine at the witching hour.. a surreal bequeathing.. i feel a pain in my heart like an open wound i feel it bleeding before i drift off... and yet I live.. #vers libre
I could feel all the raw emotions in this one, and the smell of gardenias, which is my favorite scent of flower, was right there too. Wonderfully written. 🌺
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Thank you 😊, M ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Yassy. ❤️
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Take care 🤗❤️
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You too… 🌷
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🌺🌸🌷🌹
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Oh how such raw feelings transcends into your words Yassy making me smelly the scent of the gardenia
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Thank you 😊 so much , Michy.. you okay ??
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Yes Yassy ..thank you
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Welcome 💐
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Dream on, Y! Waise bhi we’re in a state of lockdown, better we dream than see panicky nightmares 😉
You good & safe?
Merawala padh lo, nothing to do except read/write/fight!
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That’s all I ever do well, Kunal. Dream 🙊
I am good as good can be lol chal mai dekhthee hoon thu kya kar raha hey !
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You write pretty good, too, my friend, don’t forget that
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Oh yeah! Thank you , K .. dreams give me poetry , I guess ☺️
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At least now I will get replies from you in time hahaha 😂
I checked your page. Poor you geeeeeeeee
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First time I heard the term ‘dolce far niente,’ so I had to look it up. I love the definition. It sounds pretty in Italian too.
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Yes,, it’s an exotic language.. so is Spanish and maybe Latin but languages are interesting 🧐
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Beautiful! I love the phrase “moonbeams fall on midnight dew”. But the entire poem has such luscious language. Keep dreaming!
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Thank you, Brad. You take care.
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First is the concept of the picture used. I could see the bright side of a negative.
I don’t really know much about flowers. But I love the preciseness of your words. So easy to relate with. You’re doing well
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I love the way you perceive this verse. Your perception of the picture is interesting too. It’s all in the eye of the beholder and the viewpoint of the reader.
Thank you for your thoughts on this. Stay safe .
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☺
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😊
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Stay safe too.
I will like to send you an email on my ongoing journal Voices. You were part of it last year and I wish you will be a part of it this year as well.
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Okay
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You have a wonderful gift of bringing images, fragrances, emotion to life. So very beautiful!
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thank you, Holly. I have missed you here. Hope all is well?
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I’m well Yassy. Very busy but once again WP is messing with my email notifications. I’m going to refollow to get you back!
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Cool 😎..
Ciao 😊 take care.
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😎🌺
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🍓
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Very gorgeous imagery! So beautifully expressed.
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Thank you 😊, Lucy ❤️🤗
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This was beautiful. 🌹
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Thank you, Drew 🌺
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❤
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❤️
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So beautiful… I’m not worthy to write with you! 😀
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LOL, I often feel that way Joey.
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Noooooo.. don’t say that
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Don’t say that Joey ..I am a better judge than you anyways 😎
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hahaha. hmmm I don’t know about that.
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I am telling ya, dude 😊
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I”m glad you’re OK. You seemed to disappear for a couple days during this outbreak.
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I am right as rain 😊
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Sounds refreshing
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Like fresh fruit juice 🥤?
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Yes – Mango
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Strawberry cranberry litchi
You like mango ?
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Yes the kind with cream. I think it’s called Mango Lassi
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Yeah .. it’s called mango milkshake. Lassi is something they do with yoghurt .
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Oh. I like the mango lassi though.
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Oh .. Joey’s mango lassi ..
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that can be my new name of here… Mango Lassi
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Lmao 😂
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Rhymes with your name. Lassy Yassy
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Jonathan’s mango 🥭 marathon
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hahaha. You remember all of my names
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Yes, pines.
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Wonderfully beautiful.
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Thank you, Nico. How are you and how is the missus doin ?
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Thank you for asking Yassy. We are worn out, but otherwise ok. She begins treatment soon. Blessings!
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Great. Bless you both.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very welcome 😊
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This is gorgeous, Yassy. It is interesting to read a poem in this format i.e. reading along a line like that.
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Thank you, Robbie.. how you doin ?
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We are fine, Yassy. All working and studying from home at the moment, but fine. How are you?
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Am fine, thank you, Robbie. Good to know all is well with you guys.
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Oh mehn I loved this, the format makes it so difficult to read but it’s so worth the effort.
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Oh , thanks man 😊
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My pleasure 🌷
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🌺
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Your pen creates beauty beyond magic words Yassy.🌹🌹
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🙏🏼🤗🌹
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❤️😊🌹
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Gorgeous, I love that pleasant idleness. That’s how I feel! This is such effortless beauty.
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Thank you ❤️🤗
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😍😍😍😍
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😂
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My favorite dessert wine, almost ever – the peaches, the sunshine. I’ve been to Far Niente in my life before this one and I still keep a bottle in the refrigerator just in case someone comes to eat dinner and I happen to make a dessert worthy of this wine.
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Awesome 👏
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