a burst of prism
after the sky has shed tears—
water reflections
varnished bands of light—
optical phenomenon
of vibrant hues
shades of violet—
indigo, blue, green, yellow
orange, red tinges
spectrum illumine—
breathtakingly beautiful
multicolored arc
I have to tell you that I’m so glad there are other people who write about nature and more of anything other than love and relationships. ❤
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Why can’t I see your posts. I clicked your link sand it doesn’t open I so much want to read your work.
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Well, I’m not sure why. Try sehrishwritesblog.wordpress.com and also I haven’t posted any of my work yet.
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Yeah. Will do. Bye.
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Oh I like this one lots. Your words are beautifully evocative
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Thank you kind guy.
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Beautiful words painting a wonderful scene.
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Thank you Nico.
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Youll find it…hiding in puddles
Youll find it…hiding in raindrops
Youll find it…hiding in tears
It helps you…out of your troubles
It helps you…out of your dead stops
It helps you…out of your fears
Thats how it is
Day from night
Thats the way it is
The truest light…
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Omg. This is fantastic. If you don’t post this on your blog I will stop talking to you.
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Haha…
Ok … cant have that.
When i find the right shot ill post them together.
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Please !
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Beautifully written
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Thank you for following Storyteller. — Ray
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You are welcome Ray. I thought I followed your blog. Some glitch happening. Anyways I love your posts
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I thought you did too Oh well. 🙂
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you kindly.
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Your words evoke such beautiful imagery and hope for planet earth.
I love this poem and how you wrote it. 🙂
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Thank you Charlie01
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You are so welcome. 🙂
oh…and I posted my new work. 🙂
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Will check it out , so long.
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🙂
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Vivid. 🙂
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Thank you Bardy
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🙂
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😉
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Such an ethereal description…quite beautiful😌
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Thank you Pearl
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Fabulous 🙂
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Thank you kindly.
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My pleasure. Check out my poetry work as well. 🙂 Would be glad.
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Yup I will
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Thank you! 🙂
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Stephen king, on modern poets said that they ‘live in a Tolkien tinged world, pulling poems out of the ether’.
Of the myriad poems I come across every day, this one struck me as one thoughtfully written and not merely pulled out of the ether. Beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you Ibrahim .
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Neither King nor you have the right to judge poems. Read them,like them or just plainly shut up. Ugh. Elitism
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If you say so.
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It’s a free world
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Omg. Somebody is angry
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I’m always angry.. He’s just the recipient. Poetry is fun. Close minded academics like him and king ruin all of it
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Tch tch. It’s okay Zem. I don’t mind. I write because I like to write.
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I want to reply to this but I’m at an impasse “what would Stephen King say”
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Stephen does not write poetry
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U missed the whole point of my annoying trolling here. I don’t even know who he is😂😂😀
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I got your point. Excuse me
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Excused
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Filthy Souls, I meant no disrespect to anyone. I was merely critiquing with the intentions of praising her poem. I’m not an academic at all and neither do I wish to be one. Poetry is fun indeed. But there’s a fine line of difference between good poetry and bad poetry. That’s my opinion; I am entitled to it. Her poem struck me as a good one and i thought to mention it to her that it was.
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Thank you Ibrahim.
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Of course. It was nothing personal. I’m just trolling as in that annoying thing emotionally immature idiots do😊😊
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It’s okay. Forget it man
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I havr6
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Yes! Finally, my kinda poet. I love this one. Will read more – and enjoy it, I’m sure. Thanks for liking my post. 🙂
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nice words…
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Thanks
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Beautiful visualisation!! The pictures uphold the image perfectly!! 🙂
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Thank you . You are very kind. I feel honoured
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You are most welcome!! 🙂
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🙋🏻💃🏿😃
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I mean the words uphold the image perfectly 🙂
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Thank you so much
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hi yaskhan, beautiful poem about beauty and looking closer. it spoke to me. thank you for sharing your perceptions and feelings.
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Thank you Eby
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Hola . Where you disappear ?
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Rendered breathless by all this beauty!
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Because you have a beautiful soul
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😍Yasmin
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😘💃🏿🙋🏻Saila
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