Floating free in this sparkling constellation
Spirit unburdened in celestial creation.
The heavens open their arms, embrace me
I am balanced to perfection, gravity free.
Needing my own space in time
Breathing easy, feeling sublime.
As I gaze into the stars, kiss their eyes
They shine on me with a wisdom so wise.
Hear my thoughts out loud, freedom’s voice
A voice of reason, a soundless rejoice.
Breathing space is emancipation
The Milky way, a galactic fascination.
As Higgs Boson captures my imagination
I float, intrigued, feeling need for exploration.
Mind over matter, in chimerical culmination.
Free, unfettered, an unhindered liberation.
dedicated to Kids Talk Radio , The Teachers of ‘Occupy Mars Band’
and VisualJazzOpera.Wordpress.com
I guess this is what happens when an astrophysics nerd is asked to write a poem. You are the cosmic axis of evil to simplicity, Yaskhan.
Please, keep writing!
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Thank you , Uba! I am a nerd too. Ha ha , of course, I will keep writing. That’s one thing I like to do.
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Lol, I believe you…you really are nerdy. I love astrophysics, by the way, so yours might just become my favorite cyberspace.
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Oh! So you are the guy with the telescope. All starry eyed and moony. Lol we migh t just make WP a cyberspace delight.
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Lol, No. I’m more like a cheerleader for the guy with the telescope. All starry eyed and moony, though. Let’s cause disrupt, babey!😂😂😂
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Why don’t you join the barboza school in LA. They may have a programme for Herbert Uba Uba Uba.
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You do know that I have never been to the U.S., right?😁😁😁
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Now, you have a reason to go , Herbert 🤓there is always a first time 😎
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Lol, wishes, beggars and horses. You know what, I will tell you when I get there…gimme three years.
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Don’t say that , Herbert. Nothing is ever impossible.
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It’s a beautiful thought. I will write GREs this summer and beg my heavens it all goes well. Cross fingers for me, Yassy. I just might attend Barboza after all.
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You will, I might even see you in Barboza, who knows. May all our dreams come true , my dear friend on WP , good luck to you. You can do it, you know that.
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Thanks for the vote of confidence. I will keep walking. Have a great day ahead…
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You too. Goodbye.
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Amazing lines. Loved this constellation. 🙂
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Thank you Sheetal! 😊🙋🏻
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You are welcome. 🙂
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I’d like breathing space, Lady Yasmin because I’ve caught a cold and breath is in short supply. I’m late starting work today, so I was glad to read your positive poem to kick off the day.
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The cold is not letting you breathe, Lord Zoolon. Did you take something for it? Is it a chest cold? Is your nose blocked? Are you coughing ? Hope it’s not a throat infection ? Dud it happen while you went hunting ? Take the day off!
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I didn’t get an Easter Egg and now I have the worst cold anyone has ever had. Also, I can’t take a day off as I have a lot of singing to do – although my voice sounds like someone rubbing sandpaper against a brick.
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How can you sing with a cold , George? Unless, it’s a song about a cold. Lol. We have to take up the Easter egg with your mama. Poor child, Jurg !
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My only hope is to change the title – the whole lyric as well. I shall name the song, ‘Influenza Blues’.
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You sound sick , Jurg! But I think you will beat the blues. Cold blue battle for Lord Zoolon.
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I think dark chocolate is the only cure for my malaise.
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Lindt premium dark chocolate with cherry and almonds. I haven’t touched it , oh lol. I will eat it now. I am a milk Chocolatey person !
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Lindt premium dark chocolate with cherry and almonds! The only cure for the common cold known to mankind and you, Lady Yasmin are about to scoff the lot. Unfair.
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I thought I will send them to you , Lord Zoolon.
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So very kind, Lady Yasmin. Will you send them by carrier pigeon?
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Pondering 🤔 on that!
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I bet that’s because you’ve eaten it.
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I told you I eat only milk chocolate.
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But if all you had left was dark chocolate wouldn’t the temptation overwhelm you?
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You mean to say I snitched it. This is an ongoing chocolate war between us
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I could never be at war with you, Lady Yasmin.
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Thank you , Lord Zoolon.
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Amazingly well-penned, Yaskhan! Simply beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you so much , Jonathan.
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Loved this one yassy. I like how you have used the couplet form allowing space and breath for the reader.
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Thank you, Davy. I actually write this a few months ago, just couldn’t reblog. So I had to do a fresh post. A comment from Kids talk radio got me to post this piece again. Thank you ! Hope your week is going well, Davy.
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It is going great thank you yassy. The sun is shining here in the UK. Hope it’s going well for you 🙂
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Yes, thank you ,Davy. 😊
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What a fantastic piece Yassy…heavenly…lol !! Hope life is good. Much love ❤
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Thank you , Chhaya. Love and Huggs. 😘🤗🤗🤗
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My favorite line:
As I gaze into the stars, kiss their eyes
They shine on me with a wisdom so wise.
