I hear my heart beating as I stand alone with my thoughts in the darkening night... I hear the muted voices of my deepest reveries.. the endless night swallows up the sounds of sleeping birds as blossoms dream in slumber I hear the song of the milky way.. I look for a poem in my pen...
“I look for a poem in my pen…” this is wonderful, dear Yassy ❤
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Thank you, dear Lulia. ❤️❤️
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Always my pleasure ❤ ❤
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Well done! I liked how the focus went from intimate to the grand scale of the milky way and then to the pen.
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Yeah. Finally it’s my pen, glad you liked it. Have a nice weekend.
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You have a nice weekend, as well!
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Thanks.
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“I look for a poem in my pen” wow! 👌
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Thank you, sweetheart.
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Beautiful lines 🙂💙
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Many thanks, 🍊
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Always a pleasure Yassy 💙
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💐🙋🏻
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Great yaar..awesome
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Thank you.
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The opening line took my breath away..
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Thanks, Mich!
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I look for a poem in my pen…like this line a lot…
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Thank you, Sbad
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Call me Mitra or Sam…you are welcome…
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Mitra!
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This sound good 😊
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It certainly does.
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Well, you got it, didn’t you? And a lovely one at that
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Thank you, K!
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Exactly the same feeling I get when I’ve a lyric in my head, Lady Yasmin
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You do both wonderfully, Lord Zoolon, you write music , you write poetry ! Awesome.
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Thank you, Lady Yasmin.
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Most welcome, Lord Zoolon!
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Most rarest feelings well worded. Yas. You’re my star. 🤓😍
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Thank you , Asha. What a heart you have!!! Yours forever , yasha 🙋🏻🙋🏻💐😘
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I miss you around mine, Yas. You know you are always welcome.
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Asha, my comments are not going through on your post. Nor am I getting you in my reader.
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:):):) as blossoms dream in slumber :):):) your words are like nectar, sweet and nourishing sweet angel Yassy :):):)
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You are the Fairy angel herself. 🤗🤗
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So incredibly beautiful!
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Thank you, Nico.
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I think this style of writing is very clever, Yassy. I liked the other poem you wrote with a similar type of ending.
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You are right , Robbie. I like to give my reader the freedom of imagination !
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Yassy, you are breathtaking with a pen. Your pen truly is mightier than a sword, I loved this poem as each line complimented the next in such fashion. Beautiful.
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Thank you very much , Jo wo! Hope you had a rocking weekend!
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I hope your weekend was a blast also! Thanks Yass! 😉
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😎
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👍🃏❤️
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🤓
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I love your nerdy ness 🌹
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I am a nerd 💡
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But you are loved and that’s all that matters! ;o)
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😇
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😊🌹
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And it came yassy. I can see the energy flow from Galaxy to paper.
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What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you, Davy.
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Beautiful. Calmness and serenity before “looking for a poem in your pen” Excellent ☺♥
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Thank you, Phil, there is also a poem in your comment.
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If I was there…I’d hug you and hold you and tell you everything is going to be okay.
Beautifully and heartfelt poem, yassy. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie. You got a kind heart. 😊
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You welcome Yassy. 🙂
You are kind, caring, and beautiful. 🙂 ❤
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🙂
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your pen” its your conveyer
your poems come from your heart
they then flow to your willing pen…
your words it does them impart
to every reader… your feelings…
be they dark or bright,,, all inspirational
oft they’ve gave to me a little bit of you
I’m sure other readers feel this way too
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You said it, Mick.
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true words I speak
when spoke of you
although my heart can leak
made up scenario’s too
words to suit a challenge
oft hard I find to manage
for in my heart its truth i seek
spoke of you tis truth I speak
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True words 😇🙂
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Wow, you are a good writer. I am not an article writer actually. I am a poet. Can you tell me how my writing is ?ADD my blog!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thankx.
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Panoptes, a giant with a hundred eyes
Directions whence he viewed disguised
Buildings built, schools, in his name
His ability your magistrals falsely claim
A rues to encourage students learning
If it works perhaps, his/hers discerning
But how you described that professor
A man of his calibre should know better
What err your grade, advice not disrespect
What you, and all students should expect
Hasta la vista
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Au revoir.
