thoughts shut in darkness claustrophic mind in the darkness of no escape strangulation of rational process of thinking , emoting pent up anxieties frustrations knotting up in the stomach the mind erupting like a volcano reactions of shackled destiny. defeaning silence of screams that leave the throat , only a gasp, a hoarse whisper repurcussions of releasing breath slowing leaving the body for the timeless eternity that shapes destiny hands that break and take the depthof a person's fate dissolving into uncertain beliefs of what maybe, can be impermanent life to be permanently toyed with. *written about nine months ago..
This would sound great as an audio recital, Lady Yasmin
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Yeah, really? Thank ye, Lord Zoolon!
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Nice one👌
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Thank you.
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This is such an amazing piece of poetry Yassy ! I thoroughly enjoyed.
Much love !!
😘😘
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Thank you , Chhaya ! 🤗😘
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You’re welcome Yassy, always ! 💓😊💓
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🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️
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Why’d you wait so long to post this? It’s fabulous!
(no, don’t answer. I also write and then post when the mood strikes, so I do understand)
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Actually posted this when I just started blogging, no Kind soul read it, not even you, Thakore! ‘Katti ‘ oye
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Hahahahaha! Hey, I didn’t know you existed back then!
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How mean😪
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Sachi mein, how would I know?
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Koi baat Nahee!
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claus·trum noun
a thin layer of gray matter in each cerebral hemisphere between the lentiform nucleus and the insula.
Beautifully descriptive and well expressed Yassy.
First time I say this to you. Your default picture, you are beautiful. Just thought I pay you a compliment. 🙂
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You have raised the bar around here, that’s why we try to give it out best shot. I think you are in a class of your own. Btw, where did it go?
You say the most beautiful things. I am smiling , Charles. 😊🤗
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🙂 You make the world a better place. I’m so happy for you. 🙂
By the way, I posted something new. 🙂
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You make the world a lot more interesting, Charles. Am going to check your post.
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🙂 You make me happy.
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😊😌
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I think we both make each other blush. 🙂
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Charles !
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🙂
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Ciao , Charles ! Take care.
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Wow, Yassy. This has so much power I am quite speechless.
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Quite drained me, Robbie. I am so happy with your appreciation!
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I can well imagine that it did drain you, but it was worth it!
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Yes , always worth the pain. Lol
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This is great!
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Thanks
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wow what magnificent verbosity
an explosion an eruption of words
tsunamis flood my brain flushing
intact poems as yet not scribed
waves of passion poetic prose
paining me now out of control
you’ve lit a fuse unknowingly
an anthology seeking paper
mentally I can now at last savour
pain was but a psychological stammer
released now by virtue of my sanity
what was pain is now wondrous rapture
i have been myopic I see now galaxies
each one an expression of your grace
the force that meanders through you
teleporting across cyberspace informing
that the Word Press poet laureate
has found her place, yes you Yasmin Khan
write on precious lady
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My precious friend, you are so good with your words , it’s stunning the way you write. You are a natural. My dear literary Einstein and all the geniuses rolled into one spectacular human being. I proudly give you Mick. WordPress has no other like him. I am blessed to know him. Hope Aileen has brought down her cigs. You, are you looking after yourself well?
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And from a dark place a great light appeared and shone. This is powerful piece yassy. One of the downsides of blogging is if you miss it first time you might not catch it again. Thank you for reposting and sharing.
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Thank you for your thoughts , Davy. Always happy when I hear you.
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One Lovely Blog Award – David Speaks
https://dharris21blog.wordpress.com/2017/05/18/one-lovely-blog-award/
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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😊
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Breathtaking Yassy.
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Thank you, Jo!🤗
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You know you’re welcome you breath of fresh air. 😁
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Breathing in, breathing out.
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Leaving your readers breathless! 😁
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😅 phew!!!
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Tell me how I’m supposed to breath with no air? ;o) ~Jordan Sparks~
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S.O.S
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Save our Soul. ;o)
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Very beautiful poem Yassy! I nominated you for an award, not sure if you do them or not, and don’t feel obligated to, but here you go 🙂 https://iampharaohmaktuk.wordpress.com/2017/05/19/real-neat-blog-award/
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Thank you, Sherif kun. You are kind.
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Your welcome yassy chan!
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😌😂
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Interesting Poem. I don’t write poetry anymore.
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Why don’t you write ?
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Don’t know. I stopped when I got a job and now I’m jobless I’m mostly on my computer. I just started blogging so maybe I’ll start again.
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Please do.
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wraps you up in big hugs. This made me cry. I’ve been here, in this poem, it breaks my heart that you have been here too. Much love delightful Yassy. It is a true blessing to know you :):) You are a gift, within a gift 🙂
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You are my gift ! Life is so beautiful now that I know you. My struggle continues. 🌼🌻🥀
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What a pleasure you are, always making me smile, making me feel special and loved dear Yassy. God bless you, and bless you, and bless you!
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I cried as I read you , made me so emotional, you are a good person with your heart in the right place. You are special , my little Meg! Very very special , may God’s choicest blessings be showered upon you, my soul sibling.
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Nooooo, don’t want you crying. Too pretty to make those lovely eyes all red and puffy :):) God does truly bless me. I went to make a small breakfast and was thinking about how He continues to bless me with meeting such a wonderful person like yourself. I was composing little verses in my head about your beautiful words and how happy they make me. See how you have inspired me :):):)
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