bedecked handwritten words drifting in space enduring through different time-zones in the pale of equinox and solstice serenading to the allure of vowels, consonants narrating their saga words dream into pages into eternity celebrating liberation of the quintessential poet within rhapsodizing a rendezvous kindling lost memories nestling between pages. #rictameter
And it all comes together to make one beautiful sound. Only you can make it a symphony Yassy, your words have lovely sounds🌹
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Thank you my good friend , Jo Wo! I almost heard you say these words and you sounded like you were singing.
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Maybe I was….you make people happy Yassy😉🌹
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You brighten up the place , Jo. Thank you for the goodwill and cheers.
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The power to brighten is easy with the Sun behind you😉💫
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You got the golden one 🌞
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😊. And a very bright friend 💫
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One brain found another brain.
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😊
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Brilliant!
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Thankx. Happy festivities , Kunal.
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Like I go climb the dahi handis!!!!! Too much noise and hungama (I’m a grouch)
🙂
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Okay.
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I understand that. You chill maar!
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🙂
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Hope my applause rings in loud Yasmin…..brilliant orchestra of the poetic whispers ❤ !
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Thank you , Radha. 💖🌺 happy festivities.
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So beautifully woven together Yassy.
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Thank you , Beautiful !!
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Gorgeous, my dear Y! Celebrate the liberation of the great poet in you! Touch me with your words!
celebrating liberation
of the quintessential poet within
rhapsodizing a rendezvous
kindling lost memories
nestling between
pages.
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Thank you sweet poetess 😊 you say the most awesome things. Can’t thank you enough for reading and commenting.
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And your writing is the most awesome one! 🌷🌺💐
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Oh ! my! Dunno what I would do without you. Thank you soul sis.
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hourglass of smooth
vertical pulsation
ending just in time
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Three loaded lines. Potent !!!
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love this
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Thanks, Mark.
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Wow… Amazing writing!
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Thank you 🙏🏼😊
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Oh yes! This is just so perfect!
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Thank you , Caribou !
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Yes, this and you❤️
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Thank you, D! How have you been. Missed you , I been lazy and that’s no excuse .
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Me too. Not written much. And everything still sucks.
Now you go.💥
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I been reading your work , can’t miss it for anything. But I am too full and pent up to comment. I am sure you understand. It’s good to talk to you. Thanks.
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Yeah yeah, I do Yassy. I don’t believe in commenting and appreciating. Writing and reading should move with flow.
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Yeah ,😊
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Such a beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you, Neha.
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You’re welcome ❤
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😘
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Words fail me Yassy
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You are too generous , Chris. Thank you.
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Credit where credit is due Yassy
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Yup😊🙏🏼
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A whisper that becomes a roar when you write. Thanks for sharing, peace and blessings! 🙂
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Thank you ! Peace and lots of warm hugs and smiles sent your way.
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😊
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Awesome! I love the rhythm with words you’ve composed.
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Thank you 😊
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Really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it.
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Thank you so much 😊🙏🏼🙂
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I really like the style of this poem, Yassy.
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A rictameter, Robbie. You are so adept at various poetic styles yourself.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Pranjal.
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Really enjoyed this! Must be read aloud.
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Oh ! Thank you , Stephie😊
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Tell me, Yaskhan, did you create an hourglass-shaped poem purposefully? Or did it just happen? I love the way the shape seems to fit the content.
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It’s a rictameter poem. I have to follow syllable count .
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Ah, I need to go back and read it again with that in mind. It’s beautiful!
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Thank you , Jan. Your comments have motivated and inspired me. Thank you for your kindness.
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I really like the choice of your words. Do review my poetry on http://www.rhymingart.com
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Thank you. I will 😊
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beautiful words
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Thank you.
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Beautiful
Please visit my blog, I’m new here: http://feelthe.poetry.blog
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Thank you. I will. Sorry about being late replying.
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Hi yassy like your peom, in this poem you have written about your writing, about space between words, writing about different time zones, your dream words into pages of poetry which narrates their saga , keep up the great work expect more meaningful peoms from you all the best take care god bless you.
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Thank you very much. Best to you too.
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Favorite line:
“words dream
into pages
into eternity
celebrating liberation”
I dream of this liberation in my own world and it is beautiful and freedom. 🙂
I love this poem of yours, Yassy. 🙂
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Thank you 😊, Charlie!
I think you liberate us with your verses!
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You welcome, Yassy. 🙂
Bless you my good friend. 🙂
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Peace and blessings and warm hugs 🤗
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼💖
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I like poem when I can figure out it’s deep inner meaning very comfortably. At that moment I myself feel very easy and happy.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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so very elegant, yassy 🌹🤍
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Thank you dear D 🤗
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my pleasure🤗🤍
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