Perfecting darkness The night; I hear it I touch it... The night turns alabaster in the moon's warm embrace entwining silver rays on a fluid rhythm of sparkling novae..Baroque stars circle moon...platinum gilted wrapping Lazhward fire of an ancient dappled night Plumeria scents entice, permeating lilting dew drops dancing like nymphs in fragrant glossed time-worn skies. Tinseled runes murmur A poem whispers Sleeping leaves scatter Glimmering stars devour shadows of fog into an auric spell. Starbeams' mystic light echoes in the quilting of solace I find in my own embrace. My refugee heart takes refuge in poetry. Time stops. I am asleep and awake at the same time. On nimble feet I tiptoe Pirouetting like A ballerina Turning my night to a Sonata The ink blurs into a Vivaldi sonnet. I breathe the whole night in one breath......
Oh wow, you are so gifted, Yassy…these lovely lines are so sublime, and they lift me during the wee hours before I go to bed. Thank you for being here, for sharing your incredible poetic words β€
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Thank you , Rhen.
Sleep well sweet one. Dream sweet dreams. See you in the a.m.
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Fever dream or reality? I believe it doesn’t matter. Thank you for sharing this!
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I agree with you , Timothy. Doesnβt matter.
Thank you π
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Sublime and surreal words. Love this. π€π€
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Thank you , Carter.. good to see you here .
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Great to be here. So much brilliance. π€
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I can feel that, Carter.
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That’s like the best diary entry ever, Yasmin ~ George
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Thank you, George ~~Yasmin
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So very beautiful β€
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Thank you .. hugs
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You’re welcome π₯°
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Youβve stepped into an ethereal bliss, a mystical wonder land.
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Escape to blissville.. hello and welcome.
Thank you , Holly. Sorry for rambling π
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If this is rambling we want more!! Divine poem dear Yassy.
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Hear me , hear me , Holly Holly .. it feels nice to say your name Holly ππ€
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Itβs even more fun at Christmas πππ₯°
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I can just imagine, Holly dear π€π
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πfilled with hugs π€ sailing your way. Really, it is. Ck your porch. π₯°
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Snug as a bug in a rug
I am being cuddled by a hug
I am sending you more
Pick them up from your front door πͺπ
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BEAUTIFUL! ππ»β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ This is out of this world.
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Thank you βΊοΈπ€π, Lucy
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Sounds like good advice to me! I really enjoyed this.
Anita Marie
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Thanks, Anita.
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oh, dear Yassy… poetry at its finest.. i love it
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Thank you, Michπ€
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Nice
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Thank you, Ankush.
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OMG! That’s cosmic! Magical!
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Thank you for that magical comment , Chris.
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Breathing the whole night in one night, beautiful crescendo Yassy. A symphony of effortless movements within the darkness creating a pyrotechnic of poetic light that can be read for miles. Wonderfully worded and marvelously marked Yassy.πΉ
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Thank you, J!!! Your comment is poetry , Roy. Pure poetic delight. You have a magnificent heart.
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β€οΈππΎ. As you do too Yassyπ
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Transcendent and dreamlike, your words waft into the night air with flashes of images, colors and smells that entice the mind. It is all so beautifully written that it is hard to pick a favorite passage, but I do love the last stanza. And the last line is just exceptional in the feeling you convey. Well done, Yassy!
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Thank you, Brad. Thank you very much for such an awesome feedback. I appreciate that very much.
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amazing! I love this! check me out I write poems a lot! http://therapybits.com/ will follow you now!
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Thank you, Carol. Following you here and on twitter too.
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Oh dear~ this hit deep~π₯°ππ
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This is ethereal. It’s almost a poem of such calmness and serenity. You just accentuate the beauty of the night with these sublime words. Beautiful work.
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Thank you for a wonderful beautiful comment on my work. You just made my weekend beautiful, my good friend .,
Be well. Take good care of yourself.,
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I will be printing this poem, the type of poem I can return to again and again. Actually, that is true of all of your poems. Guess I need to start a folder! π
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Oh! A thank you wonβt suffice to tell you how mighty touched I am by your words. You are unique , Michele. No one ever said that to me before .. I am way beyond grateful. I think your words just filled up my quill with inspiration..π€π€
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You’re really good.
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Thank you, Syd πππΌ
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i love this poem, there is something comforting about the night time
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Thank you much much π€
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This is so lovely. Especially the line, “Turning my night to a Sonata.” Thanks for sharing it.
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Thank you, Geri π
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WOW–SO SMOOTHLY CRAFTED!!!
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Thank you ππΌπ€
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U. W. VERY WELCOME! β€
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So sweet
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LIKE U—!
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Awwwww
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Most enchanting poem,dear yassy.!! I like too very much night time with moon and stars and dance of ballerina.love you ,my dear!!
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Thank you very much for reading and sharing your beautiful thoughts ππΌπ€π
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