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heartbeats collide

heartbeats collide
across time and space;
breathing the distance 
in a starlight song..
a dawn is born in the breath
that holds the heartbeat


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  3. You made me smile when you liked every recent post I made. Now I’m smiling even more because I found another poet in the blogosphere! 😉❤️

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  11. Oh my, Yassy, this is such beautiful poetry. It’s like you have captured the essence of life in so few words – words that leave the heart smiling. May all your nights be filled with those songs which breathe life into new dawns. Happy Thursday to you, my dear, dear friend!

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  13. An inspired closed rhyme response to your intensely profound poem, I pray forever a dawn is born, a breath a brand new day. Loads of hugs,
    Mick

    O Yasmin my dearest muse
    when heart beats collide
    inspired me I must advise
    such inspiration you infuse

    when heartbeats collide
    what err the barrier, love
    and the beating sun above
    it is how we humans survive

    ‘have a fear’, I say to all humanity
    as you fight amongst yourselves
    if you forget nature, in your hell’s
    she will indeed create a new reality

    no doubt wars add to world pollution
    including all its terrible aftermath
    yet leaders still have their hot baths
    pray one day we will find a solution
    © MET 17/66

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    1. My heartbeat collides with all with whom I connect with on WordPress. I love everyone here . I cannot do without you all ! You , Mick are my best friend. My best friend forever. Thank you.

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