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Please accept my apologies, I obviously posted it to you in error, red faced I am, however I have now reposted it to TETIANA ALEKSINA. It was/is a reply I made to the poem “Broken Poem (Fragment #16)” link https://unbolt.me/2017/06/14/broken-poem-fragment-16/comment-page-2/#comment-19215.
Why the “Au revoir”? You scare me!
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It’s Alright! Au revoir. Till I see you again on Wp. Am here, not going anywhere.
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I just wonder where, that’s what scared me!
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Nah, don’t be scared. 😳
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I’ll try….
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👍🙋🏻
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Nice BLOG!!! ADD my blog!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Already following you
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Wow, you are a good writer. I am not an article writer actually. I am a poet. Can you tell me how my writing is ?❤
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Sure.
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This is awesome. I often sit down to draw and hope there is a beautiful creation deep inside my pen just waiting to spill out onto the paper.
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Whatever comes from your pen is awesome.
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Thank you. I enjoy your writings as well.
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Wow, you are a good writer. I am not an article writer actually. I am a poet. Can you tell me how my writing is ?ADD my blog!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Ok
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The poem is a lyric and it’s sublime, Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you , Anandji.
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“the song of the milky way” – well said
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Beautifully rhythmic, alternating line lengths as prosody of this fine poem. Yes, that is where poems come from, hear the voices. In the pen or through the pen, set down the lines as they come.
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Thank you, Alan.
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Oops, forgot, thank you for liking my poem!
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You are most welcome.
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Awesome 👌
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Thank you.
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Pleasure is mine 😊
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😊
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I am sure your pen is excited each time you pick it up. Your use of figurative language and description are envious. This is great poetry, Yassy, and a great description of how your poetic process works.
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My pen and I, we are partners.
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Such a great relationship!
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Yeah.
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I sometime want to strangle my pen, but, like you, it has become my partner, too.
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I feel rotten
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Aww, why rotten?
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I thought I hurt your sentiments, that’s why
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No, not at all. You said nothing offensive or hurtful. So you should exchange that rotten for something fresher 🙂
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I will ! Thank you , Perc?
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You are welcome, Yass, and Perc is perfect! 🙂
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If I don’t get it out of my system, i may well get tummy ache, i have a dear friend here on the blog who used to write with her love, your writing reminds me of their writing. I said it!!!! Lol. Perc, reminds me of Cadbury perk.
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I think I know your friend as you two lit up my post the other day. She had the same feeling but this is my first time blogging and I have been reading poets like myself for a long time and I guess I have developed a style that is reminiscent of your friend’s love. Sadly, my love has passed and there will be no other love for me. Haha, Cadbury Perc, I like that. I wonder if I can change my name?
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Mr.Cadbury. Nice.
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lol
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I have a sweet tooth. Lol
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Me, too! 🙂
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https://artist179.wordpress.com/
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Nice poem
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Thank you.
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hows you today
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Me is good 😊
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Wow. This certainly is an apt ode for all those sole-searching, aspiring poets out there. This really spoke to me and I admire your style.
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Thank you, R!
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This poems flows nicely. Although it was fairly short, I felt it wrapped up perfectly.
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Many thanks.
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No problem.
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and you found what you were looking for! Blessings, and thanks for the like a while back.. Hugs, Jeane in San Diego!
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Hello , Jeane. Thank you.
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Wow! Like your previous poem, it’s really, really good!
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Oh ! Thank you so much , Lucy.
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Wonderful imagery! Loved the final line especially!
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😊 thank you.
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You are very welcome
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😊
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Love these lines: “I hear the muted voices
of my deepest reveries”
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Thank you.
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Welcome 😊
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☺
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Very creative. I also write poems on my blog.
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I will read your work.
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This is lovely
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Thank you.
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I love the TITLE. It’s so true.
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Thank you 😊
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I love the title. It’s so true.
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Thank you 😊
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Love this!!
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Thank you.
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