I picture these lines of imagery as cinematic poetic golden.
The whole entire poem is filled of gold and wisdom.
Genius! I’d say to you. 🙂
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Made my day , thxnhx Charles.
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You welcome…Everything about this writing just wow!!!
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🤗
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Superb writing, Yassy.
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Thank your My friend.
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Aww Yassy!!! I feel like I am floating up there with you embracing the heavens!!!!
“Hear my thoughts out loud, freedom’s voice
A voice of reason, a soundless rejoice.
Wow, wow, wow….absolutely astounding 🙂
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Thank you Angel Fairy. Love you.
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Lots of love back at you 🙂
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🤗😘
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This is just so beautiful. I don’t give a shit about what’s out there really but this was engaging.. thanks
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Thankx lol. Ha ha
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A reply as requested although a prompt not needed
Your poem, all accolades have once again exceeded!
You again my muse have me inspired to write a poem
With yours in mind and a task on Mars has me driven
So without no further ado
My poem reply a couplet too.
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BEYOND OUR MILKYWAY
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Beyond our stars, our milky way, consistent.
Galaxies, light years away, in the far distance.
You sense them too, their existence,
Astronomers expound on there resilience.
Exhilarating, a chance so so sublime,
All souls will fly there come their time.
But for you the speed of light, teleportation.
The joys you’ll find beyond all expectation.
The stars there will reflect your brilliance,
Reflect your aura, your pure excellence.
Your from a realm of euphoric splendour.
Your words exude moods dark, and tender.
Where only exemplary emotions can exist
Peace forever, unashamed, total bliss!
Your grace in your poetry, so discernible,
Makes each one, each line so unforgettable.
Like you my words flow, a dam wont stop them,
But I can, and do force myself, so till next time then.
Mick
For a precious Lady, Yasmin
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Stunningly beautiful couplet. You are brilliant , my dear precious friend. You are in a class of your own. A star , you shine and light up all our lives. A beautiful mind you have , Mick. I am so so so so delighted with your couplet , you are simply fabulous.
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Back at ya! It goes both ways!
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🤗🤗🤗
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Pretty piece! It will cross my mind when I watch the Lyrids this weekend!
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Thanks John!
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I actually got carried away reading this Yassy. You are in a class among the stars my dear. 💫
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Thanks my deah!
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Thank you. You spin me round and round.
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Like a merry go round.
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Just like a merry go round, but you have a long lasting effect. 😉
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My head is spinning just talking to you. Lol
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That’s just an illusion sweetheart. You’re just actually watching me spin😀💫. Lol
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That’s making me giddy
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It’s supposed to. That’s what illusions do my dear. 🙂
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Do they?
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Of course…….it’s all pleasure and mind Yass. Eye candy, it’s only mind candy.
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You have an explanation if everything , Jo!
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Not everything. I’m sure I don’t have a comeback for everything. I’m sure you can leave me speechless. You are breath taking.😏
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Breath taking. I don’t want to take no one’s breath. Long live Jo!
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Well, I must admit Yassy. You’ll never leave me blue. 😁
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For
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Take your pick😊
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Kids talk radio? Had no clue
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Really.
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You kidding with me…..
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Nooo Charly , check them out on you tube.
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I will
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You should.
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You know I was too late to response… well here it is almost 2.am. and I war robbing, sorry no money till the end of the month there is no hone, although not people just things, there you go I said it and I feel good, not tha I did it, i id get away from it though, just a bit of adrenaline flowing not too much. And guess what I robbed…. wine. That is how much I craved that shit after spending almost a month maybe, sober, not cool at all but, unfortunately is ot the first time I rob places, just in front of all them faces, seems I do have a childish face and if I dress nice most o the time I get away with it. But I promise is the last time…..
For me, I can’t stil sober just going out patient clinics, If I really want to I have to get myself into one of those nutcases place or in jail, athough I did spend 6 months in jail and I tasted more than alchohol so who the hell know now, the only thing is that I didn;t got cought by the police and I’ m back here writing in a blog, that should be funny if they catch me, “what do you do?”….. “I write poetry and you have a beautiful agents gravity wich it is the normality….”
Can you believe this
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I think it’s okay Charly. I think you are a fabulous person. You write great and I love your honesty. I am quite proud to be friends with you. I have known you ever since I joined this blog. You are a good person , I just wish you would take more care of your health.
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That is the one of the best comments I have read, so thanks.
The health…. slowly, but hey! I’ m 34, and I was suppose to be dead at 25, so I had my run
love ya, take care
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You are very welcome, Charly. You better take good care of yourself !
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I will, no problems
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That is so good to hear.
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truly celestial….
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Thank you.
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Beautiful!!!
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Thank you , Mary.
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Thank you.
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