Bewitched





Beneath the sky's luminous runway
Enchanted by the shimmering cosmic odyssey
Walking a silver roam that pours amber
Into the crepuscule’s piquant glow
Tip-toeing into rhythms celestial
Captivated by stardust's knitted luster
Heady, this feeling of being transported
Enveloped by the caress of a starlit mist
Delicate, this drenching of a 'forevermore' serenade.




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91 thoughts on “Bewitched

  1. Great imagery and you know what a fan of yours I am, so I can be honest and constructive, I hope.
    More can be less and you are at your best when being economical.
    Just an opinion and perhaps not relevant.
    Thanks for a year of amazing words.

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    1. Thank you, Clive. Yes, I so love constructive criticism, gratitude 🙏🏼
      I agree with you on that , I do my best when I write tiny verses. What you said is very relevant.

      I will do the next one just for you 😊

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  2. This truly is captivating Yassy, so many bewitching words that cosmically captures the mind. The “forevermore serenade” brings such a hypnotic tune to mind just like your poetry. A beautiful mixture of words that poetically pleases the mind, you are amazing Yassy.🌹

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    1. I think that forevermore serenade aptly describes Sparkling Freeze .. your thoughts are beautifully eloquent, Roy.. that poetic mind of yours spills magnificent elegant. Thank you , you have been an amazing friend through the years and I wish you nothing but the very best.

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      1. Oh Yassy, your comments are as poetic as you are. For us to be described as something beautifully imagined up in your poetic words is an honor for Sparkling Freeze, she’ll never stop smiling.😊. You have and will be an amazing friend and such a supporting soul to us and me, for that…no amount of words can suffice. A million thanks lovely and a blessed holiday and joyous New Year!💫

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    1. Thank you for a forevermore friendly reminder that inspires and encourages me to keep moving forward in my writing. Thank you for your kindness and appreciation. Means so much. Happy holidays, Pragalbha 🤗❤️

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  3. Oh my and wow! This one is especially beautiful, eloquent and imbued with mystique so smoothly and peacefully that one cannot help but re-read with wonder and gratitude and warmth in the heart! Thank you, Yassy!

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  4. Oh Wow, oh WOW–you’ve gifted us with another gem, my dear! Such exquisite imagery–I love the first line’s “luminous runway”, and Every Single word that follows….wowwwwww… “delicate drenching, ‘forevermore serenade”…and the “stardust’s knitted luster”. I LOVE the words you’ve put together…and I’m just a wee bit envious, wishing I’d written this piece ❤

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    1. I wanted to write this for a long time. I scribble on paper and then I found what I had written over a period of time. I am happy you like it , it means my efforts went not in vain .you write this or I write this poem matters not in the least, finally we are poets and we think alike and that is why we bond so well ..
      I can smell the aromas wafting from your kitchen. Merry Christmas sweetie 💕💝

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      1. Your words are always so lovely! Cooking/baking is done, I hope–sharing treats with neighbor’s family 🙂 Dinner tomorrow! Merry Christmas to you, as well, dear heart💝💝💝💝💝

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      2. You know I WILL!!!! My friend/sister Deb and I are having Cornish Game Hens, stuffing, yams (with cinnamon sugar, butter and marshmallows–my recipe!), Brussel Sprouts (with bacon and something–her recipe!), cranberry sauce… We rarely stop eating!! Love you!!💝

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  5. The whole, the parts, the sounds, nearly real unrealities, the glimmering gifts, the senses, the truth and fantasy of it. The very’s, the emphatics and the almosts. All those things. Like and appreciate.

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    1. Thank you, Gorgeous Kate. What a wonderful beautiful way you have with words. Your comment leaves me feeling in the seventh heaven. I feel so elated. You inspire and encourage , Kate. That is so kind and thoughtful of you. ❤️❤️❤️

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