Songs of dawn burst into my room Blazing sunshine breaking night's gloom. Twittering birds let me sing along Flitting merrily into a ballroom song. My kettle whistles a happy tune Sending smoke signals to fading moon. Tender buds unfurl to flower I retreat into fragrant bower. Leaves on trees burst into green Butterflies, bees sway and preen.. Sun stokes fiery trails All day its warmth prevails Sky transcends into azure Lace clouds skim demure Shadows waltz incandescence Enchanted by day's luminescence Serenading birds lifting gay Beguiling promise of a new day..
The dawn of a new day is always a magical thing yassy. It brings promises of a new chapter to be written. I love this poem and how you have woven many things to describe the magic.
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Thank you , Davy. I value your appreciation! I am happy with that. Thank you π
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Beautiful beginning to what I hope is a beautiful week… lovely piece!
Want you to read my aaj wala plz, it’s got a special meaning
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Yeah , Thankx buddy. Ah! Yes yes I will certainly see what my good friend is up to π, see you on your page !!!
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Oy!!
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Beautiful blend of words ushering in the dawn Yasmin!
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Thank you , Radha. π€π
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Beautiful poem. I could feel everything.
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Thank you π
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I agree with the others. A beautiful poem, Lady Yasmin
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Thank you , Lord Zoolon.
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So beautiful!!β₯οΈ magical capture of the essence of dawn!
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Thank you , Shreya.
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Yassy, earlier today I merely βclickedβ a βlikeβ as I was running late for an appointment. I had meant to comment at the time, so better late than never! I simply wanted to say that while your gift with words is undoubted, I find myself more and more appreciating that extra gift you have, namely that you are able to compose both reflectively, looking inward plus deal with the βsubjective and objectiveβ of the world at large. Not many can cope with both. You do so sublimely well.
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Aw!πππ thank you , Mike.
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Your words make me dance and smile.
Thanks for that.β€οΈ
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I can twirling around in your lace , you are my valiant soul , undoubtedly! Thank you π so much.
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Wow.β€οΈβ€οΈπ
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My dear Y, this is the most beautiful serenade ever versed. Mesmerizing!
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Thank you π, what a beautiful compliment π€thank you ‘ what should I call you ‘
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My pleasure! You can call me G π
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G for ?
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My dear Y, the rest will be in a private message to you. G. is ok for now, Please know, that your poetry is really magnificent. and I enjoy it tremendously!
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I respect that.
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Thank you!
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You welcome my dear G!
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Aw ! Come on π
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It’s ok. You don’t have to π
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what a fun start to a new day! π
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Aw ! You think so , thank you El!
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Man, your
kettle whispers
happy tunes?
Mine’s an alarm clock…
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Hey man, first my mobile shrieks, wake up , the rest follows hahahahaha
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lol
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Don’t be alarmed π³
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Nice pun!
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Yeah !
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Delicious!
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Ooooh! Thankx.
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You’re welcome yas!
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This makes me want to get up in the morning :):):)
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Aw! Thank you, hope your mornings are bright and filled with love and laughter b
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Well, it’s raining so the sun isn’t out but it is brighter now that I have seen you :):):)
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May all your days be bright and cheerful. I can see you smiling. I so cherish my sister. Take care of yourself.
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you.
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Holy! wow! Now that is what I call creative rhyme at its best! Perfect imagery and amazing incredible. π
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Hey Charlie , where do you go? Missed you , man. Was wondering when you popped up with your comment.
Thank you π thank you π for your awesomeness. Appreciate
Will check out your offering in a bit π
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I’ve been working on some writing projects and had to take a little break. π
Your work brings a smile to me and I’m always amazed by your creation of poetic fury, creativity, and your choice in words. Your vocabulary is phenomenal and brilliant. π
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I get the jitters , wondering what happened to you.
So there you are ! Good to read your work again.
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If you don’t hear from me…just keep in mind that I’m either writing new material or I have my moments when I feel sad and miss my grandpa and mother in law. I want to be left alone. Again, I have my moments here and there. But, I’m good for the most part.
Blessings to you, Yassy.
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Stay well , Charlie . I understand what your saying. Well, cheers to you and blessings and peace !
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Peace to you and many blessings. π
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beautiful art in words
flying through your feather to be heard
drops of dew falling onto the page
precious moments that have stayed
you are a wonderful poet!
I value you liking my work on https://nothingcluelesslost.com
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Thanks ! Will be reading more of your work. Liked what I read.
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Sun stokes fiery trails
All day its warmth prevails – a beautiful description of the weather in South Africa at the moment – to hot for words.
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It’s cold in Mumbai. Cold and windy. I thought it maybe winter time your place. South Africa feels so close.
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Nope, we are southern hemisphere and it is sweltering here.
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Stay cool, my dear. Keep yourself well hydrated.
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Hi Yassy! I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award:
https://happymesshappiness.wordpress.com/2018/01/24/the-mystery-blogger-award
Have a great day! π
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Wow thanks
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My pleasure, Yassy! π
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I absolutely loved this, a whole new day. The description is enough for the blind to see beautifully. Love the wording, you are truly amazing at how magical you make it appear.
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Thank you my good friend Jo. Take care !
I am grateful to you π
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So welcome πΉπΉπ
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Nina Simone – Feeling good.
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What is that
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Sorry Yassy I should have developed my comment glad you found the artist/song. Chris.
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It’s okay. You tube saved me
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Yup heard it. Great song
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Incredibly creative!!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful!
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Aw! Thanksππ€
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you.
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So bright and cheery!!! π
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Thank you π
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Very lovely
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Thank you.
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That was a really nice post! You have a really nce blog going on and I have followed to read more!
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Thank you , I am honored.
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Aww. Do visut my blog as well. Your suggestions will be most welcome. And follow if you liked!
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Of course.
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Thank you yassy
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Welcome my dear.
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Such a lovely and warm poem.
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Thank you , Obol
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This reminded me of the opening scene from Enchanted π
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I loved that movie. π
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Yeah…especially the scene with all those lanterns over the water.
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Yupπ
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I just know The Author knows not night a glob of gloom but she weaves her way through my happy eyes these pairs of pointing couplets, paean-ing their way to day’s glorious multifaceted move symphonically on the big projector screen you build between my ears and let my eyes look inward on the movie screen you write. Thanks, your Ladyship.
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And, yes, the respondent meant “…knows not night a glob of gloom” because he has heard her voice over the scritching pen about the nightdelights…could have done: “knows night not…” but where’s the fun in that?
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You sparkle with your comments. So much fun when you comment.
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I sometimes scare me…and have to go scroll back to the source to see if really I mean what my fingers told my mind to type. Sometimes I really do miss the agony of pencil and paper, but not the joy of seeing my name on an envelope…from an actual human.
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Lol. I write in my notebook , I love my pen and book hahaha. I am an actual human dear man
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Aye, Sir. I thank you for your appreciation of my work. I am delighted that you , the very talented Mr.Rich.
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Beautifully written and lovely imagination.
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Thank you.
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Such a beautiful poem! Thanks for visiting my ‘House Sparrow’. Best wishes!
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Thank you my dear.
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Now every morning I wake, the world will look down at me- new, through these words. Beautiful!
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Thank you for your appreciation of my work. I am honored.
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anytime π
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So beautiful!
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Thank you π
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So so beautiful and vibrant. Happens right before my eyes, a fantastic use of imagery.
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Thank you , Elle.
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Reblogged this on lampmagician.
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Thank you ππΌ, Alaedin ππ€
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Timeless words πβ€πβ€π
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