in blue ink
my anguished heart spills
my words smell
of flowers and pain
they settle in the blood
that pumps my heart
taking me inside the stars
an eternity shining
and as I breathe, I write
a lone heartbeat under
the February sky
in blue ink
my anguished heart spills
my words smell
of flowers and pain
they settle in the blood
that pumps my heart
taking me inside the stars
an eternity shining
and as I breathe, I write
a lone heartbeat under
the February sky
Powerful grabs me. Strange world. I wrote describing my panic attack at 1:30 this morning but I don’t plan to post it. Breath. In and out.
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Be well , Dan. Can relate to what you feel.
Thank you.
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Open heart surgery 3 weeks
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Okay. That’s great. That surgery is going to make upon better. You will be fine, Dan. You are a brave and strong person., I draw inspiration from you. Don’t you worry dear man please .
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Thanks for your concern and good wishes may I say dear yassy. Mostly I hold together it’s the 1:30 shift of being
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You are welcome, Dan. You will always be in my thoughts and prayers. Just relax and enjoy your writing.
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I’m not passing over your pain your experience it’s all real
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I know. I understand that. No worries, Dan.
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Heartfelt and touching Yas. Your words flow so elegantly and touch deep. 🤍🤗
(how come mine don’t smell like flowers🤔😋🤗)
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Thanks, D.
They do D. Your poetic fragrance permeates our lives. 🤗❤️
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Welcome always.
Thanks too😁🤗
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Welcome welcome.. there is a touch of Oudh that is so beautifully mystic in your writings!
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Ah! Your elegant flow of words.
#humbled#😊
🤗🤍
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🙏🤗
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Very good!
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Thank you.
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awesome Yassie! So nice! So much said in a short verse!
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Thank you so much , Anne🤗
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You’re welcome my friend 🥰🥰🌸🌸
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🤗❤️
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This is gorgeous, Yassy! Every line its own story, masterfully woven together. ❣️
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Thank you , lovely Lee 🤗
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🤗🌟
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🤗
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Delightful. 👏
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Thanks, Selma.
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write a lone heartbeat… poignant!
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Thank you 🙏
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Powerful and vivid!
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Thank you so much.
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*hug* ~ an amazing write, Yassy…
~David
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Hugs back 🤗
Thank you , David.
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Superb writing, my friend! The first two lines had me hooked. And the phrasing and word choice were sumptuous. Beautiful poem!
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Thanks, Brad. Your appreciation means a lot.
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WOW.a great ‘n deep meaning in your this short poem.”…A lone beat under the february sky.”amazing line,dear yassy!! By reading this,my heart beat stopped for a second and opened mouth was still at just time.beautiful feelings in all wordings like shining diamond.a great work,my dear Friend!!Bless you with love❤️🤗❤️❣️✍️❣️💎❣️
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Bless you , Aruna ❤️🙏
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🌹🙏🌹❤💕💞
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❤️
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Sweetest songs are those that tell of the saddest thoughts. Every line is mesmerizing. 💛
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Thank you dearest 🤗
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❤
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I love this. And can relate to it very much.
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Thank you , David.
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Great write!
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Thank you , Bella.
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Awesome verse!
Art
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Thank you , Loujen.
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Nicely said! It’s helpless pouring out of an anguished heart’s woes. Emotions make one too vulnerable. However, sometimes mind and intellect step in to bail the agonized heart out. That’s the spiritual dimension of a brave life.
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Thank you , Sir. I totally agree with you.
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Very atmospheric
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Thanks eh
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wow Yassy so much emotion and heart to this one. Love it! ❣️
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Thank you dear Cindy ♥️
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”a lone heartbeat under the February sky”…beautiful words weaved into a deep meaning. Wonderful!
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Thank you , Kavisha 🤗
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Oh my, Yassy, this is very poignant.
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🤗🙏
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“lone heartbeat under February sky.” love that ending.
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Thank you 🙏
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“…my words smell
of flowers and pain…”
Love that.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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Oh my God
This is so beautiful
You are such an amazing poetess
Loved it❤️❤️
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Thanks so much , Sona. Been busy. Will get back to you soon.
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“my words smell of flowers and pain…” Epic verse, Yas.
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