Irises gleam
A moonbeam falls
Jasmines sashay
Scenting the air
Lush blooms bare pale
And flare in gloam
Crepuscule fire
Burns sapphire bright
Desire ignite.
# Than-Bauk
Irises gleam
A moonbeam falls
Jasmines sashay
Scenting the air
Lush blooms bare pale
And flare in gloam
Crepuscule fire
Burns sapphire bright
Desire ignite.
# Than-Bauk
yaskhan 
Amazing as always Yassy.
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I appreciate your constant support of my work. Thank you.
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My pleasure, you’re a fantastic writer.
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🙏
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That last line, Yassy… damn…!
~David
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Hell yes 😂.. !!!
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Splendid!
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Thanks , Poetpas!
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rare sashay
of jasmine-scented
sapphire flame
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Fragrant swathed
Hue flung flames
Sapphire born
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Air-borne scent
Falling moonbeams waft
Morning blooms
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Ambrose laden
Zephyr wrapped
Blossoms shape my gaze
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Carapaced
Amber glazed I gaze
Floral blaze
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Ditties sway
On nature’s arms
Blazing glory
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Nature’s arms
Surrounding rapture
Her eyes blaze
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Symphonic embrace
Rapturous music
Hearts aflame
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To warm hearts
Toasting Jasmine sense
Never far
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Heart warming
Quintessentially
a poetic rendering
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Inspiring
Floral hued sunscents
Bird music
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Evocative
Sparkling vibrant colours
A feast a fantasy
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ah… so very stunning, yassy 🤍
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Thank you , D.🤗
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always a pleasure 🤗
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A wonderful example of the form, my friend. You make this poetry thing look easy!
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Thank you , Brad. Than-Bauk is a difficult form. But i guess I just made it 😂.
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Jasmines sashay … nature dances for us in the breeze. I enjoyed visualizing your poem.
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Thank you my dear.
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Jasmine’ for sashy…..Wonderful and lovely and last line…Desire ignite….Amazing ‘n have a philosophical touch.Amazing wordings,my dear yassy!!Weldon.❤️👍❤️💞❣️💞❣️💞❣️
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Thank you so much 🤗❤️
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Reblogged this on richwrapper and commented:
You scribe such thoughts as would incite a burning in Salem, m’dear. Delightful, clever word-choices build the flames. Must share now. Be back soonest.
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Thank you , Richards. Appreciate your support 😃
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Beautiful imagery
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Thank you 🙏
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Dear Yassy, Will kindly pass me a comment. Thanks
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Oh yeah 🙂
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This is beautiful 💖
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Thank you , Venky.
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My pleasure
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