the beauitful night sky
millions of twinkling stars
little tufts of grey clouds
wafting across the crescent
far away, I see a shooting star
I forget to make a wish..
the glory of
the magnificent expanse
keeps me spellbound
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the beauitful night sky
millions of twinkling stars
little tufts of grey clouds
wafting across the crescent
far away, I see a shooting star
I forget to make a wish..
the glory of
the magnificent expanse
keeps me spellbound
Woww
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Vandana.
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Love this! Enjoy the moment and don’t ruin it wishing for something else in its place. Stay spellbound 🙂
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You are right, Sheriff. 😊Thank you.
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Haha it came from your writing!! Thank you for your wonderful poetry!
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You are welcome, thank you for your wonderful comments, sheriff. Have a nice week.
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The magical night sky makes us forget everything. Beautiful imagery Yasmin 🙂
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Thankx , so happy you liked it.
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This is simply beautiful! I love it how you forgot to make a wish… 🙂
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Thank you 😊 very much.
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I know if i could see your eyes
I’d see shooting stars so bright
A wish I’d make for your delight
Your every day a best surprise
Such is life, your so far away,
But look, a star, your eyes.
Yours, and cant be disguised.
Momentary, they can not stay.
Reflections, oops! one winked,
Then both, gone, seeking wonders.
Shooting stars, silent thunderers!
Goodnight, see you later, blinked.
🌾 💐 🌷 🌹 🥀 🌻 🌼 🌸 🌺 everyone a thank you!
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I am so overwhelmed, I am sf ding you hugs. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Some big gentle HUGS for you…☺
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Aw. You are the kindest sweetest of them all.
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Hope all is well with you , Precious.
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All is well, Aileen cross with me for the blitz, but she knows that I am only thinking of her suffering. :0)
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I don’t know anything , Mick. I only don’t want her to smoke. Period
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I can just see that shooting star in all its magnificence, Yassy
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Have you seen a shooting star in recent days, Robbie?
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I saw shooting stars on TV. There were recently shooting stars visible from Cornwall in the UK. See this link if you are interested http://www.cornwalllive.com/shooting-stars-from-halley-s-comet-meteor-shower-expected-to-light-up-the-sky-over-cornwall-tonight/story-30314292-detail/story.html.
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Yes, I will. Thankx.
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You are a star and produce such wonderful creative writing.
You are beautiful my friend. 🙂
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I am blushing. Thank you, Charles.
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🙂 You welcome yassy. 🙂
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😊😌
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❤
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Beautiful.
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Thankx !
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One of life’s joys is staring into a clear night sky and you have captured this perfectly in your excellent poem yassy.
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Thank you, Davy. Thankx for reading my work. Always appreciate your comments.
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🙂
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😊🤗
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Niiiiiiiiice! Very nice!
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Thanks K!!!
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I’ve the same trouble with the night sky, falling into it and forgetting. Cool!
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I love looking up at the stars. So fascinating. I forget everything.
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Just like I was there watching it all…. beautiful creation of scene and feeling Yassy!
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Thank you , Leigha
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You’re welcome.
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😘
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This is beautiful ❤❤
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Thank you sweetie
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Beautiful Poem.
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Thank you, Daisy.
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Your Welcome
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I live out away from cities and town, the sky is always clear here, since it doesn’t get drowned out by the city lights and I stand out on the porch at night and see shooting starts at least once a week. Sometimes they are small and burn out quickly. Other times they are the long lasting, streaking through the sky. It’s always amazing but I always forget to make a wish 🙂
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Well, I live in the city and it’s ages since I saw a shooting star. I am glad atleast i can see the stars and the moon 🌙! What a scene it must be, seeing a star shooting. Wow. Lucky you.
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Sometimes they are quick and short but still always excites me. I don’t know why 🙂
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You know Mag, this little verse was inspired by your comment!
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Really?
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Yup. I will see the stars and think of my dear friend Magg!
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