My heart goes to a very special place Where it can only see your face. I place my dreams upon your heart Feel it start with a cupid's dart. Feeling you in every beat of my heartbeat Giving my spirit this sweet retreat. My soul moves to the song of your soul We are two halves of a quintessential whole. Our hearts in tune playing a love embrace Holding each other as pulses race. Touching without the feel of touch Wiping each other's tears without as much as a smudge. Feeling our way through the color of words Soaking the intensity of sensations stirred. We waltz together through cosmic space The universe blesses us with love's grace. I look into my heart and see your reflection I hold a piece of you in me in all your perfection.
So nice.. ❤❤
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Thanks 😊
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Deep thought here. You have an amazing insight to communicate you message. Thanks for this piece of note. Deboss
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Thank you so much.
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This piece was, for me, melodious and fluid. That is the manner in which I read it. Wonderful work Yassy!🌸
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Thank you very much , Shreya.
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This was absolutely lovely Yassy, this had love written all over it….. somebody is rather lucky😉🌹. I love your rhyming manner, it flows so naturally as your words coexist with each other on the papers dance floor. A love poem indeed.❤️
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Thank you , JW ! I so appreciate your most lovely of the loveliest of comments anyone can ever say.
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Not as much as I appreciate your lovely poetry, you keep things spinning lovely. 🌹. Stay you and stay true.
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People like you make this world go around. Thank you.
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🌹😍🌹
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What a beautiful love poem, Yassy. Love poems are not my forte but I do appreciate other peoples a great deal.
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Thank you , Robbie. I believe you can turn your hand to anything you want to .
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Thank you, Yassy.
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Welcome my dear.
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So pretty…
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Thanks.
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Word after word you continually captivate me. This is so wonderful. I feel it is my favourite poem you have written so far. Splendid!
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Thank you my sweet friend. You say the most awesome things. I am delighted to be reading your comment.
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Turn about is fair play. I don’t feel my words are adequate to describe how happy your poems make me. I try but they seem to fall short. But I will always keep trying because your poems bring me great joy :):)
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You are a comfort. Something divine about your heart. You bring joy and warmth here on WP. Thank you dear one.
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Thanks.
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“Touching without the feel of touch,” so lovely
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Thank you.
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How beautiful Yasmin!!
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Thanks, my dear girl.
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Absolutely beautiful!
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I love the last two lines of this poem! And overall just wonderful you describe what its like to be in love. Very moving.
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I am so happy you like the poem.
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So powerful, so artfully crafted. This, too – nay! four or seven – will be read and reared: there are universes hiding amongst and behind and before and beyond your h”art”felt words, Lady Yasmin!
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For now , my universe is the WP and all you sundry !!
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Beautiful 😊
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Thanks.
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Wonderful! ❤️ what a beautiful poem! Amazzzing job👍⭐️
Ps – I would really appreciate it if you’d check out my poems too. Your feedback will be highly valued🙂
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Thank you. I will 😊
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BEST POEM
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Thank you 😊
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That last couplet is full of ideas I’ve lived.
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😊🙂
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Truly a beautiful piece, Yassy.
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Thank you, Eugenia.
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😉
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I read your poem and it was so nice.
I also wrote a similar poem
You can check this out :
https://wp.me/p9Q4ak-p
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Thank you. I will.
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Beautiful piece!
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😊🙂
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Thank you, Yassy, for following abluebunnyATWordpress. Molte grazie!
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You welcome.
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Very good and touching.
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Thanks.
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Nice one
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Thanks.
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Interesting rhyme pattern: AABBCCDDAAEEFFGG HH; A sonnet form, or variation?
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Couplets. Rhyming couplets. I really didn’t pay much attention to the syllable count. 😊
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The couplets play nicely together.
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Yeah. Thank you.
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I love, love, love this love poem. 🙂
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😊🙂thank you so much.
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loved the rhyming♥️♥️. you’re a great writer!
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Thank you , kind one 💖
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Reblogged this on Buzums blog.
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Thank you 😊🙂
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Beautiful and lovely
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Thank you.
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You welcome
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It’s spectacular…..plz do read mine poem at power of words97764921wordpress.com
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Beautifully written… and thank you for the support of my blog. Keep up your great work.
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Thank you. Always wonderful to follow great talent like yours.
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such a beautiful poem! They it is written is remarkable! It would be nice if you could check out mine.I just started sharing mine. 🙂
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Of course.
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Superb yassy..
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Thanks 😊
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Great. I know photoshop too.
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Well made, I remember reading your poems back when I had my first site up as 1. Refreshing to read your work again.
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Yeah, thanks. I been here two years now. I love the blogging community here.
Well, welcome back. I follow you back. Thank you 😊
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Thank you.
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💕
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beautiful !
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Thank you.
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i give my heart to your piece of art ..
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Thank you 😘
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Wonderful from your heart!!💙
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🙏🏼😊💕
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Reblogged this on Poetry of Emotions.
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Thank you 😊
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Purely beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Dawn!
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