I was born with Spring in my veins. Oceans and seas breathed their salt into me Giving my soul the sunshine An orchid breath tinted cerise A touch of water on my forehead Letting my spirit roam emerald trees Where winds played the violin as my song wandered, chasing the heartbeat of imagination...reaching me through clouds redolent with awakening blooms as they cradled diamond dew in their inflorescence. My sky became gold to the rain song's melody electrifying sapphire rhapsody of silken raindrops rippling pitter patter like shooting stars finding their place on earth. Blooms flame roseate In the Abalone curve of horizon, I carve eternal lines My ink becomes stardust The immortality of poetry-- A map of words Connecting our pulse.
Your descriptive word choices here are delicious! Vibrant, raw, and beautiful. Well written!
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Thank you, Brad.
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A beautiful autobiography if there ever was one. Bravo, Ms Khan
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Thank you, Mike , good to see you around. Just don’t disappear on us again 😊
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Where winds played the violin as my song wandered… fascinating word-choice. a poem with wings ❤ ❤
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Thank you for the reblog, Alaedin. I am truly grateful to you.
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as me, I am very happy to get knowing you dear Yassy. great poetess 🙏🙏💖💖
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You are a sweet , kind guy, Alaedin. A great human being. Honoured to know you.
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Wow,,, you made my day, you made my life 💖💖💖🙏🙏🙏💖💖💖😘😘😘🙏🙏😘💕
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a brilliant poem to connect our pulse 💖🙏💖
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Yeah, great to connect with you , Alaedin. Thank you my friend 😊
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Simply so full of life like the 1st rains.. ❤ Loved it
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🙏🏼 hey, thanks 😊🤗
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Pleasure 🤗
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🤗
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thank you
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You welcome, Bob.
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Golden stardust ✨💫
from Eden’s Garden
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David wields the wand
Sprinkling sparkling stardust from where he stands.
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Beautiful use of language 🙂 A lovely piece.
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Thanks, Chris. I so appreciate 🙏🏼
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The beginning really got me and the last 3 lines sent me away sated, beautiful write💙
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Thank you, Jude 😊
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Welcome 😇
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😊🙏🏼
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I just read all the comments, Yasmin. I agree with all of them ~ George
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Everybody is really kind , George. Thank you.
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And I second George’s comment.
How many times can I say, Gorgeous! Your word choices are just sublime!
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Thank you ☺️ thank you 😊❤️🤗
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💘💐
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Yesss 🙂 I was born in the spring AND with spring in my veins!! 🙂 Breath taking as always sweet Yassy 🙂
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And you are flower of Spring , my dear Maggie. Thank you for your wonderfully generous compliment 🤗❤️
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You are most welcome 🙂
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🤗
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Exceptional poetry! Beautiful lines that flowed like a glittering stream.
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Thank you, Sumi🤗🤗
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A beautiful composition flowing with your birth spirit! And now for the music…☕️😎☕️
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Play something for me 🎼🎸🎻🎸
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That opening line was beautiful. Such a wonderful piece.
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Thank you ☺️ hugs 🤗
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Niiiiiiice!!!
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Thanks, K. How’s your weekend going.
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“Abalone curve of horizon” – I loved that line
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Thank you sweet Star. Tara in the Indian language means star ⭐️🤗
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Really?? That’s way cool. In, um, Latin? (I’m questioning myself the origin)… terra is earth. And tara is a rocky cliff. I think I like either meaning 😉 I just learned something and that’s pretty cool.
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Well, whatever it is you are a star in the cosmos and you shine bright , aleast you brighten my life with your posts.
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Awwww thanks so much! I also love your poetry. It’s wonderful.
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🤗🤗
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Thank you 😊
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this is a really pretty poem 🙂
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Thank you ☺️
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Just beautiful – to be born with Spring in your veins is such a blessing – in your case I believe it is true.
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Thank you ☺️
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I love that first line “I was born with spring in my veins”! Thank you for sharing, I need to catch up on some reading while I have a bit of free time! Miss reading your poems. Peace and blessings ♥️
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Oh hey , I have missed you too. Hope all is good with you.
Welcome back my dear 🤗
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Thank you, yes, all good. Been very busy and have bit of a break before back into it next year.
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Good to hear from you 🤗😊
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breathtaking! so beautiful! thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Andressa 😊
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Your images here are so vivid that i could clearly see them through…yours is indeed a wonderful gift of words Yassy.
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Thank you, Mich 🤗 love you sweetie, you really are kind.
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You really do write the most vivid and beautiful descriptions, Yassy.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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Came back again, and loved it again! 🙂
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Thank you , Kunal 😊 😊😇 , some coffee ☕️ to warm you ⭐️
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Awesome 👏
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Thank you ☺️
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Poetry, “a map of words connecting our pulse.” Well done and very well created. Loved visiting your site, thank you for visiting mine. Peace and good will.
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Thank you vet very much 😊. Peace 🤗
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I like your poets. Sometime, I want to translate my luanguage. But I’m scared of losing your poetry because of me. If possible, I would like to translate it.
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Yeah. Do it. What is your tongue , your mother tongue ?
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Thank yassy. My tongue is Burmease.
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Now i would be study your Fibonacci poetry .
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I love when I find a new Wordsmith… @yaskhan. You have a spectacular poetry voice. “A map of words” perfect… thank you.
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Thank you 😊
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I am unable to follow you back.
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Hmmm…. I will have to look at my settings and see why that might be.
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Okay.
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I cannot find any setting that would block you… I am at a loss. I am going to try unfollowing you then hitting follow again…
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Send me blog link.
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A very fine piece, Yassy! 👏
Wanted to let you know I have linked your site in my latest post (“Blogstars”).
(I apologise for mentioning it here, but can’t see a contact form.)
Thank you, so much, for the valued support you have given me! 😊
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Aw. Thank you , Ken. Such a wonderful magnanimous gesture.
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It was a small response for all those likes you have given me, Yassy!
I feel honoured that a writer as successful as you
continues to visit my obscure little site.
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I enjoy your writing ken. So happy to connect with you.
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I am always happy to see you, Yassy!
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🤗🤗
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Loved it 💖
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Thank you ❤️
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Must welcome 🙂
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❤️
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Most 😂
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That last stanza, wow! This is awesome, Yassy. 🙂
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Thank you, Susi❤️
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You’re welcome, Yassy!
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Love this! It sings in the mind.
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Thank you, Sharon.
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Thanks for taking time away from your writing to visit my blog!
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You are welcome 🙏🏼
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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