The ozone murmurs
In the silvery gloaming
As a fish quietly leaps
The quivering waves of
A dappled twilight moana
Its breath drawn upon
An opalescent August sky
Whispering shadows etch
Fragile moments
Bringing song of the sea
Filling piscator’s net
With briny scents;
Crepescule colors flicker
Yellowing the marine
Across windswept Neptune
The rising tide
Pulses a refrain ..
Beautiful description of the sea—I can almost smell the salt air!
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Thank you so much, Mitchel😊🙏🏼
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And the photos are also beautiful, Yassy.
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Thank you ☺️
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You are welcome.
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🤗🤗
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Beautiful and heart wrenching..
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Thank you for such an evocative thought, Jane.
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Gorgeous, my dear. So happy to read you again ❤️🌸❤️🌸
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Oh ! my. I can read you. This is the best day of my life. Finally your comments are coming through.
This is wonderful, G!
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This is the best day of my life too, my Queen of Poetry. A spectacular poem.
❤️🌸❤️🌸
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Thank you so much 🤗🤗💐🌼🌸🎼
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🤗❤️🌸
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❤️❤️♥️
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Stunning words and pics. ‘Whispering shadows etch fragile moments’ is lyrical genius. Beautiful work, Lady Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, Lord Zoolon. I think, if I may say so, your photographic talent and awesome lyrics have quite inspired me , to say the least.
If you see good work , you try harder to do good yourself.
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I’ll tell you what, Yasmin, for once I disagree with you. Your words can turn a dark sky into a rainbow, sometimes without using a single metaphor. When I write I just write what I see. Keep the faith, you’re the best poet in these parts and beyond ~ George
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Thank you, George. You know what, I like the way you write about real issues, social issues that trouble the world. It’s fantastic the way you take on the world, now I wish I could write like that. I have not come across anyone writing like that .
Real stuff that matters.
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Simply brilliant. I keep reading this and rereading this. I am transfixed while being swallowed in Neptune’s snare.
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Thank you so much for reading and your beautiful comment has made my day.
Well, I can quite picture Neptune in his seahorse drawn chariot 😊
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Dreamy! Love it!
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Thank you, Craig .
Btw, I can’t find your blog. Wanted to read your work too.
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O, it’s here: https://brocraigblog.wordpress.com/
take care!
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Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on Watermelon Walk and commented:
This is such a moving poem that awakens the senses to a world of imagination. I want everyone to experience the artistry of fellow blogger Yaskhan. Enjoy!
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I can’t thank you enough, Hopkins!
Bless you 😊
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You have been blessed with a very special way of seeing life and expressing yourself through many art forms.
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You say it beautifully, it’s a very poetic comment 😊
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I love the description you expressed within the photos and the blending of your beautiful poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie. I guess , it’s good to break the monotony sometimes, writing needs to be fun to the writer and to the reader , as your posts do for us , they let us evolve 😊
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You are welcome Yassy.
You are correct. Writing is fun and fun with experiment with many genres blended into one. 🙂
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😊🙂
I wonder if you have a new post.
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Poetic gem with all those majestic references..absolutely filled up with eternal love for sea and waves!!! Well done.
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Nature is so wonderful!
Thank you for such a wonderful encouraging comment.
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It’s a delight to come across such delightful stuff!😊💙💙
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Thank you again for taking time out to read and for voicing such wonderful words of appreciation, that in itself is my inspiration!
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It’s an absolute pleasure! 💓
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😊🙏🏼
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Very beautifully written…🙂
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Thank you 😊 , Padmini🌝
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I just love the sea. I onced lived next to the Mediterranean and welcomed its bounty of sounds.
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Wow, that is wonderful, do you happen to have pictures, if you do you must share them here.
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Absolutely fantastic, great poem coupled with beautiful pics. Am I the only one who think there’s no much difference between a desert and a beach?
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The desert is as beautiful as the beach.
Thank you, Ajibola 👍
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Beautiful post
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Thank you, Mitali!
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I crown you as the Mistress of verse ….beautiful, lyrical and so poignant. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you very much. I am truly honoured 😊
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lovely, thanks for sharing
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Thank you 🙏🏼 😊🙋🏻
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these photos, i looked at it unintentionally.
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Thank you 😊
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So alone. So content.
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🌝 thank you 🙏🏼
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Ahh amazing piece 💛 loved it
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Thank you so much 😊
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Absolutely love the descriptive nature you dispel into your words to bring them to life. The minute your beautiful poetry hits the eyes, images invade the mind like its own poetic film, that’s the effect you have. Simply amazing you are Yassy.
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Thank you 🙏🏼🤗🙋🏻
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You are so so very welcome my dear Yassy.🌹😊❤️💫
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💐🎻🎺🎸🌈🌻🌼🎼
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😊😊🤗🤗❤️🌈💫
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🌝🙂
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Beautiful imagery 👌
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Thank you, Manic.
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You’re welcome 😊😊
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😊🙋🏻
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This really is lovely, Yassy. One of my favourites.
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Thank you 😊 so much, Robbie 🤗
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Beautiful! You are a master of imagery. It seems to be a natural for you.
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The best thing anyone can say to someone about their work. You are such a sweetheart, Eugenia. Thank you!
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Reblogged this on richwrapper.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful and there is a very nice descriptive touch that i love the most ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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A sea-ful imaginative poem
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I am thankful to you for reading and commenting🤗
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Yassy! I love that you used these beautiful photos.
And I agree with everyone… you can take anything and make it tangible to us readers, in such a beautiful way.
And you have improved my vocabulary as well! 🤓
❤
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Thank you 😊 sweet one, you are very very kind to me always , it’s wonderful when I hear from you.
Hope you are doing well!❤️🙋🏻
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I’m just being honest!
And thank you! I am doing better.
Hope you’re well too, dear Poet! xo
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❤️💕🙋🏻
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❤🌸💚🥂🍰
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💐🌸🌻🤗🤗🤗🤗
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So beautifully woven words👍
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Thank you, Nimi🤗
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Beautiful!🍵😎🍵
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You very much ☺️
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What an ekphrastic expression! Beautiful!
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Thank you 😊☺️
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This is absolutely beautiful, Yassy. Thank You!!! 🙂
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Thank you 🤗
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My pleasure!!! 🙂
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🤗🙋🏻
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Well crafted. Beautiful piece!
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Thank you 😊
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This is beautiful and heartwarming.
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Thank you, Kally🤗
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Beautiful poem, and photos, to go along.
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Thank you so much, Tiffany😊
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Nice pair of eyes with brain 🚩
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Who?
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You & your writing 💭🏝️
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Ah! Thank you, that was a bit odd , don’t you think?
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