Beneath the sky's luminous runway
Enchanted by the shimmering cosmic odyssey
Walking a silver roam that pours amber
Into the crepuscule’s piquant glow
Tip-toeing into rhythms celestial
Captivated by stardust's knitted luster
Heady, this feeling of being transported
Enveloped by the caress of a starlit mist
Delicate, this drenching of a 'forevermore' serenade.
#Acrostic
I’ve always wondered what inspires you to create such lovely and scenic pieces. Such an enchanting flow to these words. 🤍🖤
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That is very sweet of you , Carter. Thank you . Thank you very much. Happy holidays to you. Be well.
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You’re most welcome, dear Yas. Happy holidays.
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Bless you 🤗
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Ummmm wow….❤️ This is just beautiful. Enchanting indeed. Sweet, dreamy words of beauty yas, pure loveliness ❤️
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Hmmm thank you , Amirah .. a sweet dreamy comment from a soul friend 🤗
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Beautiful, yassy
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Thank you, Lorraine 🤗❤️
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You are very welcome yassy. You are an amazing poet ❤️
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And so are you , Lorraine. I deeply admire your creativity 🤗💖
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Bless you yassy. Thankyou for saying that ❤️
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Great imagery and you know what a fan of yours I am, so I can be honest and constructive, I hope.
More can be less and you are at your best when being economical.
Just an opinion and perhaps not relevant.
Thanks for a year of amazing words.
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Thank you, Clive. Yes, I so love constructive criticism, gratitude 🙏🏼
I agree with you on that , I do my best when I write tiny verses. What you said is very relevant.
I will do the next one just for you 😊
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Words smooth like silk ~ George
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Thanks, George —Yasmin —
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very cool
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Grateful for the reblog 🙏🏼🤗
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Very nice.
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Oh! Thank you , Brandon. I just visited your cat.
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Lovely words.
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Thank you, Buddy.
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Hey… cool! And… also beautiful!
BTW, I had no idea what a crepuscule is so I looked it up, and I’m not certain – but you may have misspelled it in your poem (according to Google).
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David
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Thank you, David. I am glad I have your back.
Happy holidays
❤️🤗🙏🏼
Yasmin
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💖💖💖
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This truly is captivating Yassy, so many bewitching words that cosmically captures the mind. The “forevermore serenade” brings such a hypnotic tune to mind just like your poetry. A beautiful mixture of words that poetically pleases the mind, you are amazing Yassy.🌹
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I think that forevermore serenade aptly describes Sparkling Freeze .. your thoughts are beautifully eloquent, Roy.. that poetic mind of yours spills magnificent elegant. Thank you , you have been an amazing friend through the years and I wish you nothing but the very best.
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Oh Yassy, your comments are as poetic as you are. For us to be described as something beautifully imagined up in your poetic words is an honor for Sparkling Freeze, she’ll never stop smiling.😊. You have and will be an amazing friend and such a supporting soul to us and me, for that…no amount of words can suffice. A million thanks lovely and a blessed holiday and joyous New Year!💫
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Here’s a toast to Sparkling Freeze. To forever , to eternity, to eternal love , to poetry and to the piety of your souls. Stay blessed both of you.
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And here’s a Sparkling Freeze toast to an amazing person that has added so much light to lives in so many in the blogging galaxy including ours! Much love Yassy🥂
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Sparkle away sparkling freeze .. let your light permeate .. we all shine brighter because of your luminous creativity ❤️
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❤️🌹💫
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💖💕⭐️
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Exquisite in form and word. Mesmerizing in its pace and imagery. Each line is a pearl on a string. Well written, my friend!
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Thank you, Brad. Your thoughts sparkle like gems ..their shine leaves a beautifully lingering feeling of vibrant serenity.
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My pleasure Yassy!
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This is so amazing to read – gives a sparkly feeling yet so softly beautiful. Your choice of words so exquisite throughout, loved – Delicate, this drenching of a ‘forevermore’
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Thank you for a forevermore friendly reminder that inspires and encourages me to keep moving forward in my writing. Thank you for your kindness and appreciation. Means so much. Happy holidays, Pragalbha 🤗❤️
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Oh my and wow! This one is especially beautiful, eloquent and imbued with mystique so smoothly and peacefully that one cannot help but re-read with wonder and gratitude and warmth in the heart! Thank you, Yassy!
