deep in my heart, a yearning like a fire that keeps burning my soul's rousing a sweet obsession warming giving life a new dawning awakening emotions so compelling leaving me agonizing for a bonding that our hearts have been courting chimerical besotting a tender glance my days and my nights filling a reverie spent flying a cupid's prance to dizzying heights sending our love's rites and reasoning. tender romance brimming with pure radiance taking a pledge of substance a climaxing of two spirit's in vibrance souls singing in resonance glowing, searing sensibilities enhance an unrestrained stimulance a blossoming.
Wow!
Beautifully penned Yass!
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Thank you, Orange.
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Wow. I felt what you felt. It felt good. You’re blessed to have had this in your heart!
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Maybe more of an over imaginative mind. Lol
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Wow! It felt so alive as I was reading! Stunning use of words!
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Thank you, that’s what imagination does to me.
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👌👌👌👌
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🙂
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A beautiful love poem!
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Oh yeah! Thank you , Nick.
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Oh my Yassy, once again I am just blown away. This is so overwhelmingly tender, loving, I mean wow. You always just blow me away :):):)
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You blew me away with your comment. Ha ha , of only, but ”tis all in my head.
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:):)
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🤗🤗😘
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I just keep coming back and reading it. So talented, you are 🙂
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That is your awesome heart.
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:):)
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🤗
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Wow that was so beautiful Yassy!! Probably one of my favorites of yours 🙂
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Thank you, Sherif Kun. 😊
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Your welcome Yassy chan 🙂
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Reblogged this on Cheese and Onion Pastiche and commented:
A beautiful piece.
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Many many thanks, Stuart.
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Peaceful, breathtaking and beautiful. Love, love, luv this!
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I so thank you , Kate.
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Whoa, the chemistry!! How do you write such art?
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An over active imagination.
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Nothing wrong with that!
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You are good.
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truelove… me thinks
in the offing… err close by
your heart… don’t be shy
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your beautiful words
evocative… truelove… seeking
bonding… I imagine…
Just read your last comment, you most definitely do have a most highly active imagination, never over active, just smoothly writing along, quizzical, but very pleasing… 🙂
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My imagination will be the death of me one day. Lol
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OMG don’t wish your life away, precious Lady!
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Nah, didn’t! Just sayin
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Niiiiiice!
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Thanks , K !
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yassy this poem dances in my heart. It is wonderful.
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Thank you , Davy.
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This is an “uplifting” piece. Nice first read on a Monday morning.
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Amazing Yassy and the combination of your wording went together like chemistry but it didn’t miss a beat within a chorus of love……you really awe my eyesight.❤️🌹
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Thank you, J goodness.
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Most welcome Yass! 😊
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Me says forever grateful.
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🌹🌹❤️🌹🌹
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I love the suggested stanzas in this poem of two expansive lines followed by a more compressed line. The rhythm is very absorbing. You are making my morning!
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And you made my day.
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A delight for the senses, Yassy.
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Yay!! Thanks.
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It’s not just that the structure of this poem is so much like a lyric, it’s more that that words a simply wonderful, Lady Yasmin
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Thank you , Lord Zoolon. I hope you had a fruitful trip.
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The honesty it takes to lasso an unrestrained imagination and hitch it in tandem with rich and carefully crafted conjoining of purpose and rhythmic discipline to such sharp imaginings painted on a reader’s ultra High Density mind-screen between vast ears force-forged even wider is a remarkable and I am sure well-earned skill. Your craft does me great pleasure, ma’am.
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What Zoolanaudio types so economically magnificantly and I stutter about searching, a blind man finger-finding his earpieces so he can lipread what he only suspects is in the same universe of sound and soft thunder.
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Thank you, Sir.
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Very nice, yassy!
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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