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night’s syntax

The violet indigo night
Shares secrets of love with me
Purifying the reason
In the red darkness..

In moon's porcelain shadow
Stars kick in consonants
Breathing and spelling the night
I ink my blank page...

Night's poetic perfection
Melts into burnished glow of
The grammar of poetry
I make touch my pen...


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91 thoughts on “night’s syntax”

  6. Nights poetic perfection❤️…….that’s you Yassy, poetry at its finest. I can picture the stars dancing as this ode is being sung. If you could bring sides together like you do words, we’d have peace in the world.💫. Wonderful job Yassy.

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    1. My dear poetic friend , your comment is pure poetry. Your words dance and sing to me, they are beautifully scribed. You have quite a way with whatever you say. You say it in the most aesthetic manner. 💖 my poet Brain Freeze.

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      1. Your words can stop the process of something freezing in time which makes your words magical Yassy. Gifted as paper is your cape and the pen is your wand. You truly are a scribing sorcerous.💕

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  18. Yassy would you be interested in participating in my Truly Inspired series? here is a link, we are currently numbering 19, so there are quite a few that you can peruse if you wish to. you write beautiful poetry, breathtaking many a time, but what inspires you to do so?

    This series looks at that, l could email you the questionnaire , you fill in your answers and l write those answers up. You can include images that best describe your work, thoughts and blog if you wish to?

    Let me know what you think?

    Rory

    https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2017/12/29/truly-inspired-series/

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  23. You pen such a divine and yet fantastic feel into your poetic magnificence.

    My favorite lines:

    “Breathing and spelling the night
    I ink my blank page…”

    I pictured a surrealist pen of yours pouring our your poetic expression onto paper. Beautiful write, Yassy. 🙂

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      2. To you , Charlie. The most unique person I know. I cherish you and our bonding of friendship. It’s a good feeling. You are a powerhouse of awesome talent. You are a celebration of all that is good , Charlie.

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      3. Having read this last night and reading it today. You made my whole entire day and I was happy and cried a little bit of joy. Knowing how good of a person you are. I’m thankful every day of our friendship and respect for one another. Thank you Yassy and bless your heart so much. 🙂

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      4. I somehow feel I know you , you know what I mean. It’s like something of a spirit thing. There is something very familiar about you and the way we know things. I am happy that I talk to you. You be happy , Charlie. Sometimes I feel all our hearts are at breaking points . I can almost feel that hurt you carry inside you. It is in the way you write. All the helplessness . But that is so good when you write and show , it helps heal you and it helps us too, when we read . You are a walking emotion , my friend. God keep your heart safe.

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  30. Lovely poem.
    I am relatively new to blogging. Love it when I come across blogs and posts like that of yours.
    Just 3 posts old here. I am working on a series of 5 and the 4th post is on the way here.Would be glad if you could drop by my blog.

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