The possibility of so many emotions in one poem
Trying to write
poetry of emotions
so many emotions
in the flow of my tears
I weave words with my tears
half a poem later, my grief drenched heart .. finding a way through my heart’s dream
my world is made up of broken dreams
the brush of life
as it drifts by
indifferent to
the melancholy
moving through my soul
in the blue shades of my mood
part sorrow, part joy
my life and me
translating life into poetry
I learn to sing by myself
This is so lovely and poignant Yasmin! Very moving.
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Thank you so much , Sadie ~ hugs ~ Yasmin ~
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You’re most welcome dear friend
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Agree whole-heartedly with the last comment: poignant. Well-done 🙂
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Thanks, CJ !
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Awh! My feelings touch your feelings along the poem trail. How interesting for you to post the song “comfortably numb,” at the end of the trail. It’s also a scientific poem in a way by asking how many emotions can I fit into a poem, in the beginning. The question that forms the hypothesis….
Mind blown 🤯
Well done, Yasmin!!! 💗💖
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Muah sista , Goddess Ka .. the touch therapy of comments .. .. I feel you sweet one .. across the virtual I can feel your strength .. my emotions love your presence.
Your comments are always unique and puts in a spell .. aww can’t stop reading .. listening to you 🤗 thank you is a small two syllable phrase but I say it anyway 🤗
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Oh I feel you sister so sweet
I love you so much as I hug you
Your emotions are safe and worthy
Love you dear one, keep that pen going! 💞💞💞
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Ka, 🤗😘…
Love you dear wise one
The one with the celestial pen
Sending you so many many more hugs 🤗
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Received and full 🥰 of gratitude for your embrace!
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🙏🤗🧚🙋🏻♀️💐
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Thank you , Ned.
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I love that you personify your life (as distinct from “you,” just the idea that there might be a distinction here touches on something profound), and you portray it as your co-conspirator in creating your own music. (Also your post is just one more Pink Floyd synchronicity in a recent string of them for me — very cool!)
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I love the profoundness of your thoughts. Gives me tremendous joy to read your perception of my work. Your sensitive analysis is inspiring to say the least ..
When I write, I work only with my heart , nothing else and your genius soul sees that .. I cherish the elegance with which you express your appreciation. Thank you.
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WOW.My dear yassy!!this is life and you have very well written”….part sorrow and part joy
My life and me
Translating my life into poetry
I learn to sing my self.”
Absolutely right attitude for living a life.An amazing and heart touching poem,my lovely sista yassy!!Be always happy.Bless you with love💕🌹❤🤗❤💕
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Thank you for your heart warming , heartfelt comment dear Aruna. Any news of Dew?
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Arre Yaar!! I don’t know about him-an unseen guy.uff.But It is sure that he has one eye on you and second on me.Cheers up,Yaar!! Be practical ,be postive and be always happy.Your written poem”A Poem Trail”forced me to cry with tearing continually. OMG.Being much emotional is dangerous for living life in easy way.❤💜💙😥💙💜❤
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Haha 😜 Aruna .. you really are funny and cute and sweet. He never had an eye on me lol silly .. why would he when he had you haha you are such a baby. I really love your friendship.. I cherish it ❣️
It’s only a poem , Aruna. A dramatic monologue of sorts. Just wrote what I felt , that’s all. Don’t cry sweetie! I feel teary knowing you are crying 😭
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No.If you feel then you can tear..My dear!! I am not baby but a well matured lady-much elder than you.You are so sweet by heart and innocent as I feel.I can never go to him because I am married and having three seweet dughters.He knows all about me.Plz,left this point now.for your information,I am going to Kashmir to meet my Chinar❤🍁❤at next week.That leaf is symbol of immortal love.Kashmir’s climate has most healing power in the wind ,flowing waters and fountains and with this most beautiful place in the lap of Himalaya.love you with my heart,my dear yassy.Take your best care.💕🌹💕🌹💕😘❤🤗❤🌹
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Wow 🤩 love you more ❤️
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Now,I am feeling much calm in my heart.Bless you with love,my dear Yassy❤🌴🍁🌴🤗🌴🍁🌴❤
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You have to take good care of yourself, Aruna. Be happy. Be well my dearest friend. ❤️😘
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You too…my dear Sista💓Bless you with love❤🌹🤗🌹❤
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❤️🤗
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Love you💕🤗💕
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Love you 😘
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I dont like the lotus flower because it is main sigh of PM-Narender Modi-most cunning politician.I like only Rahul Gandhi and his Congress Party which has the sign of Hand❤🤚❤.Today was voting day for our Parliyament of India.May God give victory to Congress Party.Amen.
