I agree that sometimes poems can be a little too wordy. Sometimes it’s the simple ones that come across as the most profound. Something about the silence left out more than the garbage filled in.
It’s joy for me. I love reading anything that is beautiful, makes me think and can transcend me to the subject of the writing. You do that, so it is greatly appreciated on my end. 🙂
There you go again bring that smile to my face and my heart bursting with happiness and love :):) Biggest hugs to you lovely Yassy!!! Much love, and many, many blessing. You deserve them and much more!
Thank you , my heart is full ! You give me such a feeling of comfort. There is so much warmth and good will in the kindness of your thoughts. Thank you, Margaret. My angel fairy.
So no one has commented on this yet
Alright I guess I will😅
This was a cool haiku Yassy
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Thank you , cool 😎 shade 20! You are kind. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Anytime
Have a great weekend as well
Peace
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Peace to you too.
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Your poetry is always joy to read and thank you for your kindness.
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Sweet, to the point and so true!😊
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Yeah! Thank you 😊 so much , Elouise.
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I am very admiring of your cleverness with this poem, Yassy.
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Thanks much much, Robbie. I think you have raised the bar round here. Have a super weekend.
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I agree that sometimes poems can be a little too wordy. Sometimes it’s the simple ones that come across as the most profound. Something about the silence left out more than the garbage filled in.
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Yes, you are absolutely right about that , Michael. I totally agree.
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This stays with you.
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And too many layers of meaning to comment on. 🙂
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Oh yeah! 😒
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It says so much in few words. Succinct. 🙂
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Do you bail out on long posts ?
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For some I do. Haven’t bailed on any of yours, Yassy.
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Aw, thanks Simon !
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Even in the short verses, your words seems to soar the distances Yassy.
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I guess distances have just melted away.
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Even that was beautiful. ❤️
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Yo , really yo
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Really Ya 🙂
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Oh yeah !
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Yeah yeah👍
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🙋🏻
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🙆🏽
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Is that a hoodie
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Could be.
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What type of answer is that. A brain teaser?
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Could be. 😁
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What does that mean? Yes or no
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That’s a yes. 🙂
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Can do better! 🤔
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Can you? As in you can do better or can I do better to you? 😏
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Questions freeze my brain. 😰😨😱😥
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That’s the point. ❄️❄️
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Point taken point noted
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I noted your point and pointed it out and made a note of it. 🙂
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Clever ha ha
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Thank you much! I try. 😊
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You are welcome much !
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You are too kind.
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Very clever yassy. I enjoy your modern day takes on the haiku 🙂
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Thanks , Davy. I try to do it right.
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🙂
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😅
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Love this one!
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Thank you 😊!
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praying your inkwell never runs dry lovely 🙂
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Yes, thank you for that. Sigh 😔, it’s only poetry for me. Thank you for understanding.
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It’s joy for me. I love reading anything that is beautiful, makes me think and can transcend me to the subject of the writing. You do that, so it is greatly appreciated on my end. 🙂
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You have a beautiful mind and a beautiful heart. It’s the goodness in you that you see the good in everyone. You are a blessing , Meggy love ❤️
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There you go again bring that smile to my face and my heart bursting with happiness and love :):) Biggest hugs to you lovely Yassy!!! Much love, and many, many blessing. You deserve them and much more!
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Thank you , my heart is full ! You give me such a feeling of comfort. There is so much warmth and good will in the kindness of your thoughts. Thank you, Margaret. My angel fairy.
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