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Click Net

a single mouse
rules the words 
breeding many more 
a mouse nets the world

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      2. Mynahs are my favourite birds. I looked after two but sadly they didn’t survive. They talk nineteen to the dozen. It’s very interesting that your grands had a mynah.

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    1. The moral of the story is you can’t underestimate the power of a mouse 🐭😜
      What a beautifully thoughtful comment from you .. you say the nicest and the bestest of things..
      I thank this tiny creature haha 🤣 that he gave me access to my Goddess Ka 💕

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      1. A very good, heartfelt, answer, but the question I asked remains unanswered. At any rate, as a lover of poetry, consider, if you don’t already know it by hearing it, Poetry inspires us, not really that we make it up, and there are always deeper and higher levels of being inspired by Poetry.

        I don’t know how to sound anything other than patronizing or condescending, and pardon me for that, but the biggest problem in hearing the inner word, when lines comes whole and ready-made from the silence, in that rapid, almost pell-mell way they come, is having to come up from the depths and record it, hence most present very short pieces of verse but ones stunning, as many of yours are.

        There’s a way to get around that and write longer poems if that would ever interest you, and no one need to tell you how; your own muse will when the time comes.

        What you are showing us is beautiful, in moments amazing, but consider also that maybe your muse is still under development and, as for the public it most certainly is, that might be when it’s more whole? But there’s nothing wrong with showing us your development, your experimentation, if you get what I’m trying to say. I think we all love it, those of us that read it.

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      2. My words come deep within the isubconscious of me ..
        I understand what you are saying, Donny.

        I used to write long stuff but life’s been tough and I don’t feel the inclination to write but I can’t give up writing because it’s deeply ingrained in me so what comes I put out here. I feel the need to write I am dependent on getting it out. But I have to feel it to write it.
        I get your drift and I am glad you talked. Takes one to know one .

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