Lost in the soft embrace
Of a light that bathes us in a glaze Eyes that hold me in a daze In a trance, my heart can only race Torching senses with flaming rays Aurora of warmth inside us blaze Two souls caught in moonbeams grace Creating their own love pace We melt like wax to erase Semblance of sanity, dreams interlace.. |
‘Semblance of sanity’ in a dream. Great concept, Lady Yasmin
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You have great powers of observation, Lord Zoolon.
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Ever since I had my eye laser treatment I can even see through brick walls, Lady Yasmin.
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Hahahahaha
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I can’t stop laughing. Lol. Did you see through the Great Wall of China.
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I can see through anything. My eyes are my super-power.
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I can see that, Lord Zoolon. You are blessed in many ways, you do music, you write poetry , you blog , you have no bad habits, whatsoever. And Eyes , to die for.
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Even though I can see through anything, I remain an honourable bloke and always avert my gaze in the company of women.
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Omg. That left a lot to my imagination. Lol
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Mind you, Lady Yasmin, the day The Queen knighted me I couldn’t help but take a look. She has a mole on her left, well let’s say her left knee cap.
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Lord Zoolon, I thought you said you averted your eyes like a true gentleman, you had no business looking up her skirt 😲
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I truly wasn’t. As I knelt before her when she was placing her magic sword on my shoulder knighting me, my see through anything vision saw through her dungarees.
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See through anything vision. Wow 😳 I hope you can’t see through the net?
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Yup
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You can see through WP
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I wear progressive lens. Do I need to do the laser thing? Seriously.
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It was the best thing I ever did. No more glasses. It really is worth it. Not only can I see a football, I can head one without smashing my glasses. Seriously, it is worth having done.
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I am quite fed up with wearing glasses. It’s so frustrating, almost like being blind , yes, maybe I should think about laser too. Thanks for the FYI
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It really is worth. I had it done while still in education, so my parents paid. It cost a lot in the UK, but I think in other places it can be done for much less money. I hope you get a good deal. The only issue – it’s not a big one – is the first few days after the treatment when you need a million eye drops.
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Yes, I think it can be done here , I will check around. It’s still worth all those eye drops, don’t you think?
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It certainly is, Lady Yasmin. To see crystal clear without glasses is an amazing feeling.
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I need that , actually.
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Go for it.
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Yeah.
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Lovely, Yasmin!
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Thank you.
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I enjoyed the rhyming scheme of this poem, Yassy.
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Yeah Robbie. I am looking to reading more from you. Can’t eat those delicacies that you bake , so give us the pleasure of your words.
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Unfortunately, couriers don’t deal in cakes [smile]
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That was soooooooooooooooooo romantic Yassy. And that was my deep sexy voice even though I don’t have one.
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I can hear your deeeeeeeep voice resounding across the universe , I hear you J.
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❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥
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😳
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🃏😁🃏
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😇🤷♀️😜🌸
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😁🌺🌹😉
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Thank you for the flowers. And the smiles.
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The flowers are to match your beauty and the smiles represent what you make me do lovely.
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The above statement is a Brain Freeze.
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Why? Does it make you tingly all over? 😁
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Lol🤷♀️
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Haha🙆🏽
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So beautiful Yassy! “Aurora of warmth inside us blaze” love, love, love it 🙂
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Thank you , my angel fairy.
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:):) that is going to make me smile every time
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👍👍
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Aw!!
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Beautiful passion
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Thank you.
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It is my pleasure talented poet
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😊
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Great poetry yassy.
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Thank you Davy.
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One beautifully written poem! 🙂
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Thank you Elsa.
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You’re welcome.
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😊
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Lovely texture in words.
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Many thanks John.
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👏👏👏
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Beautifully written!
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tanka inspired by the best
a precious Lady
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something tantamount
love of hearts not quite the same
love of life that’s me
what would the world be no love
desolate empty no change
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ah for the few love
it finds its way unaltered
ere the eons fly
eyes the voice of ones soul
let them talk they tell the truth
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i am never done
time flies waits for no one
no empathy none
my heart beats maintains my life
my wife’s love keeps me fit strong
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a precious Lady
feel her emotion heartfelt
words released appeal
fill empty hearts removes woe
music the food of love eat
~~~~~
A beautiful poem, look what it did to me. 🙂
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Thank you my precious friend.
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Happy Easter , Grant.
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You, too, my dear.
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A very romantic one 😉
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Thank you , dear.
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Beautiful poetry. So evocative. Love your imagery 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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