Eyes oozing anguish
Tormented mind unburdened
A mix of blood and tears pumped
Drenching the spirit
Storm of tears from a heart torn
Mending the tear to ease pain.
Eyes oozing anguish
Tormented mind unburdened
A mix of blood and tears pumped
Drenching the spirit
Storm of tears from a heart torn
Mending the tear to ease pain.
yaskhan 
Pain captured perfectly! Well done!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re most welcome
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Soaking in the tears of anguish, pain and emotions…..well penned!
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Thank you Radhika
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You are most welcome!
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Ah, amazing!
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Thank you Sarah.
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Awesome poem! the imagery you created with your words are vivid! 🙂
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Many many thanks for your appreciation Sophie
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So beautiful…
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Thanks so much
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This in its perfection expresses the pain I am feeling. Such a powerful piece Yasmine!
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Hi Robbie
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Hi Yasmine
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Sleeping ?
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An excellent and hard hitting Sedoka yassy.
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Thank you David.
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