It gets real cool
When the sky carves a song
And the clouds rain swan-songs
Into a crystal zephyr
Awakening the light
In a shadowless air
Spilling out into the valley
A mouth of liquid silver blossoms of aqua vowels
Tunefully tapping
Pitter patter
Wind-spun drops
Glittering
Translucent water runes
In a whisper of mist
Thunder loud
Lightning bright
Under my skin
The rain breathes
Swinging over my hips
Drenching into me.
This is magical
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Thank you 😊
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you, Sue🙏🏼
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😍 Yassy, wow. 😍
-David
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Thank you, Davidoff 🙏🏼🤗
Yasmin
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Love this! ❤
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Thank you, Carol ❣️🤗
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Every line a dream. ‘In a whisper of mist’, magic ~ George
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Thank you, George ~~ Yasmin ~~
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the song of the rain: I always enjoy listening.
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Yes, a symphony from nature.
Have a nice day, Latham.
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WOW. I’m in awe yet again, dear Yas. 👏👏👏👏
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Thank you, Lucy ❤️🤗 you are so sweet ❤️
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Sweetheart this is fabulous ❤️🥰🌹
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Thank you , my lovely friend. ❤️❣️❤️🤗
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My pleasure hon ❤️🥰🌹💕🤗
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🙏🏼❤️
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Lovely writing .
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Thanks, Andy.
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Beautiful opening, which drenched the rest in splendor!
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Thank you, Grossman.
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Welcome!!!! 🙂
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Wonderful!
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Thanks, Chris.
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🥰
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🤓
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A mouth of liquid silver blossoms of aqua vowels
So amazing beautiful!!
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Thank you, Pragalbha 🤗🙏🏼
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This is just beautiful Yassy. Kudos.
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Thank you so very much, Adit.
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Talk to the sky, sing a long……
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Thank you, Daninmaya.. the sky always listens 🌝
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Precipitation has not been described more beautifully. 🖤🖤
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Thank you very much, Carter 🤗
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Nice post
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Thank you, Tee 🤗
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Love this – very beautiful.
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Thank you 🙏🏼 very much 🤗
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Wonderful! 🌧
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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I love the beautiful words used. A very lovely post!
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Thank you 😊 🙏🏼
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Awesome lines 👌
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Thank you 🤗
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Thank you for the reblog 🤩
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Awesome read!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re painting picture
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Thank you for the reblog 🤗
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Beautiful Yassy, you can beautify rain and one of Earths natural resources to the fullest🌹
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Thank you dear buddy 🤗🙏🏼
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Very welcome dear Yassy♥️
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Enchantingly serene it is. 💙
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Thank you 🤗
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Mention not😊
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Thank you for the reblog 🤗
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if anyone has said, your aqua vowels in every quaver
I agree
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🙏🏼🤗
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Great write.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Pleasure. Have a great day.
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Do visit my blog like, share, follow…guys!!
Yassy you write awesome
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👍🙏🏼🤗
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Wow wow wow I loved this so beautiful ❤️✨
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Thank you 🤗🙏🏼💗
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Such a beautiful description, so serene ❤❤
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Thank you 💗
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Reblogged this on Commentary, Outrages, Prose and Poetry and commented:
Multi-dimensional no longer surprises – and now I have some time to cheat away from my logged-backs bent by too long away from phosphor screens. Yassy: “Translucent water runes…” what a melding! Images race through instead of crashing headlong. The imagery continues and so does delight. Thanks many times over. J
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Thank you , Richards.. missed you.
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And I you. But now I must get back to the log…long logback brings with it a larger bag of guilt which I gut by keyboard.
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Okay
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Such a beautiful piece. I enjoyed how your choice of word play!
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Thank you so much. You are so generous with your appreciation of my work. I am delighted.
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Reblogged this on Nkem-Prolyfic.
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Thank you 🙏🏼 for the reblog.
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My pleasure Yassy. You’re an amazing writer i mist say.
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Thank you 🙏🏼 😉
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You really write beautiful, Yassy. ❤
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Can’t thank you enough. It feels wonderful to be appreciated. Means so much to me.
Thank you 🙏🏼🤗❤️
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You truly deserve that! My pleasure. 🙂
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Gratitude 🙏🏼
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Gorgeous!! 😍
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Thank you ❤️
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Thou hast lovely lyricism Yassy
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Thank you , Elric.
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