I bleed shyly into a chalice that holds my heartbeat: sonnet of life that binds the breathtaking balance of reason, I go through the tradition of sweet mayhem; the ardor of intuition, as poems illuminate laws of love embellishing eros breathing in the exotic of inquisitive senses... even as sorrow seduces me in life's suspense the abduction of peace like a calumny.. searching for the impulsive power of a poet's passion embracing candor emotions confirm sanctity of my sanity in an ocean named odyssey I consume starlight I touch aurum.... #vers libre
Wow. I love this.
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Thank you Sarah. Compliments from you are like , Omg. Thank you.
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Always! 💖💖💖
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❤️❤️😘🤗😊🙋🏻
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You’ve written many lovely things, Lady Yasmin. This, I think is the loveliest.
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That is the loveliest compliment I have received, Lord Zoolon.
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Then I’m glad it was my compliment, Lady Yasmin
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Blue blooded!
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I sincerely thought the same thing as George. But it is always hard to say, as your writing is so amazing. But from the very first line…this is really special, Yasmin!! ❤
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All of you here at WP say the nicest things. I am so happy ! Thank you, Venessa. 😘😊❤️
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You deserve it all! I’m so grateful to have your beautiful writing in my life. Please don’t stop <3<3
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It’s a happy and inspiring experience to be reading you too, Venessa.
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That means so much to me!
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😘😊
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24 kt. 🙂 It’s so pretty, I don’t know what to say. I just keep reading it :):)
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You are so good, Margaret. Maybe you are an angel in human form . You are my Gold.
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It was so pretty I couldn’t even think of the right words that could express it. I figured if you knew I couldn’t stop reading it that I loved it :):)
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I get that , Mag. It’s your love And kindness. Thank you dearest. Love you 😘
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😘
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I knew you understood 🙂
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Of course. 😊 we are soul sisters. Huggs.
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in an ocean named odyssey I consume starlight I touch aurum.
You are truly the Midas.
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That is sweet of you , Khan. Thank you.
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Truly beautiful.
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Thank you so much , Nic.
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Fantastic poetry yassy.
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Your appreciation is much valued. Thank you 😊
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The post at least for me give insights of how you initiate than articulate process of writing.
The first, indicating the nervousness yet the draw towards the spiritual grace.. Than the process of moving in and out from this delightful disorder.. As the poem is written it finally lights up rules of affection, making it desirable while taking in and out of the ordinary with keen awareness and curiosity..
The second, speaks the poets condition (you), let me keep this cryptic the search to accept enthusiastically and honestly will be completed
The third bare the importance of those strong feelings confirming sacredness of your rationale.
The fourth, express the feeling after penning down these expression, as the thoughts fill up the mind from the
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Ah. You said it. !!!!
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Heaven, you become precious.. My favourite part is the Sonnet one as the Rhyming existence is explained by vers libre.. Was that deliberate?
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Yes. Everything has a hidden meaning. Lol
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Well, sorry I had to break into two comments. But I had to say it was worth it.. This was an arresting ingenuity of expression..
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Thank you 😊, I will have to find an appropriate name for you.
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What’s wrong with Apollo? Calliope..
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I thought you weren’t happy with that. Then , Apollo , it is.
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Nah, I wasn’t happy with that because of his position.. Okay. You should give me a new one. I’ll wait.
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I need time. Will get back to you.
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Zeus.
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Hmm.. Erotic Escapades (pun intended).. I am laughing..
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You are the wise one , my friend.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you 😊
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This is wonderfully emotional and raw, Yassy.
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Yes, Robbie. I am happy you could connect so well. Thank you 😊, girl.
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This by far is my most favourite of all the poems I’ve read of yours ! Such a great read, said so wonderfully! Brilliant work as always! X
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Thank you 😊 very much , Sophi, your appreciation has made the rest of my week wonderful. Thank you 😊😘🤗
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Awww that so sweet, your most welcome🙂 x
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😊🙂 take care , looking forward to your next post. Ciao.
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My favorite of yours. I sensed the eros influencing in. This is incredible writing and well written poetic form. 🙂
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Thank you.
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I need to read this as many times as there are letters. I need to read this and pause to reflect during each space between the words. You bleed as well or better than most poets I know and your genuineness, and prowess, as a poet, is admirable. This is a great description of your processes: thought and writing. You may start out shyly but you are ferocious as a writer. This has such depth and beauty that I will be called to read it aloud, several times.
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Best thing anyone said to me. I think if anyone is appreciated so beautifully, they will write with even more ardor. Thank you thank you 😊, Al Pacino. I bow to the Godfather of all poets.
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I have to agree with you 🙂 You are most welcome, Yassy and thanks for this name – I love it!
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The name is all yours, Al. We all need the Godfather. Can’t think of anyone better. Good day to you, Al Pacino.
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Am blushing now! Hope you are having a great day, Yassy!!
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Al Pacino blushing. So cute.
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Hehehehe 🙂
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I would have loved to watch you write this, Yasmin – to sit by you and see the word being added and subtracted – watching the mathematics of your process.
But I know that I would not like it if I were watched. It would pull my mind and render the creative process impossible. I imagine you to be the same. How do you feel about people watching you write?
Kindness – Robert.
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Nah, I can’t write with anybody around me. It’s too personal and too intimate a process.
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Same here. 🙂
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🙂😊
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“Poems illuminate laws of love” and so much more Yassy this is a beautiful piece of writing.
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Thank you , C. J.
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I love this poem.. i hope you could visit mine too and give feedback on how i can improve my site and writing. Thank you❤
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Thank you 😊, I will love to read your work.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thank you , John.
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You are welcome dear poet.
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😊🙂
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Gentle, powerful and worthwhile words shared. I enjoyed this poem dear yassy.
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Thank you very much dear poet.
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I enjoyed your work today and you are welcome.
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Thank you for the smiles.
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Your writing is so luminous.
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Thank you , Imelda.
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Awesome..love it
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Thank you, Ruata.
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