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Your appreciation makes it all well worth the effort. I hope you have the happiest and safest of holidays. Take care.
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A forever serenade of starlit is as beautiful image, Yassy.
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Poetry always gives us that space to be ourselves . Thank you for your wonderful thoughts, Robbie.
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Oh Wow, oh WOW–you’ve gifted us with another gem, my dear! Such exquisite imagery–I love the first line’s “luminous runway”, and Every Single word that follows….wowwwwww… “delicate drenching, ‘forevermore serenade”…and the “stardust’s knitted luster”. I LOVE the words you’ve put together…and I’m just a wee bit envious, wishing I’d written this piece ❤
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I wanted to write this for a long time. I scribble on paper and then I found what I had written over a period of time. I am happy you like it , it means my efforts went not in vain .you write this or I write this poem matters not in the least, finally we are poets and we think alike and that is why we bond so well ..
I can smell the aromas wafting from your kitchen. Merry Christmas sweetie 💕💝
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Your words are always so lovely! Cooking/baking is done, I hope–sharing treats with neighbor’s family 🙂 Dinner tomorrow! Merry Christmas to you, as well, dear heart💝💝💝💝💝
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Thank you, Avia . Keep a chair for me at the table tomorrow.. 💝💖
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You know I WILL!!!! My friend/sister Deb and I are having Cornish Game Hens, stuffing, yams (with cinnamon sugar, butter and marshmallows–my recipe!), Brussel Sprouts (with bacon and something–her recipe!), cranberry sauce… We rarely stop eating!! Love you!!💝
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Love ❤️
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As always, superbly expressed, yassy! Even sans the acrostic, your poetry is multidimensional!
Best of health and happiness throughout the holidays and beyond…
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Thank you , Tom
Best of health to you too. And happiness in abundance. Happy that I know you here.
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Wow! Just plain gorgeous–each line and each lovely word! I hope your day is filled with joy and peace.
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Thank you, Elouise. May you have a healthy and happy holiday.
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The whole, the parts, the sounds, nearly real unrealities, the glimmering gifts, the senses, the truth and fantasy of it. The very’s, the emphatics and the almosts. All those things. Like and appreciate.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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What depth! There’s no holding the breath for this one. xoxo
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Thanks, Jason. Happy holidays.
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Beautiful words. We hope you had lovely holidays, too.
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Thank you, Marcus & Micah ..
Wishing you health and happiness in the coming year.
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An outstanding acrostic poem. Loved every line. Thanks for sharing😊
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Thank you very much, Shayandas.
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So beautiful. Love your poetry.
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Thank you 🤗
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You’re welcome
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Which
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Beautiful, loved it💖💫
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Thank you 🙏🏼❤️🤗
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Dear Yassy, A well-woven poem rich in aesthetics.
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Thank you so much ☺️
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I’m blown away! I LOVE THIS!!! I feel this on every level and my body is sincerely humming with the joy of Your beautiful words!!! THANK YOU, crazy lovely Yassy!!! 🤗💖😊!!!
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Thank you, Gorgeous Kate. What a wonderful beautiful way you have with words. Your comment leaves me feeling in the seventh heaven. I feel so elated. You inspire and encourage , Kate. That is so kind and thoughtful of you. ❤️❤️❤️
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My absolute pleasure, Beautiful Yassy!!! As my sweet man would say, “Just speakin’ the truth!!!”. Sincerely. Sending so much Love Your way!!! 💖💖💖!
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Love you dearest 🙏🏼🤗
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I Love You, too, beautiful!!! 🤗💖🙏🏼
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Truly amazing words Yassy!✨✨✨
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Thank you, Tim.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Beautiful I shall be trying this type of poetry now! I’ve never tried writing one!
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Thank you. You must try it , Carol. You will do a fabulous fantastic one.
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I know one who has traversed such a celestial flight. Your lovely poem makes it sound all that more mysterious and enchanting. ✨
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Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you my dear good friend, Jon.
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UR ALWAYS WELCOME!
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