Time basks in the renaissance Of a pulsing velvet air Marigolds touch push the azure In crimson-gold blaze. The day stretches before me... I sit with my cup of tea Under an aegean sombrero Macaroon clouds flit. The morning charms me like a Living poem on wings of Petalled blossoms sashaying On gossamer breeze. Songs cascade from tiny throats Musicians of the ether Warbling their euphoria Aural nourishment.. The yellow ochre orb glows Like a sunflower in a Lilac sky burning purple A marmalade toast... Twilight tiptoes in.. Preamble to dark's tremble A night's belonging And darkness comes swiftly Unleashing silence of sleep As winds tiptoe on fallen leaves Shadows recede... In the hush of night I feel time's heartbeat I break my hourglass To find a rainbow.
Nice poem..keep writing !
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Thank you π
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WelcomeβΊ
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Yasmin, the imagery dressed by your brilliant vocabulary makes it an amazing read. Take a bow dear girl πβ€οΈ
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Thank you my dear poetess , many thanks for making my weekend. π
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I agree! Well said!
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Brightly colourful
and richly textural
like listening
to an angelic choir
celestial
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You write awesome , David. You should post this as an independent verse on your page.
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Such a gorgeous summary of your writing, Yassy!
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Thank you , Venessa.
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Thanks Yassy.
Your words inspire me.
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I am happy for that. Have a nice weekend , my fre
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My friend
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Yassy your poetry is like soul food. I like your language usage too, I learn some vocabularies from you. What is aegean sombrero?
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Aegean is blue and sombrero is a hat so I compared our sky to that.
Thank you my dear ! Be well. Have a fabulous weekend.
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Your description and colorful words touched each grain of sand giving you that beautiful rainbow of sand that you brilliantly described. The Queen of Poetry strikes again with her magic polychromatic pen I call a wand. Harmony is all I can say my dear! πΉπΉ
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Thank you so much , Brainy! Your words inspire ππ
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So do you lovelyπΉπΉ. And thank you for being here.π
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Bye take care πΊ
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You too πΉ
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What a splendid description of days, and nights, passing by, and all that entails. Call me enthralled :):)
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You are a good person and you say the most beautiful things. Thank you dear soul sister.
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You bring it out in me. Your words are like air :):)
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And you are the oxygen that I breathe my dear friend.
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seek beauty. forget the rest.
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Hello , Eby , good to see you !
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Can’t find your website.
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evyon for now. fresh start.
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Send me a link. I can’t miss your posts for the world .
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time exquisitely modeled by your verses. Gorgeous. You know Y, when I got to “In the hush of night
I feel time’s heartbeat” I felt so much pain. I do not know why. You are the best my dear Y. Thank you for being YOU!c
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Your comment is exquisite like all of your verses. Ah! Amazing.
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Each verse of this poem is a miniature picture, Yassy.
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Thank you ππ
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Too much layers and intricately woven. π. Reading your poems is like learning poetry. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you , Aquib.
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Sorry , what is that ?
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Haha, look at the second comment! Accidentally submitted this one unfinished
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I was trying to figure that out lol
Of course , got your second comment and I think I answered.
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I love your choice of words! So full of life. Well done!
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Thank you , Sam π
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The imagination, the choice of words and the beautiful thought all weaved with brilliance
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Thank you π
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My pleasure
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Beautiful flow of words.
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Thank you , my dear.
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How did you format your post’s text? it’s so tidy
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It’s easy. I am sure anyone can , from their laptop , tab and mobile.
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I’ll try π
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Whoa, wow! And wow again!
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Where are you , Kunal.
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Here only. Aaja site pe and read! π
Sub theek?
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I had to go back and read this one out loud. Such beautiful words!
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Thank you so much , Michael. I am delighted with your comment.
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Rich in imagery – beautiful, as always! π
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Thank you. ππ
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Always a pleasure reading your work! π
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The “surprise” haiku tiptoed in twilight third stanza from a poet’s end but perhaps a poem’s preamble keeps dark in abeyance as I grin and vow to make sunteam soon as May’s monsoon delivers me light…but cold-brewed is cool, too. Thanks, Yassy. I needed that: now, to biddness – where is MET – mike e talbott(sp?) I unfind him at home (on WP’s usual haunt in recent postings and went to look. You, clue?
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Thank you for your wonderful comments !
I am elated ππππ
Well, where is Mick? I have no idea. He has disappeared again. I hope he is well.
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I so hope as well. He is too good not to miss. I, too, have a habit of sometimes being the object of mine own travelling man wizard and sometime rapscallionish wanderlust-tainted forever man.
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Love the great imagery of the whole poem. The last stanza gives it a wonderful climax, especially this:
“I break my hourglass
To find a rainbow”
Beautiful and full of strength.
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Thank you so much. I am honored and delighted .
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Very nice.
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Thank you.
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Excellent.
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Thank you.
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