The rose wows me with its brilliant color
An ambrosial sparkle dispenses
Transporting sensations spectacular
As its fragrance intoxicates senses.
Satiny soft petals, delight to touch
As I tenderly brush its dewy docile
Bloom that sways shyly in a perfumed clutch.
Nature’s redolent gift sent to beguile.
Sentiments expressed with noble token
Kindling emotions to yield, surrender
Even as blood spills amid sighs unspoken
Sensiblities spill rose’s splendor.
A sense of comfort prevails at its sight
Uneasiness fades as I bask in its
Beauty, as birds and bees glide into flight
Seeking its sweetness in nectary bits.
Graceful warmth unfolds in blossoming whorls
Sadness creeps into heart as life fades fast
Ephermeral emblem of love unfurls
A universality unsurpassed.
Wow, beautiful! Your vocabulary is amazing, well done!
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Thank you very much Southern
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An intoxication
…by any other name.
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Gorgeously written!
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Thank you M.
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My pleasure to read… going to read it again 😉
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Seriously yas.. Im wondering.. If you could love a rose this much.. *nudge wink*
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😳
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Multi-faceted description!
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Oh yes
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Thank you Bard.
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Redolent of a summer’s day x
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Aw. Thanks
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hey there is this 3day challenge thing going on…i nominated you…check it out and nominated three people you think should fit the bill:https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/48953494/posts/1172116524
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The link is not opening. Will try Tom
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yeah, none of the links were opening on my side either, especially when I clicked on your name to open the page and send you the message..and others too. So i had to just put it down as a comment under your poetry 🙂
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I still can’t but thank you all the same , you win hands down for nomination
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Lovely
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‘The Rose’ has blossomed quite nicely
as you’ve played with words very wisely.
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Your words force me to imagine where you are taking me. Nice poetry and images! Thanks for liking my blog too.
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Thank you Joan
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makes me wanna
go out & smell
them again, yaskhan66 🙂
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Please do. Bye smile.
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Hey, I just started a blog here and I’m so immensely filled by the lovely despair you’ve given to a mere rose. I’d love to read more of your work. Also, follow my blog and share your thoughts on my upcoming poetry.
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Sure will. Take care ,
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Wow; wow; and wow!!! That was soooo good, Yasmin! I’ve been thinking of you alot, lately!
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Thank you Rach.
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heh-heh! 🙂 Made me smile! Hope I did, too!
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😀😊😂💃🏿🙋🏻👍
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Lost for words
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Hmmm, won’t waste words sullying this little gem. I very rarely if ever read other’s commentary. However, I did notice, you’ve got quite the harem here lmao
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I like talking
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Do you? An essential quality for a talented poetess.
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Really.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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