I talk to God everyday
I know I am gonna meet Him someday
I don’t know when death will come
You live some, you die some
when it comes I will go gladly
maybe I need a change of scene badly
I know life is just a journey
That begins and ends like a tourney
will I be going to heaven or will it be hell?
In this life, of both, I have had a spell
some situations in life leave you defenseless
the tears, the heartache seem so senseless
for me, death will be another sunrise
life’s aftermath, maybe a pleasant surprise
the soul and the spirit never dies
leaves a mark when it goes, again to rise
The ‘beyond’ maybe beyond comprehension
a seventh heaven ascension
dying is going to be a transition
a new birth of spiritual fusion
A very positive take on preparing for the afterlife, Yasmin. I loved the beautiful rhyming flow of the verses!
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Many thanks to the generosity of your heart. I appreciate your thoughts
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Always a pleasure to read your poetry๐
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๐๐ปit’s the positivity of your demeanour that inspires my creativity. Thank you.
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I am honoured ๐๐
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Peace and happiness under your skies!
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Happy thanksgiving Paul .peace blessings to you and yours
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Wow. This is great
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Thanks Carter
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Accepting death sets one free to live now. Congratulations on gleaming this wisdom.
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You are wise , you have the understanding. Thank you.
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Great couplets, profound meaning!
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Thank you pure
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I can confidently tell you yas if hell exists there you go
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I don’t mind.
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Of course you shouldn’t. That’s the point
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I got the point
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Reading this from a musicians perspective you will understand the rhythmic structure blew me away. Had to read twice more to take in the words. So clever.
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Feel blessed and honoured. Thank you George.
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amazing synchronicity! I was talking of this topic yesterday with a friend… am I afraid to die or can I embrace with equanimity… I’ll only truly know when the next breath is…. not there . Great poem Yassy
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Many many thanks to you for your appreciation .
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No, you do not want to go into hell. Correct, our souls do not die-if there is a heaven and hell, you do not want to go into hell, and be there forever. We have God’s words given to us specifically for the purpose of helping us to understand this. This was unknown to us, and was revealed to us-it is no longer a mystery.
Ask for understanding, God will help you understand this.
For everyone who asks receives, and the one who searches finds, and to the one who knocks the door will be opened. Luke 11:10
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Oh yeah. Thank you for your kindness and understanding.
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Thank you for your beautiful writing ๐
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You are welcome my friend. Take care and have a safe weekend.
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And you as well!
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I really like this!
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Beautiful words Yaskhan. This brings to mind the old Native American saying “there is no such thing as death, only a changing of worlds.”
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Thank you Davy .
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Reblogged this on Wag 'n Bietjie.
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I really liked this piece a lot. I particularly liked these lines:
“some situations in life leave you defenseless
the tears, the heartache seem so senseless”
It’s so true.
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Yeah! I cry n let it out.
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“You live some You die some”…..you are going to hell ! How can you say the word “some”, you live once and die once….. strange woman ๐
Very nice read.
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Strange man you
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In that, you are correct
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Thank you Sir!
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Amazing lines.. serenity!!
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Thanks muff
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I count on God every day. Doesn’t matter if he exists. I need to believe there is someone out there helping me. ๐
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