Tempest on the moon
Storms ripple tides;
My eyes share water
With the ocean and sea.
Stars dot the connect
Once upon a keyboard
Asterisk, ellipses
Breaking the silence.
I carpe diem
So much confusion
Searching for the perfect word--
In poetry we shall never part.
Bard broken
Eating my heart out
That is so self consuming:
The clock's moving hands.
Short on oxygen
Deforestation;
Human extinction
Dust to dust.
Playing hooky
Green behind the ears;
Wilful liberation
Ignoramus on roll-call.
Telepathy
My soul takes a breath
From your soul-
Rainbow's end.
Killer looks
Intrigued by
Your silence---
For your eyes only.
Sting
Song of the desert rose
Cactus dreams
Of rain.....
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This is so lovely, no, seriously… lovely. It’s like numerous, mini poems inside of a poem.
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Thank you, Fall๐๐
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So gorgeous, I love it.
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Thank you.
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In Poetry, we shall never part โค
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Indeed ๐๐
Thank you, Alaedin!
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Thank You lovely one, great Poem as always ๐๐๐๐
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Great writing โ๐ป Well done ๐๐ป
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Thanks, Poet ๐
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The telepathy part connects so well… but, you probably already know that before I wrote in reply.
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I missed you , Rach! How have you been.
Thank you ๐ for insightful comments , you are thoughtful, I appreciate it๐ผ๐ธ , you should write something in respite, maybe just three lines.
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Okay; it came out as it did; stream of consciousness, that rhymes, kindof. Ha! Thank you, Yas! You’re the best.
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You have that streak of instinctive creativity! Itโs an adorable thing that goes with your personality!
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I missed you, too.
It seems we both came back online at the same time. I’ll haiku that; for you. ๐
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Yippeeee you definitely are the best ๐
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U da best! ๐ต๏ธ๐๐ ๐
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You are super best ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ซ๐โจ
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This is pure beauty Yassy if Iโve ever seen it. A total treat for readers to indulge sweet poetry into. A Heavenly Haiku that left the brain in a yo yo state of satisfaction. I love how it started out with rainy weather verses and in the middle, you hit a dust to dust verse that dried the baron center and then the end was rain again and it trailed off…you are truly amazing my friend.๐น๐น
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Thanks buddy ! I am happy you always visit and say awesome things ๐, itโs your beautiful heart sparkling freezing like gold , keep sparkling, keep shining. We need your light !
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You are an hour past welcome Yassy, I love your poetic heart and unlimited talented to write, you are amazing.๐น. You are a beacon in Blogosphere that flocks the fireflies of readers! Stay lovelyโค๏ธ. A million thanks from The Golden Coupleโจ
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Kudos to the golden couple ๐
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โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐น๐. And to you!!๐
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๐ฅ๐ฅ๐น๐ป
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Ooh, I felt the starlight bolting its light on that one. But, you, surely as the bestest-bo-bestest-of-the-bestest-best, take the cake๐ด๐ฅ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ถ๐บ๐ ๐โ๏ธ๐น๐น๐น๐น๐๐๐๐๐
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Omg ๐ that is so damn sweet , Rach !!! My BFF ๐ฏ๐ฟ๐ฉ๐ช๐ฅค๐ฐ๐จ๐ง๐ก๐ฅฎ am enjoying this with you.
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Aw, Yas! You have been the bestest best BFF one can have! โฅ๏ธ๐โค๏ธ๐๐ ๐๐ฃ๐๐ฃ๐ฏ๐
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Always and forever ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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There was ruggedness, a vibrant flavor, a cult feel – absolutely gorgeous
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Thank you, Shantanu.
I try to put diversity i in my writing try to make it more creative!
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You do a fab job.
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Thanks again ๐๐
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Oh, niiiiice! I like the ‘breathless’ kind of flow and how one leads into the other!
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Finished your beauty sleep ๐ด
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Hahahahahahaha! More like dreamy slumber, now back to Monday reality ๐
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Sending you some strong โ๏ธ
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This poem is beyond brilliance and dreamlike musical.
Seriously, you’ve executed this so well….the imagery I sensed may have influenced you in listening to electronic music? ๐
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Yeah , thank you for the inspiration of your music ๐ผ , I think I have to try harder , Charlie Charlie ๐๐
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You are welcome. ๐
You did a great job and you pushed it with this poem. I love it. ๐
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Took the sting out of Lottic with sting, eh.
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I see you’ve been listening to Lotic’s music? You blew me away with this incredible poem. ๐
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These last three paragraphs!
Telepathy
My soul takes a breath
From your soul-
Rainbow’s end.
Killer looks
Intrigued by
Your silence—
For your eyes only.
Sting
Song of the desert rose
Cactus dreams
Of rain…..
So intricate and yet so simple! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much so much thank you ๐๐ผ!
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Aw, Yas; you, too. Thank you!
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Cool post ๐
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Thank you, Konlee!!
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I have missed reading you a lot!!
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I think you understand me. Thanks ๐๐ผ
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A delightful poem, Yassy.
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Thank you ๐ so much , Robbie.
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I love this!
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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I loved this this!! i like how they all flowed so beautifully together.
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Ah! Thanks ๐๐ผ
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Thank you.
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I after determining cactus dreams meant to be thefted re-read upwards through carpe diem(ed) Eyes, I think now I must go drink an ocean just to taste your sweet eyes.
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You are wonderful ๐๐ป๐
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Upon further reflection: edit the above comment to end “taste your sweet Is (which looks awkward still…how does one not write “eyes” twice when once is for the orb and twice for the actual? My sword will not cut this conundrum so I will go nap and see.
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Hahahaha whatever๐
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I get caught – my choice and favorite tour of de – in chasing down what I wrote to worthy yur comment and then what you wrote to wreak mine own. Your work, esp. above, will take more time than I have at present to consume fully…so, I will mark and save and come back later for a full repast. Anon. I flee to my own pen and notebook. Must beat the storms. J
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Stay safe, take good care of yourself.
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So creative! Love this.
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Thank you, Zalikha๐
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This is stunning Yassy – just catching you on some of your genius whilst I was away
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Thank you so much ๐
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