I set off on one of my dreams
under sunlight’s pale golden beams
meandering tawny meadows
looking for harvest gold rainbows
reflections in gurgling brooks, streams.
Trees preparing to bare their soul mm
cascading leaves, russet, brown, fold
to lay down a carpet of gold
a nip in the air warmness stole
nature hibernates as I stroll.
that was a fun thing about doing sunsets the past couple years. i got to see the seasons change day to day. i would be outside for a couple hours nearly every day no matter what the weather was. I would always dress for it but would still feel the cold and heat and whatever else. to me it is refreshing to be out during sunset.
beautiful autumn poem. i used to walk the woods daily at sunset for years and have that burned in my mind step by step throughout the year. the tall trees are so lovely with the sun setting through them. they knew me.
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I love the sunsets too. In fact I love everything about nature.
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i could do without the snakes and biting bugs. i am often nursing bug bites. that is one nice thing about winter. the snakes and bugs go away for awhile. at least around here.
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Reptiles creep me out , Evy. I run far from them lol
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I tell you what, Yasmin. Iโve just got back from watching the โ1917โ movie. It is probably the most complete cinematic piece Iโve ever seen across all genres, then some. WW1 backdrops of landscapes ruined by war. This poem of yours is itโs opposite. A landscape left alone the way it should be…like your poem is the counterbalance ~ George
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Sounds like a movie not to be missed .
Thanks, George ~~~Yasmin~~~
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โTrees preparing to bare their soulโ. The colorful festive season of Fall is what Iโm reminded of and how beautiful nature changes its environment for us. This poem was lovely Yassy and the constant flow of rhyme was like a gentle wind of undisturbed poetic leafs fluttering over the minds eye. Nature is you.๐น
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Your comment makes poetry .. Roy. , your comment is pure poetry …thanks to you sweet guy ๐
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You are so very welcome lovely Yassy, you are a true justice to poetry.๐น
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Thank you, Roy ๐ค
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You let the reader walk beside you and sense every sight, sound, scent, and savor that is a beautiful season. Very well written. Thanks for the stroll!
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Thank you,
Brad ๐
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So gorgeous Yassy. Your poem is the soul of a beautiful autumn.
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Thank you, G.
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My pleasure sweetheart ๐ค๐๐
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What imagery! I felt like standing underneath the trees with the leaves falling around me, as if in a celebration of life.
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Thank you, Sumi ๐๐ค I so appreciate your wonderful thoughts โค๏ธ
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So beautiful, your images are lovely Yassy, your poetry divine.
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Thank you, Holly ๐
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Itโs always my pleasure!
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Trees preparing to bare their soul – love it Yassy another beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Kate.
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Crazy beautiful, Yassy! Happy New Year and Cheers!!! ๐
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Thank you !! Happy new year.
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My pleasure! And Thank You!!! โค๏ธ
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The imagery in this poem is beautiful, Yassy. Happy Monday.
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This was lovely, Autumn is my favourite season, those lovely colours of the leaves that fall …
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Thank you ๐๐ผ
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You paint a wonderful picture of autumn.
Art
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Thank you, Lou๐
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Beautiful piece with wonderful details. Your writing is magical.
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Thank you very much, Lucy๐
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Hi Yassy, I hope you’re well. This poem is wonderful with its amazing portrayal of Nature.
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I am well, thank you.
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A great read – such rich language. Kudos.
—Denis
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Thank you ๐
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