A Poem Trail

The possibility of so many emotions in one poem

Trying to write
poetry of emotions

so many emotions
in the flow of my tears
I weave words with my tears

half a poem later, my grief drenched heart .. finding a way through my heart’s dream

my world is made up of broken dreams
the brush of life
as it drifts by
indifferent to
the melancholy
moving through my soul
in the blue shades of my mood
part sorrow, part joy
my life and me

translating life into poetry
I learn to sing by myself

110 thoughts on “A Poem Trail

  1. Awh! My feelings touch your feelings along the poem trail. How interesting for you to post the song “comfortably numb,” at the end of the trail. It’s also a scientific poem in a way by asking how many emotions can I fit into a poem, in the beginning. The question that forms the hypothesis….
    Mind blown 🤯
    Well done, Yasmin!!! 💗💖

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    1. Muah sista , Goddess Ka .. the touch therapy of comments .. .. I feel you sweet one .. across the virtual I can feel your strength .. my emotions love your presence.
      Your comments are always unique and puts in a spell .. aww can’t stop reading .. listening to you 🤗 thank you is a small two syllable phrase but I say it anyway 🤗

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  2. I love that you personify your life (as distinct from “you,” just the idea that there might be a distinction here touches on something profound), and you portray it as your co-conspirator in creating your own music. (Also your post is just one more Pink Floyd synchronicity in a recent string of them for me — very cool!)

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    1. I love the profoundness of your thoughts. Gives me tremendous joy to read your perception of my work. Your sensitive analysis is inspiring to say the least ..

      When I write, I work only with my heart , nothing else and your genius soul sees that .. I cherish the elegance with which you express your appreciation. Thank you.

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  3. WOW.My dear yassy!!this is life and you have very well written”….part sorrow and part joy
    My life and me
    Translating my life into poetry
    I learn to sing my self.”
    Absolutely right attitude for living a life.An amazing and heart touching poem,my lovely sista yassy!!Be always happy.Bless you with love💕🌹❤🤗❤💕

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      1. Arre Yaar!! I don’t know about him-an unseen guy.uff.But It is sure that he has one eye on you and second on me.Cheers up,Yaar!! Be practical ,be postive and be always happy.Your written poem”A Poem Trail”forced me to cry with tearing continually. OMG.Being much emotional is dangerous for living life in easy way.❤💜💙😥💙💜❤

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      2. Haha 😜 Aruna .. you really are funny and cute and sweet. He never had an eye on me lol silly .. why would he when he had you haha you are such a baby. I really love your friendship.. I cherish it ❣️

        It’s only a poem , Aruna. A dramatic monologue of sorts. Just wrote what I felt , that’s all. Don’t cry sweetie! I feel teary knowing you are crying 😭

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      3. No.If you feel then you can tear..My dear!! I am not baby but a well matured lady-much elder than you.You are so sweet by heart and innocent as I feel.I can never go to him because I am married and having three seweet dughters.He knows all about me.Plz,left this point now.for your information,I am going to Kashmir to meet my Chinar❤🍁❤at next week.That leaf is symbol of immortal love.Kashmir’s climate has most healing power in the wind ,flowing waters and fountains and with this most beautiful place in the lap of Himalaya.love you with my heart,my dear yassy.Take your best care.💕🌹💕🌹💕😘❤🤗❤🌹

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      4. I dont like the lotus flower because it is main sigh of PM-Narender Modi-most cunning politician.I like only Rahul Gandhi and his Congress Party which has the sign of Hand❤🤚❤.Today was voting day for our Parliyament of India.May God give victory to Congress Party.Amen.

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      5. Whose photo , my dear? Drew’s ? I don’t have his pic. I only communicated with him here on this blog because of his poetry , nothing else.

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      6. I think-every bad experience is a beginning the new chapter of our life.Every girl and lady have to suffer in thier lives.Plz,forget all bad things and feel the relaxing. May God bless you,my dear Sista!!❤🦋❤🤗❤🦋❤

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    1. Lia, you have an absolutely ability to go to the heart of a poem and perceive its inner meaning .. I like your poignant and beautiful expression .. so grateful 🤗❤️

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      1. Ahhhh, thank you dear Yas… and I hope you won’t mind, I was inspired to write a poem after yours (and just posted it)… thank you for the beautiful inspo!! ❤️❤️

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      2. You are so welcome, Lia. So honored that a writer of your calibre has drawn inspiration from my enough and penned something so beautiful 😍

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      3. Oh my gosh. You are so kind. Thank you, you’ve made my night… hugs and so much gratitude… I’m the one who’s honoured… you’re such a love and a light. Now I will have sweet dreams… thanks Yas. xoxo <33

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