It is one of my favourite times right before midnight. The beginning of a new day. All the hope that presents 🙂 A new beginning, a new chance, starting over. 🙂 🙂 Wonderous!
Something mystical about midnight 🕛 I love the poetic pulse in your words..sent me pirouetting into an intoxicating dream world. Thank you sweetheart 🤗🙏🏼
With the sound of the burning candle, wax tickling and although rain drizzling she seemed okay with the company, searching for sleep btw the stars in the deep midnight sky~ 🥰
time for dozing and dining
rising, reclining
putting aglow what you know
chasing ev’ry new rainbow
you collect from dreams
leaving nothing out it seems
❤
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Hello , Charles. Hope you are well.
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Love this! Short but effective and powerful in capturing a moment in time ✨💕
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Thank you, Elsie.
I so appreciate your comment 🤗
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It’s made a lovely shape Yassy 🖊
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The shape of words 😊
Thank you , Kate 🤗
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Yes the shape they form in the readers mind.
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💃🏽🎶🎵💬
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Beautiful, just beautiful!
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Thank you very much, Brad.
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Gorgeous write-up.
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Thank you, Lilin😊
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Love it Yassy
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Thank you, J.B.
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YW, Y
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Great poem yassy
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Thanks, Lorraine.. hugs 🤗
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Appreciate 🙏🏼
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“You’ve got a gift, my friend”
“You. You’ve got a gift, you.”
(see: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ravi4YtUTxo&ab_channel=DontHateOnJord)
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Sweet of you , Ben. I liked that. Awesome 😎
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Beautiful
xoxoxo
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Thank you, G 🤗
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My pleasure sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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🙏🏼🤗🌺💐
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Oooooh, I Looove this!!!
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Thanks , Gorgeous 🤗💖
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You’re always most welcome, dear heart ❤
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🤗💖🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SOUNDS LIKE ONE OF MINE—ONLY BETTER!!!! 😀
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Thank you, Jonathan. Yours are better than the best.
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FLATTERER!!!!! Well…maybe not…at times! 😀
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Well deserved praise , my good friend!! Give yourself some applause.
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“ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-!” (Silly, but effective!)
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Hoot hoot hoot 😎💬
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Did it work better than counting sheep? Twitter puts me to sleep at those midnight hours. I haven’t tried writing a poem. 🙂
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Baa baa black sheep 🐑 went to make wool so I went bird hunting on twitter and I missed Munroe there , sorry miss , I have not stopped by your page.
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Lol! I’ll look you up
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It is one of my favourite times right before midnight. The beginning of a new day. All the hope that presents 🙂 A new beginning, a new chance, starting over. 🙂 🙂 Wonderous!
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Something mystical about midnight 🕛 I love the poetic pulse in your words..sent me pirouetting into an intoxicating dream world. Thank you sweetheart 🤗🙏🏼
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It is my pleasure 🙂
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❤️🙏🏼💖🤗
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WOW! Such beauty in so few words.
Solitude has so many things to say. Only the wise pay heed and a poet carves it into poetry. Loved it. 🙂
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Thank you, Dutta .. a poet sees beauty in everything .. thank you for sharing your profound thoughts on this..
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Please feel free to call me Goutam…that’s my name; Dutta being the surname. 😊 Your writings are so beautiful….all of them. Love each one. 😊
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I think being appreciated fires my imagination to poetic delight..I am grateful to you , Goutam ..
keep safe 😊
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Nice, nice, nice.
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Hey hey hey thanks 🙏🏼, Benji!
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Welcome!!!
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Most of the times solitude visits me after midnight and that’s usually when i write~ 🙈 lovely piece dear Yasmin~💝🥰
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Thank you , Ouimama .. burning the candle at both ends , works fine … stars , the moon and solitude .,,under a midnight sky 🌌
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With the sound of the burning candle, wax tickling and although rain drizzling she seemed okay with the company, searching for sleep btw the stars in the deep midnight sky~ 🥰
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Awesome 👏
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🙈
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❤️
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opening a new verse
from the end of yesterday
inviting a smile
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New beginnings
To the words
That are always there
Bring it on
Von Von
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so keep it classy
sassy, lassie, slide and stretch
your boundaries wide
bring it up and bring it out
don’t hold back the tide
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Boundaries don’t hold me back
I don’t cut them any slack
I swim with the tide
The moon let’s me ride
We shine we dine
Dime a dozen
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time for dozing and dining
rising, reclining
putting aglow what you know
chasing ev’ry new rainbow
you collect from dreams
leaving nothing out it seems
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Take good care of yourself, Von.
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Brilliant. 🖤
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Awww thanks.
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Oh dear …its beautiful🙏🙏
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Superbly evoked
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome
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Awe! How lovely this is! ❤
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Thanks kindly 🙏🏼😇❤️
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It arrives in many shapes and forms, so often after midnight…enjoy your sharing
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Thank you 😊
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Wow! Re-posted; https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/14/2-minutes-to-midnight-yassy/
Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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Your meaningful poem has a touch of elegance wrapped in marvelous word play! Well done! Thanks! 🙂
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Thank you , thank you so much 😊
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IMO brilliant Senryu. Original. Love it!
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Thank you, Mary.
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Beautiful
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Thank you 😊
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Pleasure 🌟
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