Transparent, Translucent, I flow like water in deep sea I flow with time Abiding Breathing in the Vastness of infinite space.. I flow, with the flow of time And tide, psychedelic.. Living in the monotony Of mindless decadence, Repressed, yet, in the Involuntary movement of Humdrum chores, a chaos of innate Dreams myriad??, cascades.. I flow with time, Letting the sublimal Lull my intuitive heart Into believing destiny Sculpts the fore, intrinsic. Time edges me into balancing my psyche An incomprehensive manifestation, degenerating Into spasms of cacophonic inevitability.. The pendulum slides with a mundane clack, A pulsating ticking like adrenaline: Rushing, racing, pumping, a Nemesis carrying A spell.
I really, really like this. No, I love this. I am this. I was sorry it was over. Ya know this one could really develop into a novel of sorts. Superb. As an A/P aficionado I throughly imagine this going further.
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Thank you , Jim. I wrote this a few months ago and forgot about it lol , I found it today on my phone , the notes thingy !
I am happy you like it , Jim. Thank you so much.
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Once in a while I reread something, not for clarity, but for awe. ‘Breathing’ was one of them. This just struck me. It’s not perfect, but oh so close to it. Love it
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It’s perfectly perfect not to be perfect and art does not necessarily be beauty.
I think I understand you. Thankx.
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If it wasn’t a pure compliment, it should’ve been. Lol What I should have said was “complete”. Hence the novel reference. Loved it thoroughly.
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Yeah yippeeee I got that , Jim. Have a gorgeous weekend.
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beauty is real
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Where were you. Missed your posts.
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taking a breather
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Okay.
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Did you post or did I miss them pics
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My dearest Y, gorgeous poem! “The pendulum slides with a mundane clack,
A pulsating ticking like adrenaline:
Rushing, racing, pumping, a
Nemesis carrying
A spell.” Kill me!!!!!!
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Aw! Thanks. I so appreciate you reading and commenting. Thank you my dear.
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breathing…in space and time…
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Thank you , sweets😊
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This is fantastic!
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Thank you , dear one .
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What a great way to end my day by reading your soulful words.❤️
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Thank you , 💖🤗
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And i just flow out with your words. I don’t have words to describe it. Just love it.
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Thank you. You are very kind 😊
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There’s nothing I can say without sounding redundant; I love your every poem!
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Thank you , sweet Michael. So kind of you. Thank you.
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Nice😎
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Thank you , Mairi🤓
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Welcome 😊
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“The pendulum slides with a mundane clack”…….that is the sound of many breathes that one can take. Your poetry is fine art and can be taken so many ways and that’s what makes you so good at your craft. Reading this had me taking labored breaths Yassy, your words, formation and poetry form is pure breath taking. I love your vocabulary, I truly do….you take it to a whole new level, I love your work.🌹🌹
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Thank you , Kind guy. You have a kind heart !
I think your comment sounded like lines from a free verse.
Thank you for your time 🙂
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You are the sweetest person and like your poetry, you are amazing! Free verse? Well, I wouldn’t pay for my lines! 😂🌹
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Likewise🙂😊🌺🌸💐
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🌹🌹🌹😁
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This line “The pendulum slides with a mundane clack” is a stroke of genius, Yassy. It so vividly conjures up the picture of ordinariness and yet inevitability as well.
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As I read you , I hear it in my mind , Robbie. Thank you dear girl . Happy Sunday to you.
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How your mind works Yasmin!! This is so intriguing, I need to spend time on it.
You’re so inspiring!
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Thank you , Venessa.
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❤️🦋
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This is beyond beautiful. 💛
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You are too kind, Shantanu.
Thank you 😊
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My pleasure
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Beautifully written as all the poems of yours I have read till now. This poem has a pulse of its own, it flows, breathes and wraps you with all senses. I also want to thank you for taking an interest in my blog.
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Thank you so very much. I am honoured and delighted. It’s so nice to be appreciated for somethin you love doing. I am happy to be following your blog .
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Me too.
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😊🙂
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I really like this poem.
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Thank you.
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This is really beautiful!
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Thank you , Luisa.
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