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It’s god made flower 🌼 not made by man so it’s okay my dear.
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Yeah..you are right.So,I accept this.❤😘❤🤗❤Love you.💕💕💕💕
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Thank you beautiful Aruna 😘
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Most welcome,my dear sweet and kind hearted Yassy!!💕💓❤🙏❤💓💕
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If you know him,plz ,send me his photo.I want only see his face.May be in any movie or any video clips.Please,dear Yassy!!💕💓🙏💓💕
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Whose photo , my dear? Drew’s ? I don’t have his pic. I only communicated with him here on this blog because of his poetry , nothing else.
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Ohhh.Just like me… we both are crazy for his words.Lol💓😅🌴🍁🌴😅💓
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Only his poetry 😎
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Yeah.I understand.🤔❤😘❤
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Yeah 👍
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No,this sign is not.Drew said always that every girl is a butterfly by her heart.❤🦋❤
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Really, he said that eh 🐥
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Most beautiful his words -we have lost those.❤🤔❤🦋❤
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You will get him one day.
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Don’t know-may be in next birth❤💙💜❤
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This lifetime !!!
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And youuuuuu….❤😋❤I am married,my dear sistaaaaa!!Bless you with love.❤🙋♀️❤🤗❤🙋♀️❤
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I had a bad experience 🙉
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What…plz,tell me..🤔
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Maybe one day but not now so please 🙏
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I think-every bad experience is a beginning the new chapter of our life.Every girl and lady have to suffer in thier lives.Plz,forget all bad things and feel the relaxing. May God bless you,my dear Sista!!❤🦋❤🤗❤🦋❤
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🤗🙏thank you for your kind words 🤗🙏❤️
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You are most welcome forever,my dear friend…❤🦋❤🤗❤
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❤️🤗
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A very nice poem
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Thank you , Watson
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A pleasure it would be in the clutches of emotions to have the chance to become comfortably numb. Good song, great poem. Sending my best to you! 🤗
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Thank you , Leigha 🤗..
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You are most welcome.
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So beautifully written 💖
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Awww thanks so much !!
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Most welcome!
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one of my favorite songs; that guitar solo will rip your heart out!
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Oh .. thanks , Michael !! Guitar solo is a killer ..
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Touching and eloquent
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Thank you , Kev !
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Yas… I really love this poem. Oh to tap in like that. A true heart leaves a true trail of beautiful colours such as this… <33
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Lia, you have an absolutely ability to go to the heart of a poem and perceive its inner meaning .. I like your poignant and beautiful expression .. so grateful 🤗❤️
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Ahhhh, thank you dear Yas… and I hope you won’t mind, I was inspired to write a poem after yours (and just posted it)… thank you for the beautiful inspo!! ❤️❤️
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You are so welcome, Lia. So honored that a writer of your calibre has drawn inspiration from my enough and penned something so beautiful 😍
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Oh my gosh. You are so kind. Thank you, you’ve made my night… hugs and so much gratitude… I’m the one who’s honoured… you’re such a love and a light. Now I will have sweet dreams… thanks Yas. xoxo <33
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So very very welcome , sweet Lia. Deepest gratitude..
sweet dreams dear one. Sleep well. See you in the a.m. xoxo
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🤗💐🌈💓✨
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❤️❣️🤗
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This is very bitter sweet, Yassy.
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Thanks 🤗
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Oh wow I felt this!
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Thank you , Bell ❤️
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A lovely piece!
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Thank you , Warren !!
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You’re welcome!
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What a brilliant concept. Very well done!
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Thank you !!
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