A mauve sky tumbles On glowing jack-o'-lanterns; Dew-laced breeze dances golden. Tugging at the tides Moon breaks water on the shore; Artemis prepares to hunt. #Sedoka Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three line Katauta. 5/7/7 5/7/7
A mauve sky tumbles On glowing jack-o'-lanterns; Dew-laced breeze dances golden. Tugging at the tides Moon breaks water on the shore; Artemis prepares to hunt. #Sedoka Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three line Katauta. 5/7/7 5/7/7
very exquisite Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Thank you for introducing me to another Japanese form.
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You are welcome, Von. I hope you write something with this.
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Maybe a love story;)
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Yeah, a love story sounds interesting ๐ง
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Done “Drift”
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Okay.
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Where is it , canโt seem to find it. Send me a link.
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Yeah, found it when I opened my email.
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Super. I get all my “follows” both ways.
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Great ๐.
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This is a stunning poem, Yassy. I love it.
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Ah!!! Thank you ๐๐ผ
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Exquisite poem.
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Thank you ๐
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Very nice, yassy!!
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Thank you, Michael.
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Lovely!!!
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Thank you, Luisa.
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So watch out Orion.
For Wonder Woman
will be high flying ๐
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Along with the Big Dipper , blazing a Red path.
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I would stand in the path of Artemis.
Unlike Orion, who duly received
a good belting. His fate was written
in the stars, I guess ๐ค
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You would also be standing in the path of Apollo , her twin
Itโs a no win win
But if you would rather ๐
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Apollo must be a lunatic to fly
past the heavenly body of such
a wealth of celestial poetry ๐
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No bow no Arrow no hunting knives
Without a quiver
Apollo must fly
Fly with the sun and the light
And the poetry
*as Davidoff rightly says*
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Wow awesome ๐๐๐ต๐ต๐
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โฅ๏ธ๐ผ๐thank you.
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Beyond beautiful, Y!
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Shukran habibi๐
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Beautiful and haunting! The use of color helps to paint a lovely mental image for the reader and invokes greater connection to the words. Well written! ๐
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Thank you, Brad. Thank you for a beautiful comment ๐
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Nice one. . I love the tie-in of Greek mythology. Her relation to childbirth and the imagery of the moon, reminds me of the song, “Che la luna mezzo mare”
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Thank you, Jonathan. I must listen to that song ๐ถ
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It’s pretty popular in traditional Italian music, although it involves a lot of Innuendo. . .
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Okay ๐
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WOWWWWWWWW, this is SO GOOD, Yassy!!!!
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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You’re welcome always!!! โค
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Absolutely gorgeous
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Thank you, S .
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My absolute pleasure
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Very beautiful as always !โค๏ธ
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Thank you ๐, Holly ๐คญ
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So welcome ๐๐ค
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I very much enjoyed this one.
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Thank you ๐
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Of course.
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Your beautiful writing Yassy!
It is truly balm for world weary souls…
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I am world weary too sweetie. Itโs my panacea, thank you for a beautiful wonderful comment.
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Thank you for enriching my life xo
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And you enrich mine and I am more enlightened because of you.
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Such a kind thing to say!
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Well done! I love the way you are continuing to experiment in forms.
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Yeah , thank you, John.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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