I will clasp your hand in mine
And never let go
I will cherish the thoughts
That flow from your mind
Yes, I feel the love
It encompasses my senses..
I will walk beside you
Through thick and through thin
If your heart breaks, I will mend it so
You never know-your heart ever broke
You lead the way
I will follow
If you can't walk anymore
I will carry you in my arms
I will lay down beside you and feel your strength
And just forget the world and live the eternity..
Beautiful!
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π€Thank you.
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Beautiful. May Allah bless you. ΔmΔ«n
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Thank you, Muntazir.
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So beautiful, my dear Yassy.
“If you can’t walk anymore
I will carry you in my arms
I will lay down beside you
And just forget the world…”
xoxoxo
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Thank you βΊοΈ, Gabby β€οΈ
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My pleasure sweetheart ππΊπΈππ
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Hugs π€
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This drips with selfless love. Hard not to be moved by these beautiful words. Bravo, Yassy!
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Thanks, Brad. You say some very awesome things. Cheers.
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You are most welcome!
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Those sentiments are a rare treasure given the times we live in. Loved the clarity and strength with which you conveyed the same! ππ
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Oh! Thank you, Vidhurπ
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My pleasure, Yas!
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Oye, Charles.
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Absolutely beautiful. Brilliant and amazing poetry.
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful generous compliment, Lucy β€οΈ
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Once more, beautiful words, Yasmin. I don’t suppose you’ve got a cure for my latest cold? – George
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Thank you , George.
You better take care of your cold , George , you playing football in the cold or what ?
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A girl sneezed in my face as I left a shop. A few days later I was sneezing again. This one is just a cold and I’m tons better now ~ George
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If people are going to be be doin this, itβs better you wear a mask over your mouth and nose. when you step out. Itβs quite alarming , catching some ones infection.
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Oh beautiful…π·
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Thank you, Maria. I miss our little chats on Twitter π§‘
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I am back on it. Write to me any time.
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Yeah , okay.
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Selfless love indeed so beautifully ex pressed. πΊ
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Yesss , Holly , thank you , thank you π€
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Youβre welcome, thank you for this lovely moving poetry. π€
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You are a sweetheart, Holly π
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Agreed!
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Thank you ππΌ
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Wonderfully beautiful.
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Thank you, Nico.. peace and hugs π
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Blessings! πβ
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Well written π
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Thank you π
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Beautiful, yassy! π To me, it sounds like somber love but well worth it. Was that you got from it too? :heart:
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Hey, Carly , thank you π. Yes, πβ€οΈ
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π :heart:
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WOWWWW, this leaves me hushed…so good, so beautiful… wonderful writing.
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Thank you, A. Your comment leaves me with a wonderful feeling π
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I’m so glad–that means my work is done for the day, haha!! β€
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β€οΈπ§‘π€ itβs good to have you back.
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Thank you, dear π β€
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You are welcome π€
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Wow. Great stuff. I’m feeling a bit inadequate reading your poetry but thank you for taking the time to read some of mine. I’ve only been blogging since Christmas and a whole new world opens up to me each time I connect with others like yourself.
All the best.
John Ormsby
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Thank you for your wonderful comment..you donβt have to feel like that at all , everyone is good at whatever they do , itβs their own uniqueness that makes them stand apart and I am certain each time I read your work , the gift of your words.
Good luck.
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Lovely:)
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Thank you ππΌ
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I WILL
β’ read and enjoy your blog
β’ sing to your poetry
β’ leave my βlikeβ
β’ comment to tell you βHappy β€οΈ Weekendβ and
β’ be inspired to try my hand at free verse again. I WILL!
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Thank you, JanBeek.
You are awesome and absolutely delightful..
I wish you a safe and a peaceful weekend..
Happy free verse writin. Best to you , wise one.
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Good Monday morning, Yassy. May this week be one of many blessings for you. π₯°ππ½
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A very good morning to you too , JanBeek. Stay blessed β€οΈπ€
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sweet and simple. and that is all, love is. i liked it π
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Yaa I know. You are right π thank you π
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Heart criesβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Love is a universal language – thanks for sharing yours! π
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Beautifully written empowering words of comfort and resilience. Love this:
“If your heart breaks, I will mend it so
You never know-your heart ever broke”
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Yes, I wish somebody said that to me lol , sorry π my imagination keeps running away.
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This is incredibly heartfelt, Yas. π€π€π€ I especially loved the lines “If your heart breaks, I will mend it so you may never know your heart ever broke.”
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Thank you so much , Carter β€οΈπ€
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Truly beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you, Davidoff β€οΈ
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Thank you π
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Beautiful flow!!!!
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome!!
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Beautiful poem which enriches meaning. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you π
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